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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So finally the real madhubala is exposed,waiting to know the secret.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok so geet is possessed????

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Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...yayyy...we were right...it was geet...cant wait 4 maan 2 read da book...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mysterious...like bhool bhulaiya...bt lil different
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Awesome part Jasmine.
Its just as I had thought...Like Bhul Bhulaiya with a few changes here and there...
But still very interesting and very gripping..and also a refreshing change from the normal love stories...
Pls continue soon...
Waiting anxiously to read more...
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Great update👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4 is nice ...thxs for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice, lovely part
it's so unexpected twist
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Posted: 12 years ago

The Palace of secrets Part 7

I thank my friend Ratna for making this banner for me


As you all think this SS is not based on Bhool bhulaiyya,Chandramukhi & Manichitratazhu.Aaptarakshaka only gave me the inspiration to write this SS.But this is not based on Aaptarakshaka also.Though like Bhool bhulaiyya,the dancing girl is the heroine,the story is different.Flash back will also be different.Believe me like the heroine of Bhool bhulaiyya Geet is not a mental patient here.










Flash back'

King Rameshwar was Aloknath's cousin brother.
Once a beautiful South Indian dancer Madhubala danced before him .
'Raa raa sarasaku rara
raa raa chentaku chaera
praName needira aelukoraa dora
swaasalo swaasavai raa raa ..'

Rameshwar was impressed by her charm and magical dance.
Then the dancer Devendar joined her in dancing.

'thom thom thom
thom thom thom
aaa...dhiranana...aaa

nee pondu nae kouri abhisarikai naenu vaechaanu sumanohara
kaalana marugaina aananda raagalu vinipincha nilichaanuraa
tanana dhimta dhimta dhimtana ||3||
vayasu jaalamopaleduraa
marulugounna chinna daanni raa
tanuvu baadha teercha raavera...raavera
sala sala ragilina paruvapu soda idi
tadi budi tadi budi tapanala swaramidi
ra ra ra ra ...
raa raa raa raa

laka laka laka ...

ae bandhamo idi ae bandhamo
ae janma bandhaala sumagandhamo
ae swapnamo idi ae swapnamo
nayanala naDayaDu toli swapnamo
virahapu vyadhalanu vinava
ee taDabaDu tanuvunu kanava
maguvala manasulu telisi nee valapunu marachute suluvaa
idi kani vini eruganu valapula kalayika
sarasaku pilichiti nirasana tagadika
jigi bigi jigi bigi sogasula moravini
mila mila magasiri merupula meriyaga
ra ra ra ra ...raa raa

Thaam Tharigida Dheem Tharigida Dhoam Tharigida Nam Tharigida
Thatha Tharigida Dhithi Tharigida Thoam Thoam Tharigida Nam Nam Tharigida

Thaa Dhee Dhoam Nam Cham Cham
Thaa Dhee Dhoam Nam Cham Cham
Thakita Dhikita Thomkita Namkita
Thaka Thaka Dhina Thaka
Thatha Thalaangu Thoam Thatha Thalaangu Thoam Thagadhi Thalaangu Thoam
Thalaangu Thaka Jam Thadheemtha Naka Jam
Thalaangu Thaka Jam Thadheemtha Naka Jam
Thalaangu Thaka Jam Thadheemtha Naka Jam''(Chandramukhi).

Rameshwar was disturbed by Madhubala- Devendar's intimate dance.
He praised Madhubala:Fantastic dance Madhubala.Even the the dancers of heaven are nothing in front of you.
She became very happy:Thank you ji'
He presented her a box of diamonds.She was surprised.
R:You can be the permanent dancer of my palace.
She was surprised as she considered this to be a golden opportunity.

Later Rameshwar brought a proposal to her parents.They were surprised as a King wanted their poor dancer daughter to be his wife.They were grateful to him.But Madhubala was shocked,she could'nt believe that it was reality.
Later Madhubala met Rameshwar.
R:I am so lucky to get you Madhu'
M:I am sorry Maharaj'I am in love with Devendar.
Rameshwar felt that his head was spinning.

Present'

Maan:Did Rameshwar separate Madhubala from Devendar?
Aloknath:No.He was too nice to do that.He loved Madhubala sincerely.So he wanted her to be happy.He decided to unite them.

Flash back'

Rameshwar tried to control his emotions.
R:Don't worry Madhu.I won't force you to marry me.
Madhu:Thanks a lot.But my parents won't accept our relationship.They are dreaming of our wedding.
R:You get ready for the wedding.But on the mandap,it will be Devendar,not me.
She was very happy.

Wedding day'
Madhubala got ready for her wedding.She looked like a Queen in her bridal attire.She was very happy as she was going to be her Devender's wife.

But to her shock,she realized that it was Rameshwar on the mandap,not Devendar.She was numb due to shock.Rameshwar was not able to face her.She could'nt react when Rameshwar married her.

In the bedroom'.
Madhubala sat on the bed.She was shattered.
Rameshwar felt sad seeing her in this state.
R:I know that you are angry with me.But believe me..i did'nt do it purposefully.
I had decided to unite you and Devendar.For that I went to his house.But I found her with another dancer girl.He was cheating you.He does'nt deserve you.That's why I married you.
Madhubala lost her control:How dare you say that my Devendar was cheating on me?You were cheating me,not him.You trapped me.
Rameshwar was upset.He did'nt know how to make her believe the truth.
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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