MG Untouched Desires#2 (Thread 3 link on Pg 149)

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

amazing update

maan n geet r both connecting to each other

n maan has started craving for love n care

she called him MAAN wow

update soon

waiting eagerly

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

loved it maan ne pasta khaya

geet she was teaching maan to make books lol bt cute

maan was laughing dat means he is changing good

do update soon

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

waiting for the next update ... its first time i got to comment here .. loved the plot of your story ...an arrogant maan getting to start feeling the loving warmth through geet ... its early to say the feeling is "love" but expecting it to be one sooner .. with the arrival of warden again , am very eager to see how the story unfolds here after .. continue soon ...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

wer z today's update???

waiting ...

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goldrush

@goldrush

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

very niceee FF👏liked it😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

no she is not going to that orphanage even if all is well
hello they are having so much fun in km
warna maan bechare ki care kaun karega itni
awww she made him a card with her own hands bless
well what else can she do after this is the best way right
he really craves for some love and warmth huh
wonder what else next
will they be separated then hope not
cheers for pm

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Superb & lovely update.
The way Maan feels his family in Geet is too too too nice.
Very well written.
The relationship maaneet are sharing now is so poetical. Loving it so much.