@You & Me...One on One@(MG)ff~10~...new link @151 - Page 5

part 69 first half
awesome part dear...
Vicky and Sneha
poor Sneha...
hope Vicky will understand her and get to know her past and support her...
and Vicky well he has Maan to make him realize...
Geet Maan
OMG she slapped Vicky...
and Maan hes too cool yaar...
and now only Dev is only left and also who is the confused soul...
cont soon dear...

good that Maan didnt say anything to VIcky abt Sneha.. hope VS talk to each other and get it cleared..

awww loved it ! update soon next part !

superbbb...will be waiting for other half to comment properly...

Originally posted by: shining_moon

hi all

have started writing the second half...its so irritating to write the same thing again😡

so it may take time, but I'll definitely edit it tonight😊...a bit late though

love

anupam

superb

doll-cum-tyson😆

hi...actually i read all the 67 parts of this FF in one go...and i should say i loved it thoroughly...awesome awesome...not even a sigle bit was boring...esp the way geet handled alisha was wow wow...terrific snd ultimate part...
but one thing i want to be clarified...y u made everyone to hide everything from geet...isnt she the most sensible one here...isnt she the one who realised tat she LOVES maan at the age of 15 itself and was even confident abt her feelings tat it s def LOVE wer as maan thot it was a desire and strong attraction at the same age(15)...tat was even proved in this alisha fiasco tat how confident she s in their love...but y maan s always keeping her in dark...even tat sandy matter maan said after her being stuborn to know wat is troubling him...y?y? even tat vicky didnt say his feelings to geet??????????? didnt geet tell all abt her to vicky first then y not vicky????????? he told his bro abt his feelings towards a new girl and tats y maan was able to find out abt vicky_sneha...orelse even he wouldnt hav noticed..maan giving tat no one noticed..blind .reasons...all tat s not acceptable...maan always make geet lost in his passion...i accept she s crazy abt him but still !!!!!!!!!!! i accept maan s the hero...but i feel even geet should also b as clever as him...even the last dialogue of maan was naughty n cute but in tat serious scene...hmmm?????????...if i was geet i could have NOT taken all this maan hiding vicky hiding..!!!!!!!!!! even sneha thot tat geet's way of thinking abt vicky is wrong geet s wrong??? is nt geet who was with him from his childhood...errr i dono whether im making sense or not but plz try to understand...but plzzz dont take this comment as a rude one...im just crazy abt ur ff...tat i was thinking abt all this issues in my lecture period n i just want to let out my thots to u...to be short i want geet to b quite emotional fOr all this hide n seek tat has been played around her and palying(sneha past) around her...