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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi frnds
have completed the part...its 1500+ words more I guess
editing now😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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editing complete...plzz check pg 6 for full chapter 69😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashuvar

hi...actually i read all the 67 parts of this FF in one go...and i should say i loved it thoroughly...awesome awesome...not even a sigle bit was boring...esp the way geet handled alisha was wow wow...terrific snd ultimate part...


thank u so very much for liking it

but one thing i want to be clarified...y u made everyone to hide everything from geet...isnt she the most sensible one here...isnt she the one who realised tat she LOVES maan at the age of 15 itself and was even confident abt her feelings tat it s def LOVE wer as maan thot it was a desire and strong attraction at the same age(15)...tat was even proved in this alisha fiasco tat how confident she s in their love...but y maan s always keeping her in dark...

yes, its true geet has always been confident about her feelings, but maan has always kept geet's safety and innocence above his every desire. He knew geet felt for him when she confessed and even before after noticing her changing attitude, but he didn't wanted to rush things...firstly bcoz geet is too precious to maan...his passion has the intensity to harm her even at the age of 15 n being the more mature one, he knew people feel attracted in their teenages. So he wanted geet to become a bit more mature to understand her feelings completely. In real life too, how many teenagers can actually differntiate between actual love and infatuation. In geet's case, she has never bothered to notice anyone after maan as her love had been growing with age. So u see maan had to give her some space to make her own choice.

In alisha's case, maan was drugged. He couldn't think straight after he woke up that morning and first thing he felt was his betrayal to geet. He had once hurt her in her childhood though unknowingly nd always feared to cause her more harm and n ow, when things looked that bad to him, he couldn't help but feel himself a threat to her. And in that turmoil, he took the worst decision of his life, i.e, to call of their wedding. But later he realized he the gravity of the situation and acted accordingly...like collecting facts to prove himself innocent, convincing mohinder and then trying to woo geet back.

even tat sandy matter maan said after her being stuborn to know wat is troubling him...y?y?


in case of sandy maan knew the he was a great danger to geet and he could have never let anything trouble geet's carefree life. If a sweet innocent girl is suddenly made to realize that a psycho rapist is after her, what would be her reaction and maan didn't wanted to make her mishty scared. Though she is a sherni, but she still is like an innocent baby, who has not actually seen the ugliness of life and maan was just trying to protect her.


even tat vicky didnt say his feelings to geet??????????? didnt geet tell all abt her to vicky first then y not vicky????????? he told his bro abt his feelings towards a new girl and tats y maan was able to find out abt vicky_sneha...orelse even he wouldnt hav noticed..maan giving tat no one noticed..blind .reasons...all tat s not acceptable...


yes, vicky is at fault for hiding such a big thing from his childhood buddy and he will have to make efforts to please her. But he didn't intentionally hide it. His proposal came out in the flow of his act and and all of a sudden. he would have definitely talked to geet before proposing sneha properly.


maan always make geet lost in his passion...i accept she s crazy abt him but still !!!!!!!!!!! i accept maan s the hero...but i feel even geet should also b as clever as him...even the last dialogue of maan was naughty n cute but in tat serious scene...hmmm?????????...if i was geet i could have NOT taken all this maan hiding vicky hiding..!!!!!!!!!! even sneha thot tat geet's way of thinking abt vicky is wrong geet s wrong??? is nt geet who was with him from his childhood...


sneha didn't thought that geet is wrong. Actually she felt herself responsible for getting vicky in the wrong light...what I mean to say is at first geet thought that vicky had played a prank at sneha by saying ILU as a part of game and sneha didn't wanted geet to think bad about vikcy in that sense coz she knew he was not playing around. Geet only realize their hidden love story by her convo with sneha after coming back to the villa...and it was not maan's part to tell about vicky and sneha to geet after all vicky is geet's childhood buddy n he didn't knew vicky would hide it from geet and confess to sneha all of a sudden.



errr i dono whether im making sense or not but plz try to understand...but plzzz dont take this comment as a rude one...im just crazy abt ur ff...tat i was thinking abt all this issues in my lecture period n i just want to let out my thots to u...to be short i want geet to b quite emotional fOr all this hide n seek tat has been played around her and palying(sneha past) around her...


okay, I have not at all taken offence, so chill😆...I like it when readers point out flaws in my story n I always try to mould it accordingly as I m not a professional. Its just a hobby...so even if I commit blunders, I always hope to be pardoned😆...n I'll try to satisfy u from geet's character with coming updates😊

sry for the looonnnggg comment😉

would love to have more😉

Edited by shining_moon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Ahaan wat a update loved it
so vicky sneha sorted out der prob.. Hope sneha will open up her past soon to vicky
maneet moments r awesome as always...
Amazing update in all
cnt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ossum dear
love the whole update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part..
Loved d way maan made geet understand his point
vicky got a slap from his doll but still nt budging to apologise..
Maan asked for forgiving vicky..what will be his 2nd wish.?
Vicky n sneha sorted out things b/w them..n they r bck to normal..nice..
Geet removed d ban from endearnments usage..maan will get her back soon..
Adi breaked their eye romance:-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vicky sneha mu cleared maneet scenes fab



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update ohh i loved it how maan used one wish to saved from devil geet but not for him and reasoning is prefect ..waiitng for next update to c ow story progress
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful part...
Both love bees r progress...
Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love vicky and geet's relationship...

waiting for more maan and geet moments and I hope mishty soon forgives her dust dananv 😛

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