MG OS: My Papa. My SuperHero!!

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MY PAPA MY SUPERHERO


"Congratulations Mr.Handa a baby girl is born to Mrs.Handa!!" The nurse announced . Everything stood still for Mr.Handa. He had happy tears in his eyes.
"A baby girl'. My Baby Girl' My child!" Mr.Handa whispered to himself as if assuring himself.
"And and My wife'?" Mr.Handa asked fearful of the complications.
The nurse smiled seeing worried Mr.Handa, "Calm Down Mr.Handa ! She is fine too! You can meet her and the baby now!"
The nurse went away as Mr.Handa entered the room with small steps.
He saw Mrs.Handa holding the tender small cotton ball in her hands. Mr.Handa went near sitting beside her.
"She is just like you ji!" She whispered as she rested her head near his chest. The happy tears rolled down his eyes as he tried to hide his hiccups. He remembered'.
"Dekhna Rano meri toh Beti hi hogi who will always make me proud'. Raise my head with pride!!" Mohinder said.
"Haan haan dekh lenge!! Mera beta hoga beti nahi'!! " Rano countered.
"She will be just like me same long nose same lips ! Yes she will be my xerox copy!" Mohinder said smiling.
"Huh! Dekh Lenge!" Rano stomped her feet.
"Dekha Rano kaha tha na maine Beti hi hui!" Mr.Handa smiled as his wife blushed .
"Aap bhi na bas karo ji!" She said.
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TWO YEARS LATER:
"Yaay! There goes Geet'.!" He shouted as he raised her in the air.
He kept her in his arms. "Now now where is my Geet's bull'.?" Mr. Handa said making his fingers crawls along her arms.
"Here ?" He tickled her near her stomach. Her eyes became large as her lips went wide O shaped wondering what is her Papa doing.
"Here?" He tickled her waist. She giggled a little.
"And Here?" He tickled her under her armpits. She giggled loudly as her giggles filled the air.
Just then Mrs. Handa came out from the kitchen wiping her hands, " Bacha come to Mummy! " She raised her hands towards Geet.
Geet showed her tongue as she turned into her Papa's embrace.
"Nooo!! Papaaa!!!" She screamed as Mr. Handa laughed loudly hearing her giggles and seeing her antics.
"Haan haan dono Baap beti ek hi team mai chaley jao'.!" Rano huffed.
"Hum dono toh aap hi ke team mai hai!" Mr .Handa took her into his embrace holding baby Geet.
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"Geet! GEET! Don't go that way beta!!" Mr.Handa guided her as they walked to the school.
"Yaaayyy !! Papa catch me'." She said running across the road.
A car was speeding towards her. Mr.Handa immediately pulled her by her arm as both fell on the footpath.
"PAPA!"
"GEET!" Both screamed simultaneously.
Geet started crying. She had bruises in her elbows.
"Beta! Stop crying! You are Papa's brave girl hai na?"
"And You are My Papa , My Superhero!!" Geet had this weird habit of saying this phrase whenever Mr.Handa said You are Papa's brave girl.
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Mrs.Handa was out to market. Geet returned home with her heavy school bag. Now she was 12. She was upset. She kept her bag and ran towards Mr.Handa He was at home to complete some work. She hugged him and started crying.
"Bacha! Geet!! Tell me what happened Baby?" He patted her back as she calmed down her sobs.
"Papa! I' I stole Soumya's pencil box!" She said silently.
"And Why did you do so?"
"Because ' She stole my tiffin and even said You are not as rich as her father'!!" She started crying again.
Mr.Handa laughed. "Bas Itni si baat!! Wipe your tears now Geet!"
She wiped them like an obedient child.
"Child! Now listen to me! We shouldn't do it like this even if others do that with us! We should always be in the right path"
Geet nodded.
"And now tomorrow you are going to ask her sorry and return her the pencil box!! Okay?"
Geet went silent.
"You are Papa's brave girl na?"
She nodded.
"I will Papa!" She said and went away.
Suddenly she came rushing in and kissed his cheek "And You are my Papa, My Superhero!!".
Mr.Handa smiled.
Next Day:
She saw Soumya coming in with a Kurkure packet.
"I am sorry Soumya! Here take this back!" She handed over the pencil box.
"I am sorry too Geet! This is for you!!" Handing over the chips packet..
Geet saw her father standing near the door smiling.
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"Uffo!! Papa! Stop moving around'. It is giving me more tension! Already this idiot result site is not opening!" Both were tensed for the result of her board exams.
"YAAAYYY!!!" Geet screamed hugging her father.
"I got above 90% Papa!!!" She screamed. Mr. Handa smiled as tears rolled down his eyes. Mrs Handa stood there staring adoring their bonding. Mr.Handa's one wish was fulfilled.
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"Papa' My First Salary!! As a doctor!!" She touched his feet.
She hugged.
"You are always Papa's brave girl!!"
"And you Are my superhero!!" Both smiled as well as cried.
Just then Geet's mobile rang. She excused herself as she went out.
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"Go from here!! If Papa sees you he will be hurt!! I first need to talk to Papa!"
"But let me talk na what is the problem?"
"No I will!!"
"NO! I will!"
"NOOO I!"
"NOO I!!"
Just then she turned to see her Papa standing there.
"Papa I'!!"
He showed her his hand indicating to stop. Yhe hurt was clearly visible in his eyes. She hung her head low.
"Papa This is Maan! He is my friend! We both work in the same hospital! I' I ' ll'love him!!" She ran inside.
"Hmmm Young boy come inside!!"
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Mr.Handa stood in the balcony. Geet came and hugged him from behind.
"I am Sorry Papa! I wanted to tell you first but'.."
"Hmmm!"
"I will only marry him if you say yes!"
"Hmmm!"
"He' He is a nice guy Papa!"
"Hmmm!!" Suddenly Mr.Handa laughed seeing his grown up daughter crying.
"I know Beta!! Papa's brave girl always does the right choice!!" He spoke cheering her up.
She pouted but then smiled and hugged him.
"My Papa My Superhero!!" She cried silently.
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Mr.Handa enquired about his family and even talked to them. They were very sweet. Just perfect for his daughter.
"Now ! Will you keep her happy? How I kept her happy till now?"
"yes Sir!" Maan spoke with oozing confidence.
"Do you promise to Keep her protected always as I did?"
"Yes Sir !!"
"Toh aao gale mil lo!! Yeh sir war nahi chalega!! Call me Papa!!" He hugged him.
Now he turned serious as he closed the door.
"I have a secret which Geet is unknown about!" Mr.Handa spoke seriously as Maan was shocked.
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"Oh My God!! Maan put me down please!! My head is paining now!!" Geet giggled.
"Not untill you say'."
"I wont tell you Try what you may!!" She showed him her tongue .
"Fine!!" He again raised her in air moving round.
"My Papa is always my Superhero!! You can not be Maan!!" She screamed.
Maan pouted, "Huh! Papa's girl!" He put her down. She giggled and ran away.
"You are my Bodyguard, Mr.Maan Singh Khurana!!" She whispered huskily in his ear and ran away.
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"Geet!" Maan spoke with tears in his eyes .
"What happened Maan?" She cupped his face.
"Papa is in hospital! Last stage of cancer!" Maan spoke breaking down. Geet stood their numb. All her moments with her Papa flashed back in her mind. She stood still. As if Time stopped for her.
Maan remembered''..
"I have a secret which Geet is unknown about!" Mr.Handa spoke seriously as Maan was shocked
"Papa!!!!!"
"I have cancer beta!! It has reached last stage!! Incurable!!"
"But Geet'.!"
"I know ! She wont be able to gather up herself if I tell her this. That's why I have hidden this from her!! You promise me you wont tell her! Promise Me Maan!"
"I Promise Papa!"
"Geet!! GEET! Kuch toh bolo!!" Maan shook her . He dragged her towards the car along with him.
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She ran as fast as she could searching for her superhero her Papa. She saw him. So Weak. So Fragile. He signalled her to come near him. She went and stood by his side with Maan. He placed his hand in hers along with Maan.
"Be always happy!! You are Papa's brave girl Geet!!"
Geet and Maan nodded.
Tears flowed down his eyes. His hand became limp. Geet panicked.
"Papa!! Papa!! Wake up na Please!! See your Brave girl is here!! Papa You are my Superhero !!"
"I was never your Superhero Beta!! You made me a Superhero!" He gasped.
"NOO PAPA! You are my Superhero! You have to fight'. You have to fight'!" She became unconscious. Maan caught her.
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"Congratulations Mr.Khurana! Mrs.Khurana is pregnant!" The Doctor spoke with a smile as Maan had tears in his eyes watching the miracle.
"Geet!" He spoke tearily.
"My Papa My Superhro is back Maan!!" Geet spoke with tears flowing continuosly from her eyes.
Maan Kissed Geet's forehead. "Yes He is a real SuperHero!!"



Well Well Guys Not exactly a MG OS but felt like writing this. How was it??????? Hope you guys like it.
Love
Ananya

Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago

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Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
That was really nice..
so touching...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
That ws Heart-touching OS...Loved it very much
Beautifully Written...Amazing
Aweee Geet-Mr.handa's bonding is so Adorable
also Maaneet moment were so cute
Loved it completely
Thank you for sharing & PM



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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...
really touching...
while reading it my eyes gt teary...& i immidiately called my dad...as i liv in hostel...
really emotional...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a beautiful os!!!!!!!!!
i stay away from my parents and u made me remember my dad...i am having tears in my eyes dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazingly wonderful. I agree it was not more on them but it was beautiful. The bonding was so touchy. When i read the title in the PM inbox, i thought papa will be Maan. There are hardly any writer who write something like this. It is confirmed that GHSPian writers are gems. Proud of you. I was about to blast on you for starting a new one again and hanging the previous wale but after reading, i feel like hugging you. The pace and story was awesome. Though the ending was unexpected yet not that sad. I think just like me, you too have a great bonding with your dad. Hate this cancer. Overall, superb. Do write such OS often.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My Papa was also my super hero...

wonderful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
that was superb...
loved it marsi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
it was really good one and touchy anu 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
lovely update...
i just loved the ending...

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