ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 17

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Part 22



Flashback


Maan eyes felt relief . He smiled slightly which gone unnoticed by all . He was lost in her trance when mohindar declared .. " geet and rahul ki shadi me aapko bhi aana hoga '' maan shocked..



He did not guess it was coming, in fact could never guess. Not even when he played bet on geet and not now. She was only mine and now, will be forever. He dint say a word. Looked geet who was equal shocked as him. She was looking him as " I swear I dont know anything'' she saw his eyes were turning red. She nodded no . her eyes had truth. His eyes lessened its stiffness looking her pale face. She was verge of crying. She wanted to run and hug him , to hide her from whole world. She dint want to be any one else except him.



" excuse me '' maan excused and left to far. Other corner of hall to make a call. After few minutes he came back and sat relaxed. His face had no worry, no tension nothing related to , what it was few minutes before. No body could guess his change of expression. Rahul was dancing in his win and was least worried from maan. Maan was waiting n waiting and waiting and then suddenly door bell rang..



Mohindar opened and a girl run to rahul and hugged " Rahull !!! I love you darling '' .



Flashback End



Maan wanted to laugh out loud. He literally wanted to do disco looking rahul shocked, confused embarrassed face. All were equally shocked. Mohindar n rahul parents were wanting to shoot rahul. Geet was laughing covering her mouth, from dupatta. All were having their own respective expressions except rahul. He was blank, like he had shot a atom bomb over his head.





" oo I missed u missed u missed u so much ..muahhh '' girl shouted jumping and kissed his cheek. All elder turned their head whereas geet was going to fall , holding her stomach due to laugh.. maan was trying to be innocent. He was trying to match same expression like all but failing. His face had glow, specially looking geet so much happy.





"rahul!! ye sab kya hai ..kon hai ye larki'' rahul father yelled from his lungs, seeing a tall beautiful model type girl, wearing short skirt and top.



"daddy..i dont know her '' rahul tried to keep her away." what !! rahul.. you forgot me.. No... '' she run to rahul's mother .. sasu maa I am your would be daughter in law '.. paau laagu (touched her feet) '' mother made face and moved back.. she turned to father .. " daddy.. you dont listen rahul.. I tell you ..he is my would be husband. We love each other.''



rahul- what .. oo listen, I dont even know you. First time am seeing you.. who the hell you are.. now stop your drama.. ''



Girl started crying. She went to mohindar .. "uncle ji .. aap hi boliye .. he promised me to marry me now dont even recognizing.. what I do ''



mohindar ' ye sab kya hai .. who is this girl??



parents looked rahul who was cursing her from the core, indeed she was beautiful, no doubt but why she jumped on wrong time''



" hum abhi jaate hai '' parents said and left, bending their head cause of rahul deed. Maan looked them leaving. Before leave girl winked maan. He gave his evil loop side smile. All left. Mohindar noticed maan. He said sorry for all this. Maan convinced him polietly. Mohindar asked reason for coming. Maan excused he had come to adi so just thought to see him (Mohindar)too. They talked for few moment when mohindar called geet to get some snacks n coffee. Maan denied as he had to leave. He excused and left.



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Geet was not able to sleep. She wanted to know reason for maan behavior. She was very excited yet anxious as well. It was all confusing. " maan dont know me well. We never met except office , like other way, I never showed my love for him.. still he cared me .. why ? I can see the same emotion in his eyes, which I had been having since I started to love him. I know Its affection for me what he is carrying in his eyes but why ?? mujhe jaanna hai .. per kaise .. kon karega meri help.. should I ask pinky? But how she would meet maan..then ? Adi ?? .. should I ask adi ?? .. haa ye thik rahega .. I would tell adi everything, tomorrow'' she decided and after much effort, drifted to sleep..



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Maan was very happy today. First in his life he was feeling real happiness from heart. He liked geet, he was sure... But for love he was not. He wanted to confirm his doubt. He forgot his bet and game. He just wanted to be sure , is this restlessness for geet was love? Is his worry and care for geet was love ? did he really started loving geet??? " per mujhe pata kase chlega.. maine pahle kabhi pyaar nahi kiya.. fir whom I should ask .. who will help me . I dont believe maan singh khurana, going for ask help. '' he laughed on his state. But this confusion was killing him from inside. He wanted to get rid off from all this. He remembered adi ...



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Next day, KC



It was new day for maan and geet. Both were have a new feeling. Both were excited with this new realization. Both were scaring with future. Both were having butterflies with though of each other. Both were waiting for adi...



Adi came in office with the determination, he would tell geet everything before it went late. He knocked geet cabin, wanting to say, he would meet her after office hour. He entered and saw Geet was lost in her thought. "geet'' adi called. She was in deep thought. Adi tried twice more but she dint buzz. He went closer and was to pat her shoulder but stopped hearing



'' I love you maan'' she said...



Precap : not decided 😛
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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeppiii...mein 1st ho gayi...dhinka chika...finally aj mera sapna sach hua...mein 1st aye...😃superbbb update lovu...hehehehe maan ne to rahul ki band baaj diya ...wo v sab k samne...isse kehte hai nehle pe dehla😃...kya plan tha maan ka...muaaahhh to maan...hehehehehe...

oye adi to sandwich baan gaya...maaneet k bich mein...loveguru baan gaya adi 😉😛
Edited by soma.gurti - 12 years ago
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wow lovely update dear.. wow me too holding my stomach and laughing laughing, my smart maan, devil maan.. bechare rahul, now u saw my devil, so better be away from him.. now wat will happen..wen my maaneet are in love, adi will broke te truth and geet will go away from my maan?..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan ne rahul ki band baja di



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oho so that girl was Maan's plan...

but how will he save Geet from Rahul with this type of immature plans...

I didn't expect Maan to play such a childish game...I mean in every second film we see this type of scene...

being a shrewd businessman I expected that he should make a very intelligent move...

interesting update...


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Posted: 12 years ago
more of maaneet plz upd was hilarious
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FOR THE TIME BEING MAAN MADE RAHUL AND HIS PARENTS GO AWAY
BUT HE NEEDS AMORE SOLID PLAN TO MAK GEET HIS

BOTH ARE WAITING TO CONFESS TO ADI
POOR ADI - WHAT WILL HE DO
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!! Amazing with a touch of comedy ..Rahul had a tit for tat 🤣

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