ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 36

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Geet in Maan's room...
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Part 28


Maan was coming back from wherever he was, with the thought of meeting Geet again, as soon as. Every single moment was killing him being far from her. He had not seen her since last night when this should have been their special day today. After confessing their love, it was the beginning of their love life but here, both were far and was restless to see each other, to meet each other. "geet I want to see you, abhi'' he thought and turned car to her home.



Geet was humming, was literally dancing all over in Maan home to do everything. She was making his favorite dishes. Everything doing with lots of love and with a sweet smile on her lips . How maan will react to see her , in his house was giving her goosebumps. She did decorated home with new curtains which she found in his wardrobe. Changed cushions covers, bedsheets everything like she was changing, turning his home into her shade.

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Maan reached to Geet home. With thudding heart he rang bell and wished umpteenh times to be it Geet, who open door but for his bad luck, it was Mohindar.



"Aree Maan beta aap?'' He asked seeing him this time in evening.



"Ji wo actually I had to meet Geet. I forgot to give her some important information about meeting , we have tomorrow. Well, I was here to meet Adi so thought to meet Geet as well'' He tried to make his statement logical and fund Mohindar got convinced. He signed, greeted him and hesitatingly entered inside very curiously looking for, her. In a very thought he guessed, she was not there. Her smell, her aroma from air was vanished. It was nothing there which could give him a ting of happiness because he knew, his Geet presence was away form there.



"But beta Geet is not at home. She will be with Pinky''



Now it became impossible for him to spend time with his racing and disappointed heart. He could not concentrate on what Mohindar was asking. Somehow he managed to reply few questions and hurriedly, stood up.



"Wo uncle, I- I have urgent work, I should leave''



Mohindar surprised seeing this stammering Maan but thought, it may be something really urgent and nodded. Maan greeted and came out almost running, sat in car and rested his head to seat-back. He tried, patted his heart to be calm little which was being stubborn to come out any moment. He finally decided to call Pinky. (he had her number, since bet thing he had arranged everything related to Geet)



Pinky mother picked phone and told, Geet had not come there. Now Maan became furious. He called Geet. He had been trying umpteenth times but always , it was switched off. This time it connected.

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Geet phone rang. She run to find it. She found her bag on sofa and took out phone. Her eyes became big and heart shrunk seeing Maan name flashing on screen. With vibrating heartbeats she lifted phone to ears and spoke



"Hello,, Maan !''



"Geet where are you'' he tried not to be anger or show his impatience but, it came out in form of loud shout.



"Maan.. wo I am with Pinky'' she lied.

"geet dont tell lie. I had called Pinky and you, are not there. Where the hell you're damnit!!!'' he yelled.



Geet got scared. After thinking a while she told everything. "Maan actually I'm at your place'' she said, weakly.



"What!!'' maan shocked then surprised when she told , she wanted to give him surprise. Maan felt a strange shiver in his body like tickle. Geet was at his home, giving her surprise was made his heart jump in joy and body, silent, numb. As fast as he wanted to reach there, fly there to her. First time he really wanted to go his 'home'. He rushed to there.



Geet was feeling like she was dying in joy. Maan was coming, made her thrilled. She looked herself "Omg Geet look at your dress. Bhutni lag rahi hai puri ki puri'' She run to washroom and cleaned her dress. She washed her face and started drying with towel, was hanging beside. She looked towel, it was of Maan. She shied. Hide her face in it, it has smell of him. How easily she was using his home like she possessed him, made her die in blush. Somehow she mananged to make her proper. Last time she checked everything and came out, in garden. Sat on swing and started, waiting for him.

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Not passed hardly half hour when maan, was there, in his home. His eyes were impatiently looking for her. He found her bag was laying on sofa, like she had accepted this place as her own. He found it purely satisfying. He searched everywhere inside. Everything was different, new and changed. Every passing time was making him more concerned. His eyes was wanting its peace of sight and he found. He found her sitting on swing, waiting for him and him only. His eyes started to pour shower of love which was collected till now, inside. He stepped to her, stood near, behind of her. He bend, brought his face near her ear and blew, warm breath of him. He kissed there, to claim his prasence in her life. She shivered in reaction. She closed her eyes to welcoming him, in her heart.



"geet!'' he whispered. She did not reply. He came to her side, sat close. She was guessing he was there, was smiling on her. She smiled in reply knowing he, may longing for it only. He held her chin, brought her face nearer. Brushed his lips on her and looked her, to want her permission. She was lost, did not give response but a sweet, slight smile carved her lips and he found it, her agreement. He covered her smile with his..



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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lovely update lovu...sweet n cute romantic update tha...its was very beautiful ek dusre ke liye etna bechain hona ...when will they meet...wanted to surprise each other😃...lovely...first kiss after confession hayeee😉...w8ing for more😉😳
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago

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