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Posted: 12 years ago


bus thodi der!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

nice teaser..
may be he is doing this to get some space from her...and to understand what he actually feels without her..hope so..
waiting



where are u sweety??😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

di sach much mein sorry😭iam angry on myself😡 for commenting late..sacch iam feeling bad but i was not feeling well so i was not allowed to come ol for long😭
ha ha geet talli n bechara maanu😆but i loved this update a lot di
oops!!maan ko pata chal gaya na angad kripa couple hai ab geet cant make him jealous
ha ha geet ko itne saare baatein aathe hai😲😆 algebra n all😕
di sacchi bol rahi hai muje toh abhi bhi kuch samaj mein nahi aaya what seh was saying..last over six n all sacchi iam not getting..o kya hai na mera gk kuch zyada hi low hai😆
anyways maanu ko toh mushkil horaha hai use sambhalne mein but he was guilty for what he did😭👏but not intentionall na😳
haila twist😲kounsi twist kesi twist???😕
hope maan wont go away leaving her i mean in guilt that he touched her like that when he was drunk..n ha use wapis jaane ko na kehde😭
pleej di aisa twist mat dena😭
cont soon..
iam sorry for late again😭



meri jaan its ok apna khayal rakho ill send u a pm explaining the meaning of it thik hai 😳 love u 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS SO MUCH GIRLS🤗
Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 21:

Early in the mrng geet woke up, her head was aching badly due to the heavy drink she had last night. Geet cud hardly remember as to wat happened last night. She got up the bed, took her mobile to check the time and a text from maan asking her to check out the paper he left on the table. Geet's heart started to beat widly expecting something serious. She took large steps to reach onto the letter, opening it geet stood rooted as those were the feelings maan had for her!!!

Geet,

I donno how wud u feel reading this letter bt trust me its hard on my part to decide this maine realize kiya ki tumhare kareeb rehke I am hurting u. I cant control myself from drinking. My dad was a Casanova, shaan bhai and me started to drink during the stage of teenage, there is nothing to do with simran in my life maine khud usse doori rakhi thi kyunki sab log even dadima used to tell me that I neva loved her. I used to feel as if I am too trying to pass my time having simran with me, and it was neva true. I only drink coz I got used to it since a long time, tumhare meri life mein aane ke baad I cud stop myself from drinking aur rahi baat second hand wali I still laugh abt it. I donno wat was it that u had in ur mind and u said that u had few misunderstandings which got cleared with time, dadima was right it was just an infactuation for simran, with u I donno I feel like touching u, I loose my control on my senses and unintentionally I come close to u and hurt u. Last night I understood as to y u said that I was wanting u to come with me to ghats. Bt believe me I did not touch other girls neva!!! U were neva second hand geet and cant be even. Sometimes I feel I don't deserve ur love, u always speak out wat is in ur mind, bt for me I still cant make out wat I feel for u. Mujhe thoda space chahiye geet to understand ur locale in my life. I am leaving to ghats without telling u for few days. Jab main wapas aonga tab tak main bataonga ki wat are u in my life promise. Ill be back after 10days, hope ull wait for me. Ill definitely miss ur besharmi jiska doosra naam beinteha pyar hai mere liye!!!


Geet cried clutching onto the letter shedding tears... dus din maan?? How am I to stay with out u?? I cant maan!!! I just cant!!!


Those five days of hell for maan and geet:


Geet:

Sitting in a corner of the room she promised herself that she will give maan the space he has asked her for!!! Geet took the saree from the wardrobe, caressing it she remembered wat he did to it!! he mercilessly removed it from her body and threw it away just because it was revealing. Her days went thinking abt the things he did with her!!! geet went to the office as she made out that she cant stay back home, which only remainds her of maan, her maan!!! She was engrossed in the world of sorrow sitting in maan's cabin, his chair wen dev entered the room, he smirked at lost geet.... geet!!! aise yaha baithne se kya hoga?? Maan toh tumhe chodke chala gaya shayad koi aur mil gayi hogi first it was simran now its u then next pata nahi kya hoga!!! Mere paas ajao jo maan tumhe nahi de paaya woh sab tumhe mujhse milega..... shut up dev apni jubaan peh control rakho, maan ke baare mein kuch kehne se pehle socho phir kuch kaho, I am warning u stay away from me warna maan tumhe nahi chodenge, saying this geet came back to the mansion. Angad saw geet sitting in a corner, he caressed her hair... kya hua bhabi?? Tum aise pareshaan?? Tumne meri aur kripa ki prblm toh solve kardi hai. U made everything fine between us kaash I cud do something for u and maan, lekin tum aise kone mein baith jaogi maine socha nahi geet.... toh main kya karo angad?? He wants space kam se kam yeh baat unki mujhe maanna padega na??


Angad smiled..... geet u have waited for five days its enuf tumhe bhi toh pata chalega na ki maan ka haalat kya hai?? I know where he is exactly, ill drop u to ghats ek baar tassalli toh ho jayegi tumhe maan ko dekh ke, kya pata maan bhi tumhe milna chahte toh?? I know he loves u just that he is not confessing it

Maan:

He reached to the ghats for the inspection of the construction work going on there. Though it was a hectic schedule maan cud find geet everywhere, her innocent smile, her hazels, the lush hair, her scent, her seductive looks. It got normal for him to go for work come back at night. Though maan wanted to drink he cudnt as that remainded him of geet. He missed her antics so much. To overcome from the thoughts of geet maan worked even more, his work of 10days got completed almost in 5days. Can this be love?? He questioned himself!!! He cudnt reach to a conclusion!!!


The sixth day angad dropped geet at the hotel where maan was staying. Geet excitedly came out of the car, she hugged angad.... Thanks so much angad tum jao ill manage maan.


Maan was at the attached restaurant to have his food. Angad reserved the neighboring room of maan to geet. Geet too was hungry so she went to the restaurant where maan was having food with a girl along with her mother. Maan was having a tuff time with the lady and her daughter bt the lady was dadimas frnd and the girl is her granddaughter. She is trying to impress maan since long time. Geet was searching place to sit while her eyes fell on maan who was sitting beside a skinny girl who seemed like a model to her. Her eyes popped out coz of shock. How dare he??


Geet(st): dekha babaji inka kaam yeh tha issi liye mujhe chodke aagaye!!! Main bhi dekhti hoon ki yeh itna sweet sa dinner kaise enjoy karte hai


Geet smirked with the thought that rose in her mind. She walked towards the table where maan was having his dinner. All of a sudden maan felt a hand on his waist, he chocked his food and the two women jaws fell looking at geet sitting so close to maan. Geet rested her head on maan's shoulder ..... aap yaha ho maan?? main aapko kitne dino se dhoond rahi thi pata hai??? geet said patting maan's back.


Maan: tum yaha kaise?? Wat are u doing here geet?? he questioned her in frustration while geet was enjoying the irritated looks of maan, she decided to tease him further.... Arey!!! Jaha aap waha main, maan got up the chair .... I told u already geet I want space!!! Phir bhi tum yaha aagayi ho!!! Just leave he declared bt geet was adamant, she sat as if maan's words were going dumb on her ears..... fine I am leaving saying this maan tried to leave wen the set of words geet used shocked him....dekhiye aunty mujhe bin bya {marriage} maa banake chodke jaa rahe hai!!! geet said it crying while maan closed his eyes frustrated with this drama of geet who was smiling internally with maan's plight, to fuel his anger she continued holding him... plz mujhe mat chodiye mere bache ka kya hoga maan??


All the hopes of the elderly women and the girl went in drain listening to wat geet said just now, bt to their utter shock maan lifted geet into his arms and walked away towards his room saying..... ab jhoot kaha hai toh main usse sach karta hoon geet chalo ready ho jao bin bya maa banne. Jab tak subah hogi tum pregnant jaroor banadonga bohut betaab ho!!!



I feel I can count on the girls whose jaws fell at maan's line!!! after all he is msk kuch bhi kar sakta hai haina??? 🤣abt maan's love for geet it shud be special na toh ull have to wait for 4more updates as it will be diff sabr ka phal meetha hota hai have patience!!!


Precap: nahi dongi!!! Chalo get to work 200+ likes now on this update I planned a twist on this part bt thoda wait karlo for next update thik hai girls


arthi,sia ILL UPDATE HUSH DESIRES{NASHA} TOMORROW THODA KAAM SE GOING OUT!!!


mona ill pm u the meaning love u jaan


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 20

NEXT PART:


PART 22

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for comment girls😆
EDITED
me 1st yayyy dhinka chika
😡wait of 3/4 updates😡
awesome update, MSK ji to geet jaisay hogayae BESHARAM😳😆

Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gonna Read it Later... bt Thanks 4 the updt... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg omg...
amazing update love it...👏
1st tym maan opne up 2 geet...😊
he share hiz feelngz..
datz a positive sign...
love da letter scen...
uff 10 dayz ki doriyyaa...😭
ye dev ko mai ek bht zor se lagana chahtii ho... cheapo...😡😡
angad n geet scen wa also g8...
so geet chalii maan k pass...
haayee...
worng tym pe entry geet ki...😛
hahahahhaa... geet n us ki harkate...😃
chalo ready ho jao bin bya maa banne. Jab tak subah hogi tum pregnant jaroor banadonga bohut betaab ho!!!...🤣
hahah cn't stop my laughrt...
maan n us k beasharmii k dailoges..
kam blta haii bt jb bolta haii tu sb k munh band hojata haii...
eagerly w8ng 4 next...


Posted: 12 years ago
speech leesss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
WAITING 4 GEET TO BE PREGNANT BY MORNING

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