MG OS: A COMMITMENT epi 1,2/59 complete - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome OS.. hope Maan & Geet confess their feeling for each other.. & little angel wil recover soon

thnx for pm.. waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update.loved maan and shruti bonding.continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wao wao Suhaana what an update its really awesome to read and the flow in which whole story is moving is awesome I m loving it...dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, shruthi nd maan bonding is very gud.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely shovely cutie update 😃
loved maan here 😉
precap wala song is my Fav 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fantastic update
liked a lot
very nicely written
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice
loved the bond betn shruti and maan
precap sounds interesting
waiting desperately
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN MADE FRIENDS WITH SHRUTI AS HE COULD SENSE HER LONELINESS
AND GEET WAS SURPRISED TO SEE THEIR CLOSENESS
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Posted: 12 years ago



friday night it's party time
feeling ready looking fine,
viene diego rumbeando,
with the magic in his eyes
checking every girl in sight,
grooving like he does the mambo
he's the man there en la disco,
playing sexy feeling hotter,
he's the king baliar la ritmo ragatanga,
and the dj that he knows well,
on the spot always around twelve,
plays the mix that diego mixes con la salsa,
y la baila and he dances y la canta

Aserej,je ja je je jabe tu de jevere sebiunouva
majavi an a budui an a buididip (x3)

many think its brujeria,
how he comes and disappears,
every move will hypnotize you,
some will call it chuleria,
others say that its the real,
rastafari afrogitano

he's the man there en la disco,
playing sexy feeling hotter,
he's the king baliar la ritmo ragatanga,
and the dj that he knows well,
on the spot always around twelve,
plays the mix that diego mixes con la salsa,
y la baila and he dances y la canta

Aserej, ja da je da jabe tu de jevere sebiunouva
majavi an a budui an a buididip (x3)

A nananananana naa
A nana naa nananana naa (x2)

Aserej, ja de je de jebe tu de jebere sebiunouva
majavi an a bugui an a buididip (x9)
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Posted: 12 years ago




A COMMITMENT

PART 5


A child needed a love to be felt deeply and warmth that could make her fall asleep that she was getting unknowingly from maan…. Geet tried to protest but maan with his one eye gesture stopped her….. assuring her to BELIEVE HIM at least this time…..

Geet : but….

Maan: believe me geetika …..

Saying so they left …..

Geet couldn't say anything the bonding she was seeing was no less than any miracle… shruti and gelling up with maan was a rare combination but now seeing maan behaving as a total over protective for shruti is something she is feeling somewhere insecure about the strong bond that she is seeing can actually make shruti more depressed if maan leaves abruptly….

She is having a fear in her heart that the little baby heart of shruti will be broken if somewhere in some point maan had to go away from her..then how will her little baby be gonna take this… the insecure feeling that geet was feeling was justified somewhere but she forget that sometimes trusting someone didn't actually harm ..she actually forget that maan will only the one who will help to make her baby alright… she will be alright just with maan's help … he will be the one who will operate upon her….

Geet : babaji please don let my destiny to play anymore with shruti ..i way I lost everyone..please don't make her loose maan… somewhere the love and attachment I saw today in his eyes couldn't be denied that it was more than for patient … babaji maan is trying to tie shruti in a new relation please don't let him break my shruti … I know at every next point of our life relations tends to leave us and which left us further shattered….

Here maan was carrying shruti in his arms who was not at all aware where they were heading to… but shruti didn't even asked that made maan curious… this was actually quite unexpected but children of her age are more attentive and concious of what they are doing where they are going…but shruti was not … she was just paying no attention so in order to make her open with him..maan started the convo…

Maan: so bff do you know where we are going…

Shruti looked at maan with her big doe shaped eyes…

Maan couldn't help bu let out a small chuckle seeing her … she was indeed his geetika's neice.. she was staring just like her…

Maan st: I think she has inherited her doe shaped eyes from geetika and that glaring too…

When she didn't answer… maan and shruti who are already in the parking lot ..he opened the passenger seat and made her sit and tie her seat belt… he look that shruti was looking at the music system ..but not doing anything.. he had expected her to touch the things but to his dismay she was too lost in her own world… even at a point maan thought that it will be difficult for him if she didn't react normally…

Maan : you like music shruti….

Shruti looked at maan..and nodded …

Shruti: and dance too… shruti loves to dance but geetu didn't let shruti….

Maan new that geet must be scared with the pysical activity like dance can create problem like increased breathing and in her condition she needed to be handle with care…. She was no less than a glas doll now who are at the mercy at the hands of her doctors….

Maan : so which music…

Shruti was excited to listen….

Shruti: barbie doll…

Maan was seeing her wide eyed how he was supposed to have I AM A BARBIE GIRL…. And now his bff wants the to listen the song..and to his luck krish ( his nephew) is not fond of girly songs except one which he always listen to annoy his dearest chachu ….

Maan : sweety I don't have your song but let me check one… I think you will like this one…

Maan quickly searched all the cd's and searched that one special annoying song that now he is going to play for his bff… he just wished that his bff will like that song….

Maan inserted the CD …and here the song played.. he was observing each and every gesture of his geetika's neice who seems to be enjoying now….


friday night it's party time
feeling ready looking fine,
viene diego rumbeando,
with the magic in his eyes
checking every girl in sight,
grooving like he does the mambo
he's the man there en la disco,
playing sexy feeling hotter,
he's the king baliar la ritmo ragatanga,
and the dj that he knows well,
on the spot always around twelve,
plays the mix that diego mixes con la salsa,
y la baila and he dances y la canta

Aserej,je ja je je jabe tu de jevere sebiunouva
majavi an a budui an a buididip (x3)

many think its brujeria,
how he comes and disappears,
every move will hypnotize you,
some will call it chuleria,
others say that its the real,
rastafari afrogitano

he's the man there en la disco,
playing sexy feeling hotter,
he's the king baliar la ritmo ragatanga,
and the dj that he knows well,
on the spot always around twelve,
plays the mix that diego mixes con la salsa,
y la baila and he dances y la canta

Aserej, ja da je da jabe tu de jevere sebiunouva
majavi an a budui an a buididip (x3)

A nananananana naa
A nana naa nananana naa (x2)

Aserej, ja de je de jebe tu de jebere sebiunouva
majavi an a bugui an a buididip (x9)

( ADDED MUSIC TOO IN THE THREAD )

Maan : so you like it….

Shruti quickly tried to jump in his arms and kissed his cheek that was rare … he never expected this type of reaction from shruti…. He just took her in his arms and hugged her….

Shruti listened to just one song whole way… the entire way one song that too most annoying but the way she was listening..trying to dance he knew that shruti needs care just love that her litle heart is yearning …. And the care wth medication will make her alright….

After thirty minutes both of them entered KM ..shruti in maan's arm ..she was feeling sleepy and tired … so resting her head on maan's shoulders….

Someone saw him coming and rushed to him..running at a jet speed…

Krish was so excited seeing his chachu after twenty four hours… so he left his dinner in between and ran to maan…

Maan couldn't help but to smile a laugh mutely seeing his nephew….

Maan: champ slowly …. Kahan ki train pakadni hai…

But krish was loud enough to wake up shruti….

Maan: shh champ slow princess is sleeping….

Krish tried to look at the princess his chachu was addressing …and shruti quickly looked ahead only to see a boy may be of her age ..looking at her intently…

Krish: princess.. you brought a princess for me….

maan was not getting what to do… here shruti poked him on his shoulder to put her down….

And he just oblized to her demand…..

Shruti to krish..

Shruti: I am shruti no princess…..

Maan kneeled down to their height…. And introduced both of them….

Maan: bff he is krish….and champ she is shruti you know my friend geetika's neice…

Krish smiled widely ..he got a partner to play and too a princess..his little mind and heart has accepted shruti as the little princess ….

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Precap: same…

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