MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 10 - Page 50

Not fair Ritzy...

itna sweet update and itna choota, i mean i just started reading it... ke abhi suru hoga and here you are villian who ended it.. not fair at all..

very bad, you care only of your nazu heart and not of your readers nazuk heart...

Well it was indeed a very sweet update... ek apna pan tha iss update me... emotional love and care of Maan for Geet... the show that she is someone special in his life...but abhi abhi to suru hua tha...

well ritzy, let me tell you the truth, it seems to me that Maaneet story have just started and have just started to bloom, so how can you end the story when it has just started... itne achche acche updates, jinka main wait ker rahee thi has just started and you are planning to end it...

Nahi yaar really think about what i am trying to say... Not in Epilogue but in proper updates, maaneet story need to go ahead... how their relation bloom.

You write Maaneet so well, so don't stop here.Abhi to bas background bana hai, you need to show their relation now.

Hamare nazuk dil ka bhi khyal karo.

and along with it post new FF too...anything from you I am ever ready to read

hey

what ur ending Vivaah? no u cant do this plz dont end this so soon just now their love story started plz dont end :-( :'(
lovely update poor Sasha continue soon

small n sweet update..
really loved it...
feeling bad u r ending vivah FF,but also happy that u r starting new FF.
so i can enjoy it too...

cute and small update.
you are ending it di 😭😭😭😭😭
will be waiting for your new FF's.

I just love this new found Maan, who is far more jovial !! you know something, u really need not end this FF😉

Awesome update as usual 😛
Geet was so cute in office 😛
Maan's lovey dovey avatar is 😳
That black wall n a pond sounds amazing 😊
Really really sad about Vivah coming to an end 😭
Anyways watever yew say !