MAANEET FF Ek Main hoon aur Ek Tu#3 EPILOGUE pg62 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey friends me back 😛 finally my vanvaas from Maaneet FFs ends 😆 Thanks for supporting me and staying with me. Guys I have decided to update all my Maaneet fanfics one by one meaning I will first update all parts of Ek main aur ek tu and end this FF followed by BAHHG, TJP and Jaane tu 😳 MH has a lots of story left so I will resume writing my fav ff once I finish these 4 stories 😃 I promise to give a perfect end to all my fanfics and once I reach a managable ratio of ffs i will start with new Maaneet stories.


So Ek main will b ending in another 5-6 updates 😳 hope to see good support from you'll so that I can update the rest of the parts fast and give a perfect end to a perfect journey of Maaneet 😃


PART 20

Geet touched the locket of Maan possessively as she remembered his final words

"This is my lucky charm this will take care of u till I return back. U will always remain safe"

Geet ran like a maniac and switched on the TV

All her last hopes tasted dust as soon as she saw the footage.

The blast was of such a high intensity that the skeleton of the victims were also not visible

A journalist was reporting from the site

Journalist: Iss dhamake mein koi bhi zinda nahi bacha'yaatriyon ki list hum TV screen par dhika rahe hai. Laasho ki shinak karna toh lagbhag namumkin hai kyunki laash ke naam par bus rakh hi nazar aa raha hai. Marnewalo ke sage sambhandiyon ki suvidha ke liye yaatriyon ke naam se hi marnewalo ki pehchan ki jaa sakthi hai [No one survived in this blast. We r showing the list of the passengers on the TV screen this is the only means by which the relatives of the victims can confirm the presence of their close ones in the list of the dead people]

Journalist: The list is as follows

Geet eyes widened in shock as she moved towards the TV screen with trembling feet

The list was slowly getting populated according to alphabetical order

Her heart started thumping rapidly as the alphabet M came into picture

Geet stood there paralyzed for few seconds as the list crossed the name M

Nakul who was unaware of the whole chaos stood besides Geet and asked her

Nakul: Aap aise kyun khadi hai Madam? [Why r u standing like this Mam?]

Geet did not react

Nakul got scared and touched her shoulder with concern

Geet took the remote and threw it on the TV screen

Geet: Mere Maan ko kuch nahi ho sakta [Nothing can happen to my Maan]

These were the last few words that Nakul heard from Geet as without wasting a single minute Geet rushed out of the Mansion to meet her Maan'

Her mind was not ready to believe her eyes today; as for the first time her eyes had betrayed her by showing her the name of MAAN SINGH KHURANA in the list of the victims' MSK was dead

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O2NyZw_qW3A

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Lagta nahi dil kahi bin aapke

It was one of the hottest days of Mumbai and the love stricken Geet was running bare foot on the busy streets of Mumbai nonstop. Her expressions were an indication that her whole world had collapsed like the fragile house constructed with a pack of cards

Her swollen red eyes were a proof of her shattered heart and her bleeding soul which were in the verge of leaving this world but was surviving just with a small hope that before breathing her last she would be blessed to see her sunshine alive

She didn't bothered if this happiness of hers lasted for a short while but if given a choice she would love to die in the arms of her Maan rather than staying alive like a living dead with the news of his death

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

The busy streets of Mumbai had adorned a veil of terror and panic. The roads leading to the airport were jam packed with heavy traffic but Geet continued running with a hope that was dying numerous deaths with every approaching and trembling step of hers

Her mind was dominating her soul and her shattered heart; being a journalist she knew that chances of such news turning fake was like dreaming to walk in the sun without getting burned but her love for Maan was such that she wanted to take this chance

She was determined to get her Maan back or else ready to breathe her last at the place where she would find the last traces of the man who was an inseparable part of her soul

Destiny was cruel but love could ignite a sparkling lightning even in the darkest thundering cloud

Kaise kahu bina tere zindagi ye kya hogi

Kaise kahu bina tere zindagi ye kya hogi

The soft delicate beautiful feet of hers that was one of the precious gems of Maan's paradise were now experiencing the cruel torture of blazing heat waves

Her beautiful arm which was always decorated with the signature of Maan's lips were now adorned with enormous bruises that were bestowed on her due to her rash running and accidental contacts with vehicles and sharp instruments

She didn't knew when her duppata escaped her folds and became the carpet of the dirty streets of Mumbai such was her condition

Her breathing became uneven as she reached the airport; the security officials were not allowing anyone to enter the area.

To bring the situation under control the officials had sprayed tear gas and were retorting to lathi charge forcing the huge emotional crowd to stop their advancing steps

Jaise koi saza koi baddua hogi

Jaise koi saza koi baddua hogi

Without thinking twice about her own life Geet moved towards the area of the blast

The tear gas couldn't challenge the painful intensity of her bleeding heart' She pushed every individual those who were coming in front of her

She was badly injured but her love for Maan was giving her a strange strength; strength to fight with destiny till her last breath; she knew if she had to die today it had to happen only after seeing the face of her Maan

Some of the lady officials noticed Geet while she was trying to enter the blast site; the lady cops surrounded Geet and tried to push her in the opposite direction but Geet did not allow them to dominate the intensity of her love even for a second

Maine kiya hai ye faisla jeena nahi hai tere bina

Whatever little physical strength her collapsing soul possessed she utilized it in her favor and continued to walk in the forward direction

When one of the cops tried to stop her by holding her leg she landed on the floor with a great height that injured her chest seriously

This pain of her lifeless body was nothing compared to the hurricane of her sinking heartbeats; she dragged her lying body with a great effort her trembling hands were a proof that if she didn't get to see the light of his life then the existence of her shadow will also vanish from the serenity of this world

The cops were dragging her feet in a backward direction but she continued to fight for the survival of her love

Finally the officials realized the stubbornness of Geet and decided to hit her with the lathi and force her to stop her advancing steps

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Lagta nahi dil kahi bin aapke

Geet's body was now losing hope; the physical pain was now dominating her mental stability' she was finding it difficult to breathe and she knew her last time had arrived'

For one last time she took his name and confessed, "I LOVE U MAAN'" saying so she raised her hand in the direction where she could see the remains of the blast

The officials thought that she was once again trying to break their rules; left with no choice one cop raised his lathi and was all set to attack Geet'.

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Jeeye toh jeeye kaise haye bin aapke

Geet closed her eyes and decided to bear this physical pain and requested God to end her life with this one powerful stroke'. She was waiting; she knew the cop had already raised the lathi to attack her but why was he stopping himself from attacking her' Why? Was destiny so cruel that it was ready to gift her death when she didn't want to survive in this meaningless life?

Her question was answered by a loud thud sound; the murmuring conversation of the onlookers that followed was forcing Geet to open her lifeless eyes

Her soul got a new life when two strong arms cocooned her in their strong embrace' his fragrance was giving the essence of life to her breaths; his protective warmth was nursing all the wounds of her shattered heart' the touch of his lips on her forehead erased the traces of the evident death mark from her destiny

Her soul recognized him perfectly; she was sure right now she was where she always belonged to in the solace of her Maan's arms; yes her Maan; the love of her life was here besides her

She allowed the curtains of her eyes to part and the moment the light of his face got scattered on her angelic face she knew destiny had blessed her with the most precious gift that she could ever dream of

Maan: Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri Geet ke upar lathi se vaar karne ki [How dare u to attack my Geet with the stick]

The fire in Maan's eyes was such that the cops found it difficult to face the roar of this lion

Maan: Meri Geet ko aayi har kharoch ka jawab tum logo ko dena hoga agar koi insaan musibat mein hai toh uski help karni chahiye naaki unpar hamla; bada raub haina tumhe apne iss vardi par ab dekhna iss vardi ka galat fayda utane ki saza main tum logoko umr bhar dhilata rahunga [You'll will have to pay heavily for every minute injury of my Geet; if a person is in problem it's your duty to protect him but here you'll are hell bent to snatch the life of an innocent soul; Just wait and watch I will ensure to bestow you'll with a severe punishment whose duration will be a lifetime so that u will not even dream to use your police uniform in any wrong means atleast in this lifetime]

Geet caressed Maan's cheek lovingly thus forcing Maan to look in Geet's direction


Maan: (tensed) Geet tum thik hona dekho tumhara Maan tumhare paas hai bolo Geet jawab doh' [Geet u r alright na? Look your Maan is here besides u tell me Geet pls answer me']

Geet: I love u Maan' I love u

These were the last few words that Maan heard before an unconscious Geet garlanded his arms'

PRECAP: Tujhse mohabbat ho gayi allah maaf kare [ I have fallen in love with u may God forgive me']😳

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Guys hope to see the same support and love that u showered me b4 I took a break from Maaneet ffs; I may update tomorrow or even tonight if the response is good. Stay with me I promise I will never betray you'll

Love- Divya (aka Piya)


PART 21: Page 34


Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update😊
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww Piyu...that's terrific update...👏
poor Geet ...haiii she was so tensed when heard about the blast...her heart stopped beating...all she could think was Maan and rushed to the scene...arghhh those cops...how could they hit...I am glad My hero reached on time and protected his Geet...loved the way he yelled at them...awww so my kudi said those three magical words before collapsing in Maan's arms...waah bhai waah...can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was amazing.. bilkul filmy style..
No more proofs r needed for her undying love..
Maan's entry was just awesum..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Missed u dear and ur updates it was really amazing and awesome and waiting for the next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏 👏
Geet shocking and the way finding maan ..well written⭐️
Loved geet confession..Superb😳
Precap amazing
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update after a long time but loved it waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update poor geet she knew he could not be dead loved how she raced their not thinking about her own safety and rush to meet and find him and those officers need a few good kick how dare they treat a person like that awesome update loved it beautifully done loved that maan reached thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
heart touching update
beautiful song
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM

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