maneet-ss strangely in love#2 pt16/17/18pg 95DEC23

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Beautiful part.

New morning came wid new hopes
For Maan. He is feeling so fresh today
Aftr waking up. Geet's presence did
A lot to help him. She made his day
By her sweet small smile.

Maan again getting lost in her simple
Beauty. Geet taking good care of Maan
Frm his coffee to breakfast.
Sad Remembering her joyful days wid dad.

Maan instantly liked her coffee. Dadima awed
By her care n concern n guilty of her act.
Hope she talks to Geet n apologize.

Maaneet in office. She is recovering bit
As she is no more numb.
Both taking care of each other

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hari21

@hari21

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

amazing part 😊 if u dn't want to continue this ff nymore no pblm dear. but strt a new ff... i love ur stories... just dn't stop writing😊

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

best part of this ss till now di

i dont mind it being short

but you made me turn into a big smily face

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

awesome update
loved it 😳
waiting to read teh next part😃

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

wow lovely update didi.. te way my maan sleeping on his geet , and had a peaceful sleep was so lovely, te way geet doing every thing for my maan and he loves it was so lovely.. te way geet preparing breakfast, and accompany him to kc , and ordering coffee was so cute show her wife duties towards my maan..yes dr was correct te thing which keeps him away from drink will stay with him forever, tats his moon.. she is his only medicine which cures him physically and mentally..te way my maaneet cares for each other show they pure love..yes my buddhu maaneet will soon realizes wat place they have in each other hearts..i love te update so much didi.

for te note, why didi, ok u want to finish , ur ends but not in hurry...we are they to support u didi...

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-gurtimaniac-

@-gurtimaniac-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

lovely update dear 😊

finally MAAN hv a peaceful sleep wid GEET but wid without his drink

the guilt which MAAN was feeling had been cleared by GEET n he is taking precaution in taking any further step towards GEET as he is already had fallen for her but not yet properly realised his feeling for her n term tht only as attraction

they r on a understanding term n also care for each other but they does not realised there feeling for each other but there action r speaking it

hope DADI mu wid regard to GEET also clear as early as possible

waiting for the story to be unfold

please dont end this ss soon, i know how it feel when the suspense part is our, but please modify it n contd

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Nice part..Both care each other..
What happen that I don't know but I hope you don't end SS..

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

aww ... Lovely update dear

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

dears,

for some reasons,i want to finish this ss..when i started this it was totally a different concept..n i made all turning points in my mind till end...the persons close to me know the knot of my ss..but now i really feel disappointed as per knot i hv to go by my way i thought only..already 1 issue made me dishearted..dont want to make another issue..i think my bad time is running on..so i will finish this ss soon..bcoz i dont want any of my works to be discontinued.if there was no power cut problem i would have finished this ss by now..now too i dont want to go fast..but i cant with my disappointment..i dont want any issues..so i am giving u short updates..n will finish this asap..

Valli,

I am a big fan of your writing and anxiously wait for all the updates.

But I disappointed with the above note.

I think that the readers who like the works are idiots and who have issues are some kind of lords.

One criticism and everybody either wants to end or stop writing or change the story.

If you have thought of a concept and 100 people like it, then what is the issue.

You think the ones who press like either lack morals or dont have the brains to judge a story.

I am not asking you to continue with this story but just write the original story you thought of and which we were excited to read