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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

loved the part

looking forward for their progress in their relation

continue soon

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Oh...it was awesome...luvd it very-2 much...

everything i luvd about the update...

dammm dat vehicle horn...jiske wjh se hmare maaneet ka itna sweet moment tut gya...grhhh

n dat kodak moment...dat was awesome...

plzzz maaneet ka lunch hotel m...plzzz...plzzz...

n thnx a tonnn...n loads of hugs 2 u...for update...

plzzz continue soon...

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I really loved d way maan tried to know abt geet's feeling.Then d way geet stopped maan fm saying sorry and sweetly agreed is fab.

And abt d question u ask----i think u can pace up d story a lil bit fast wid more dialogues.

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Awesome update
Loved it
Would loved to c Maaneet opening up more to eachother...
Show or share feeling... They have...
Love ur writing dear u doing great work...
Eagarly waiting
Continue soon

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

nice update
and congrats for new thread
continue soon

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deepthich

@deepthich

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

wowww.. again a lovely update... ❤️

liking the way they are getting close to each other... but MAAN ko aur kitna time lagega GEET ke pass jane me?? i mean completely vuse accept karne me??? i want to see them coming close... but i know we have to wait for that... 😒

anyways update bada awesome ta... MAAN GEET se baat karna... aur GEET ki blushing... hayeee...

wowww... MAAN kissed her hands... hmmm... slowly improving... first cheeks then hands... me waiting for lips... 😉

waiting for their lunch date... 😳

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

nice update

d way of writing is ok yar

d pace is ok, not dat slow...

love it

continue soon

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Nice part full of maaneet.
Wow!
Loved it.

I didnt get d last note which says geet will talk wen cums to her senses????means???

Speed of story is gud,jus apt bt ya sumtimes things r explained more than required n in a way repititive.

Waitng fr nxt.

Precap se already daraa diya hai.

Also want more scene of maaneet n them wid their son.

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Awesome..beautiful update

Loved it very much

aww maan want knw more abt geet

finally they r cuming close slowly

eagerly waiting for next update

continue super soon

Thankx for the PM