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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Maan n Geet;s won! Dev shocked! Hate him! Geet worried abt Maan! FB scenes were well incorporated! update soon!
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Destined Together


Last part- part II


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Thanks for all you likes and comments. I am very thankful to you all. I have read all your comments; I was overwhelmed by ur responses and increase in likes. But sorry I couldn't comment on your replies.i am in a hurry because of my cousins wedding. Here is the last part- part II. I have tried something different which I have never done that before. Hope you enjoy it.


By thinking all these incidents, Geet came to know that what she had for Maan was not friendship. It is love, true love. Finally she realized that restlessness which she felt when Maan was not around and jealousy when someone other girl touches Maan is all because she loved him. But she was too late to realize her feeling for Maan. Geet(st): I am sorry Maan. I thought what I had for you friendship but now I realized it is love that I had for you. She prayed to god, to give one chance, one last chance to express her feeling for him.


Geet reached the spot by 7.30 due to chaos which was created by bomb blast. When she saw the spot, her last hope of meeting Maan shattered. Blood was found in all the places with people crying for loss of their family members. She controlled her tears and made up her mind to find Maan. She searched for him everywhere but there was no trance of Maan.


1 hour ago:


Maan reached the hotel exactly by 6:30 pm. He was so nervous and at that same time he was afraid whether Geet will accept his feeling or not. He was checking his watch 100th time but still the clock showed the same time.

Maan(st): still half an hour left. What shall I do? What if, I buy some gift for Geet, so that I can gift it to her if she accepts my feeling for her? I think that's a good idea.

Saying so, Maan left to the near by shopping mall to buy some gift for Geet. Maan went from one shop to another but still he didn't find anything that will suit Geet. Feeling frustrated for searching for last 25 mins , he thought to meet Geet as it was already time. While passing to one jewellery shop, Maan found a beautiful blue and while diamond ring on the display.


When he looked at the ring, he thought it was made only for her. So he rushed inside and brought that ring for her.

When he almost excited that shop, he heard a hugh blast outside. Immediately he rushed outside to see what happened. He was shocked to see people running here and there. He asked one of the person who was passing by

Maan: sir, what happened?

Person: There was bomb blast in Royal Palace hotel.

Maan was shocked to hear that. He saw what was the time, it showed him 7.10.

Maan(st): what if Geet was there in Royal Palace. No no Maan. Nothing will happen to her.

He immediately rushed to the spot. Maan was shocked to see the hotel burning in flames. Police arrived and they blocked people from entering the spot. He tried several times to enter but all went in vain.

Maan(st): what if I check in the parking lot whether Geet's car is there or not.

He rushed to the parking lot but to his bad luck many cars too damaged, which made difficult for Maan to find out which was Geet's car. Maan had tears in his eyes as he started losing his hope of seeing Geet. He walked aimlessly.

On the other end, Geet reached the place and searched for Maan everywhere but she couldn't find him.


Present at 7: 45pm


While Geet was searching for Maan, she was a girl crying by laying a lifeless person in her lap


Women: Raj... pls...wake up... I know you will not leave me alone... Raj...pls... wake up...pls...look at me...


But there is no response from that person. On seeing this, Geet broke down completely on her knees. Tears started to flow from her eyes endlessly. She couldn't put herself in that situation, now all she wanted was to see Maan only once.


While Maan was walking aimlessly he was Geet crying on her knees while seeing a woman crying her heart out. The happiness that Maan had seeing Geet, has no limits . Tears started to flow , he immediately went near her and placed his hands on her shoulders


Maan: Geet...


As soon as Geet heard his voice , she came to know that it was Maan and she turned around


Geet couldn't believe as she saw Maan standing right in front of her. A small smile creped in their lips, seeing each other in front of them. Without wasting anytime, they both hugged each other and started to cry their heart out which eased the pain of losing each other. Feeling each other in their arm made them alive.


Geet with tears: Maan your ok right... I thought I lost you...


Maan: I am sorry Geet . I should have not called you to this palce. I am sorry. Sorry. What if, something happens to you.


Geet : I am nothing without you Maan . I cannot thing about a life without you. All I prayed for, was to meet you so that I can say what I felt for you Maan.


She broke the hug


Geet: yes Maan, I love you. I can't live without you. pls don't hate me for saying this.


Maan was so happy to hear this. He immediately hugged her


Maan: I love you too Geet. I am the happiest person in this world. I called you today so that I can say what I felt for you. but now, hearing from you first, I cant say how happy I am now. Wait a minute Geet.

They broke their hug slightly . Maan reached out to his pocket and took out that diamond ring. Geet was surprised to see that.


Maan: you know Geet, this ring saved me from being in this place while bomb blast happened. I was buying this ring for you from the near by shopping mall.


Saying so, he slipped the ring in Geet's hand. Geet became so emotional hearing that.


Geet: This ring is the best gift in my life Maan because it is not just the ring, this ring saved you from being here, it is ur life Maan. Now I came to know that we are destined to be together Maan. no one can separate us.


Maan: yes Geet.. no one.


After that incident, Maan and Geet shared this happy news to both rano ma and dadima. They are more than happy to hear that. This is what they always wanted for their kids. After 3 months, Maan and Geet marriage was fixed.


i am feeling sad it ended 😭. anyways, Epilogue will take some time.may be after a week or so. so pls be with me.


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Epilogue : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3259212/os-destined-together-epilogue-pg-76-dec-2


Edited by sweetysaran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome os
yes dey r destined to be together
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭😭 the story ended...pls try to update long long epi pls pls...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute & lovely update,waiting 4 the epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...waiting for epilouge...will miss it 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part
Maaneet together...me happy
This is the last part 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the story dear
loved the emotions
but feeling sorry it has ended so soon 😭
please come back with another one

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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional...tragedies bring out the hidden emotions and best in people...maybe because when u face tragedy, you forget your ego and render yourself in your own state...howsoever vulnerable it may be...
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow
ring ne mila di jodi
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