FF: Jab We Met #1 - PART 1-9 :) THREAD 2 added! - Page 87

Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-

Gawd.!! Maaneet and their nonstop bickering🤣🤣

They will never change...yet they are so dreamy

Sameera is scaring me.! Hope she doesn't Hurt Maahi...

I have a very strong feeling that Maahi is Maans daughter...without him coming to know of it ...

Maaneet ki Maahi

Running to the next thread...dying to read more😳

Originally posted by: prettyji

very nice

Originally posted by: zaaratq

res

Originally posted by: zaaratq

First of all jaana, Im sorry...😭 Im sorry i didnt read your FFs earlier... 🥺 Im sorry i took long to read...😡 Im sorry I took longer to comment...

to hell with all the sorries 🤔

But now that I am done reading the first 9 parts😃, just wanna let you that you write sooo well👏, im so proud my twinie is a talented writer..

that is so wonderfula a comment jaaanaaa ❤️

.😎 Im in love with this story❤️ and yeah Maaneet are so magical in FFs as well!!! I love the choice of words, the subtle emotions, everything is brilliantly described here...👍🏼 And the characters are perfectly etched as well😉, how we get to know more about them as each part goes by..

i feel like a queen like a princees... u made me feel special jaaanaaa 🤗am just so happy u loved my work... i cant express words fail to ocme out this instant 😆

.😊 On the flipside😔, i think your parts are way too short...😡😒 I atleast need an hour episode daily...😆😉 So you should work on that...

u want long updates... jaana i cant assure u that.. am writning like 4 Stories,,... and cant do justice to all by writing long ones u know how lazxy ia m 😳

😉 Also, there is a problem with the flow in each chapter... Like when Im reading, Im not sure if Im reading about geet or sameera...😕 You get what I mean??🤔 Overall, this is a awesome piece work and i pray this talent of yours will be widely recognised... Love you loads jaaanaaa...❤️🤗🤗

love u loasdsss i really want u to point the flip side cos i want to develop myself to write endlessly for my maaaneet ❤️

Now coming to each part... Ill be rating each part with stars...😳😉😛

OMG !! am blushing,.. dnt be harsh 🤣

Part 1: Maaneera & Mahi.K😳😆

Awww you made my Maaneera married??😲😉😆 As you already know from my live updates yesterday, that maaneera were my third fav couple after maaneet & maantara...😳😆 But of course u made me hate sameera on first chapter itself...😡 Did i ever mentioned to you that my concept of vamp of the show=vain & cold...😳 So yeah you made her vain by that "sleeping with mask"...😲🤢 Ahmmm why she needs a mask to sleep with??🤔😵 cos she has stupid face???🤣🤣 Somehow she just appear cold "VILLI" to me...😈 Oh well...🤔 And awww Maahi❤️ I know she is Maaneet's angel...😳 I know... Bas, i know she is...😆😉 And i love you made Maaneera married but they are NOT in love...🤪 I love the cold-towards-each-other Maaneera... Cos Maaneet can be the only one who can be in LOVE with each other...☺️

My Rating : ⭐️ X 5 ----> Awesome start Twinie!!!👏👏

u like maaneers😡 , i know that , it was plain disgust for me to digest that😡! sleeping with the mask wasnt that cute jaaana🤣!!! yes she has stupid gace how better else can i put it...

bas u know she is maaneer's angel, jaana this is crazy, i dnt watn u to jump into conclusions like this... yes i love u tooo 😉 yes cos Maaneet can b the only one who can be in love with each other n what 5 starsss⭐️

Part 2: Meet - Maan, Geet & their Maahi.K😳

Yes, i strongly believe she is Maaneet's combined product...😆🤣 She has hazel eyes like Geet and has a calm & composite nature like Maan...😉😆 Bingo Bingo Bingo..😎*I want the triple chocolate donut for guessing this right*😛 Maan is the Mr Perfectionist Khurana...❤️ Awww!!! And shooot😵 he is Boss of Khurana Motors??😲🤣 Why Motors??🤓 🤣 And he loves pasta!!!😲 wow no prize for guessing that right!!!😡😆 And and and as usual Adi in his usual "hanuman" character...😆😉 Maan is such a straight strict boring guy...😡🤔😵 Awww Geet...🤗 I think past chapter i never really talked abt her...😳 But awww😭 the way she tries to fix things in her broken life😃 and how she helps to dress her Maahi.K for school...😆 I love her motherly fears😊, and as always Geet is the strong iron lady!!! Perfect match for Maan... Maaneet!!!❤️☺️ And she felt so bad for her Maahi.K because she don have a ma(a)n whom she can call "PAPA"...😭🥺 Maan, Geet & Maahi, this is what i call a complete phamily...😊 My dream team..😃 Maaneet & their Maahi Khurana!!!❤️

My Rating: ⭐️ X 4 ---> minus one point for such a short second part... 😡😛

u r guessing too far jaana😆... but i dnt watn to disappoint u!!! u will get donuts if u r tright 😡

Motors, cos i wnated it to be a bit different 😆 hanuman adi 🤣 u lover her motherly wasy,.. omg u r yet to witness it fully😭! Phamily is what she dreams off😉!!!! n u cutiing starts for writing short parts... u r so bad i tell u... 😲

Part 3: Maan, the social activist & Maahi, his sweet angel - Jab They Met

Yayyy🥳 U let Maan & Maahi in the third chapter itself...😃 Kudos to you for that... I love their meeting... How adorable that Maahi started her tantrums... 😃And awww affcourse Maan will feel different towards her, he will melt towards her, because she is his angel, his baby, his sweetheart... 😳And grrr that teacher or prinicpal whoever she is, how could they be so rude and make Geet uncomfortable???😡😡 Maan a social activist but who cant prepare speeches??😲🤪😆 Oh Maan... I love this side of him... You know jaana, I hate preparing for speeches also...😆😉 And awww sweetheart supports education?!!!👍🏼❤️😃 Blue tooth Blue tooth Blue tooth, ZINDABAAD!!😆🤣 Maan love for bluetooths, even i cant explain in words...😆 Almost every story i read, Maan has his bluetooth on... And awww noo😭 my heart broke🥺😭 when Geet meant that Maahi.K K is for Kuch Bhi Nahi...🤢💔 And Maahi is 3 years old??😲 Isnt she too young for school??😲🤔

My Rating: ⭐️ X 3 ---> short part again...😭 and Maahi is 3 years old??😲 tech mistake...🤔 But i can give u 🤗 for making Maan & Maahi meet in this chapter...😃

jab they met❤️.. hayee... u churofying my titles!!! his angel his sweetheart... jaana plz dnt dream much i dnt want to shatter u but u know i cant shatter u after all we r twindsSS😳!! lolzz we all hate preparing for speeches itsl liek an inbulit caharacter🤣! oh jaana , i havent read an FF with bluetooth os far, that is y i used it :P 😲 K khuch bhi nahi yes jaana its that way.. and schooling apatrt i think we discussed over FB! 🥱

again just 3 stars.. u r a monster i tell u!

Part 4: Geet - torn between priorities & Maan - mesmerised by Maahi

Awww Geet Geet Geet!!💔 Damn this gal can really make me cry...😭😭 I feel so bad for this gal now...🥺 How broken she was when she saw her angel injured for the first time...😭 It also her first time isnt it, on reacting to the physical pain her daughter felt...😒 And Maahi is super adorable... I LOVE HER, BAS!!❤️ I love how she soothes herself over her mummy's pampering..😃😉 I rmb when i was young even i would purposely cry louder, so my mum would pamper me..😉😆 The feeling is unexplainable...😳 Im sure Maahi enjoyed the attention...😆😆 UFF my heart failed me when Maan called her Maahi Maahi Maahi, and that he is enjoying Maahi's presence in his life... She is special to him in one meeting!!😲 Wow, the magic of blood relation...😉 And OMG Maan & Geet are business RIVALS??😲 And Maan didnt make it??😲🤔 Shit, don tell me he is gonna explode??🤔🤣

My Rating: ⭐️ X 4 ----> longer part, but you made me cry so one mark minus..😛😉😆

i thoughtu love me bas. nut u r seeming to flip your love.. this is so not right jaanaa,.. ucant love maahi more than me i, object in al lways!!! n i knwo how much a pamper tantrum queen u r!!! u dreaming maahi maahi in nore than one ways jaana... i know i too felt sad n bad while writing this part... i mde u cry so 1 less start u r a vampire i tell u sach mein...

Part 5: Maan vs Geet 😲 💔

🥺🥺🥺 No words to say... Im helluva caanphused 😕😕 over the bid scene... So who is buying whom?? Who is the winner?? I need a huge explanation in detail here...😡 So Geet knew Maan before?? Isnt that why she is angry? But Maan wasnt.. Why?? Did i miss something??🤔

My Rating: ⭐️ ----> Gimme the explanation & ill give u your stars...😈

jaana i gave u d excplanation right be happy !!!!! 😉

Part 6: Who is Miss Handa?😕

Okay Im assuming they were NOT rivals...😉 ( u still have to clear the part 5 ) So that means Geet got angry because Maan made her a fool by making her wait from morning... 😡😡 Awww he deserves the chillipadi Geet...👍🏼 The way she told him off!!! 👏 Hawww how i love it when my maaneet are behaving like the tom & jerry!!! 🤣And Maan, he said he hates latecomers🤪, buddu wasnt he late for the meeting also?? Stupid idiot...😆😆 And hahahahahaha!!!🤣🤣 oopps Geet made a mistake by shouting at Mahaan Maan...And awww Adi & Geet...😳 How is it that i love them in FFs as well...❤️😆 Baap re!!!😲 Adi called her Mrs HANDA!!!😲🤣😉🤣 Adi very bad...😡 She is only Mrs Khurana or Ms Handa...😳 Mrs Handa, how can she become that??😆 And yeah so she is KM now...😊 I need to start taking KM as Khurana Motors and NOT Khurana Mansion, cos i know it will sound weird to see Geet already in Khurana Mansion... 😆Made sense??😉😆 Che, first day of work and NO CONFRONTATION yet??😡😆 I love their nok-jhoks so badly, i know im hopeless in that sense😆 And OMG OMG OMG😲 Sameera & Geet bumped into each other 🤣and Sameera knew Geet??😲 That means Maan knows Geet??😲😲 Geet was Maan's past??😲

My Rating: ⭐️ X 5 ----> all stars for the last part... Even though it was way too short😡😡 but the last part more than made up for it... You know na, im a sucker for mystery.. Now the interest level in knowing who is Geet, its awesome feeling yeah!!!😃😆

ok so now the stuff is cleared hope i dint make ur brians lot😆!! maaneet here are dittio like tom n jerry ❤️u have to read it furthetr to witness urself!!! uu calling maan stupid n idiot😡, this is so not done! Mrs.Handa. i know u must have fallen off the chair with the thought... and adi tho will reamin adi inn all his foolish ways🤣! yes KM is dfd office!!! sam n Geet... jaana just wait :P

sucker for mystery i nknow!!! 😉

Part 7: Sameera Ek Liar Ek Clown😆

Wahahhahaha what a start!!!👏 🤣Sameera rolling and Adi catching!!! 🤣🤣Where is Pinky to feel jealous over this tamasha??🤔🤪 OH!!! 😲Adi carried Sam??😲 And handed over to Maan??😲 And Maan carried her??🤢🤢 Maanu feeling guilty for nothing!!😡🤢 SAMEERA!!! How dare she?!!! How dare she lies she IS PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲 I was almost disgusted that Maaneera made love...🤢😡 Gawd what kind of woman she is...😡😡🤢

My Rating: ⭐️ X 4 ----> I know u had difficulties updating longer part, so i let u off..😳 I loved the first part so ALL four stars for the first part...😃 One star down for Sameera being pregnant part...🤢😡

shes a clown u will know that preety sooon😆!!! u wnat pinky.. dnt u think u habve enough vamp in the show right know🤣!!! how dare she lies... wait jaana u will know is all that i can say!!! how can maaneera make love plz not even in my nightmares plz.😭...u picking out my stars for sam fake pregnancy thing am telling u🤢 , u are no better than a werewolf 😡

Part 8: Maan, the poor thing!!😈😆

OMG😲😆 So Sameera wants a khurana heir???🤣 Damn!!😆 And awww i love Maan vs Sameera here...😈 love how Maanu strictly said he wants a REAL khurana heir...😳 Which is Maahi Sameera is such a planner man!! Kya baat hai!!👏👏 But she is gonna fail badly now... Cos Maahi is Maaneet's baby... And hawww maaneet fight again!!!😳 Poor Maan pehle Sameera and now Geet...🤪 And Geet toh is like electricity!!! Pataka!!🤣 And omg i love the last part when Maan left the office... Wahahahahahah🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

My Rating: ⭐️ X 5 -----> FULL STARS FOR THE LAST PART!!!🤣🤣🤣

u love maan vs sameera... wowo... u will love d FF then in future too!!! Maahi a heir,... Jaaan u r exaggerating !!! 😆 electricity... 😳 he left the office... he is so damn cute i just love it too!!!!!!!!! 5 stars for maan leaving office?? u r avamp i tell u, u want him to leave Geet n go ????? 😡

Part 9: Maaneet and The Liar Sameera

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG☺️ Maan first romantic counter with Geet!!!!☺️☺️ something like in GHSP first office episode... Hayeee And Grrr Sameeera i swear if i could, ill enter the screen and KILL her... B****😡😡 And Sam knows abt Maaahi, OMG OMG this means she will know Maahi is Maaneet's baby!!!

My Rating: ⭐️ X 5 + ⭐️ ----> 5 stars for the Maaneet moment... *kisses* and one more brownie point for the PRECAP...👏👏

Roamntic encounter 😆 u r dancing with the romance thing or dancing with sam knowing abt maahi haan .. u r such a dunn owhat to say❤️!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!! i louve u immensely in all possible virtual ways 🤣

So here you go, I have updated my "res" post... 😉 Now i knw you be so happy with the length and it took me alot of hardwork as well...😆😆 So ill be mean and say, ill read your next parts and will update on MON...😈😆😉 Now don be angry, but I can only update when I have computer and net and at home i don have it.. And since i have it in my office, ill update from there...😳😉 Now i expect a longer reply!!!😈🤣

Love you Jaanaaa🤗

intro nice

but maan married

P1

Maan sam have differences

and Maahi i guess is Geet's kid

p2

nice read of both their lives

p3 interesting

Maahi K for ❓