NEW MG(SS):ISHQ[part2-jan17th]

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Hiii friends..me back again with new ss..dont be confused me matlab MONA again😆
hope you all would like it me *fingerscrossed*😕

ISHQ

The feeling that can happen in a second but lasts forever...






PROLOGUE

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A young man in 20's stopped his bike at a playground where few boys were playing cricket..He stepped down from the bike n asked one of the boy there"where is yash??".He pointed his finger towards yash who was practicing.


guys he is yash😃

He picked one of the bat lying on the ground while walking to him n hit on his waist hardly with bat which made yash fall on ground wincing in pain.

-------after few hours-----

A police officer entered the ward in hospital where yash was sitting on bed leaning against the bed.The man who entered the ward slapped yash hard..

"how long you'll be doing such things ha??u r my son that doesn't mean that u'll misuse the freedom I gave to u'I gave u good manners since childhood but u never were ready to adopt them..you forced me to hate my own son..how long u'll commit mistakes n use ur father's name to escape from them??

I already gave u so many chances but not anymore now..dont show me ur face again till u leave everything..Jab tak tum ye sab chod nahi dethe tab tak tumhari shakal mat dhikana muje..Good bye!!"he roared on yash n stormed out from ward.

Yash sobbed silently feeling hurt.More than his wounds his dad's words gave him pain.

Meanwhile,Dev,yash's friend entered the room.."yash everything is over now!!asmi ki shaadi ho chuki hai..you cant do anything now!!"he said sadly..Yash fumed in anger n he immediately got up from the bed even after dev's refusal..

They drove to function hall where asmi's wedding took place..Yash walked to the board where it was written ASMI weds PRITHVI.he fumed in anger n said asmi gritting his teeth..Asmi''''.he screamed in anger.

---after Few months---

At Delhi Boy's hostel:

Everyone is busy in their respective rooms packing their bags as they are to leave to their homes.They completed their exams and ready to leave to their respective homes.

Meanwhile,two boys were thrown out from the room along with their luggages n door was closed with a bang.."arghhh..what do he think of himself??"

"ha yar'ye toh apne aapko hero samjne laga hai..isko toh mein chodunga nahi"

"oh really??shall I come there??"a voice came from inside the room..

"No Maan I was just saying that maan is really a nice guy n I cannot leave him"he said smiling at his other friend sheepishly who looked at him angrily..

"hmm that's better"maan said from inside..

they picked their luggage n started walking outside the hostel cursing him under their breath.

"iska toh kuch na kuch karna padega yar..ye maan apne aapko samajtha kya hai??"two guys were walking out cursing maan..

Meanwhile,two bikes arrived there n the group of boys started walking inside.."hey dude how are u??"

"iam fn yar tu kesa hai??"he wished that guy..

(guys they wont come after this part so iam not naming them)

"how was ur exam??"

"yeah it was good"he said..

"btw where is maan??"one guy asked other who was passing from there.."in his room"he said..the guy along with group of boys walked towards maan's room holding hockey sticks..

The two boys whom maan threw out saw this.."shit!!"they said in unison n ran to his friends room.."hey guys comeon come on we got a golden chance..ganesh n his gang came to beat maan..common guys we wont get this chance again..chalo hum sab maza lethe hai"he said n his friends excitedly walked towards maan's room.

Ganesh n his gang reached maan's room n started knocking him no no almost banging it'"oye maan khol darwaza aaj tu bachega nahi..sale darwaza khol"he started hitting the door with his leg as maan is not opening the door.

"chalo darwaza thodthe hai"they said n started hitting the door more hardly n finally succeeded to break the door.

They entered the room n is shocked with the sight they were welcomed..Maan hanged himself to fan with a rope..

Everyone's jaw dropped down in shock..

p.s:this ss is based on telugu movie

so how is it friends??tell me whether i should continue this or not..
me waiting for ur response

love u all🤗
-mona


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-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this fab pro dear maan hanging on fan kya hora hain waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congozz kiddo on new ss

hmm i think its gonna be funny ss

i feel ermm maan is fooling .. like playing pranks !!!

will wait to see whats in store

cont soon
Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting maan on rope why
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intro mein hi jhatka...
Maan is TMK in this ff, i think...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intro mein hi jhatka...
Maan is TMK in this ff,
i think...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi congrats on the SS !Y no pm> ? Superb start! Well written! update soon n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Liked Yash's introduc.Felt sad wen he was hospitalized & hurt by his dad's words.Who plays Asmi?What happened 2 Maan?Y did he try 2 commit suicide?I hop he escaps.Or was it a prank?Bcz he was like a hero wen he was introduced.But now...plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue yaar.plz continue soon

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