Obsession 2,new story link-pg 73 - Page 9

Originally posted by: gudmeet

u r amazing dear palindrome

what an update

first part

putul and geet , wow

the way geet fed putul was awesome

i must say ur future baby and future husband will b really lucky{really,,,thanks..but it was just an idea..i can make putul eat in my story only but in reality kids are too stubborn and naughty..I would try this feeding trick in my future but if my hubby said."kaisei pagal biwi mili hai mujhe,,teddy bear ko dudh pilwa rahi hai mujhse🤣}

it was so thoughtful of u

btw did u google this also how to feed a baby with throat infection

warm milk and honey{yes i did search it,i read two or three articles and there was a suggestion to give lemon tea with honey to kid..I personally did not like this remedy so i changed lemon tea with milk..writer's liberty you know..😆}

i must say u will be a very very caring mother👏

then putul watching tom and jerry

excellent part

and ur brain is also smart enough to understand putul's vocab 👏{all credit goes to one year old kid in my neighbourhood as well as my younger cousins,..}

when she tried to say that her dad bought the cell phone to tom and jerry

and the last part

maan's really unusual confession was outstanding

at last he poured out his heart to geet abt his fear of loosing his loved ones

truly amazing

u know first ur story was so interesting due to pari's obsession

though the story has shifted from obsession to emotions

but one thind did not change

my interest in this story

now that is called superb writing

brilliant

keep up the good job dear{Thank you so so much dear!!!}

waiting eagerly for the next part

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Another dashing chapter...Maan's confession came out very well and it broke my heart to see him so pained ...

Geet has guts and a lot of knowledge of kids - loved her and her daughter's interaction- they bond so well. I repeat again, I have read stories with kids, but this is by far the best and most realistic one...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

r u in ur generous mood today to give us the next update?
or should we have to wait lonnnggg of tom?

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Aww...finally putul met her mumma... And maan realise his mistake of seprating them.
Sumwhere, he did the same thing...coz of which he was angry with his mom...keep the kid away from his parent coz of their personal issue.
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Poor baby...cant even say her pain to her mumma properly!
"some task can be done by a mother only"
...very true! When a child is in pain...mother's single touch works like medicine... Sumtimes u urself has to become a kid to distract them...do silly things n they will listen to u!
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"maan playing...feeding the teddy game...🤣
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Luvd putuls special language!🤗
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Maan walkd away from his daughter----i can feel, how tough it must hav been for maan to ignor the welcoming arm's of his daughter...who is the light of his otherwise dark life.
He wanted to be with his daughter n her mother...to be a part of their special bonding, special moments...but his biggest fear is not letting him...fear to loose the only two left whom he luvd the most...but the thing he is not realising now is...that his two most pricious persons are also suffering with him coz of his that fear.
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"geet slaped maan"
...i would say jaruri tha!
And she is right...maans behaviour will force putul to think that her father doesnt luv her...and she is just a responsiblity on him, which pari left on him...she can misunterstand him... the way he had misunderstood his mom...and the distant will be hard to cover..
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"putul's unpaid nanny"
...geet, pehle kyun nahi bola?
Finally maan voiced out his fears n an indirect confession of luv to her!
...he is stopping himself from luving them in the fear of loosing them...
...but he cant deny that if he has loose his luvd ones...god has blessd him with luv again n again...
Like..when he lost his mom...he got pari...n when he lost pari...he had geet by his side to luv him n support him...and now he has putul n geet together...(kuch khona hai... kuch paana hai...jivan ka khel puraana hai...jab tak ye saans chalegi...yaara ye toh chalte jaana hai) lovely...🤗
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Hmmm...
...baby khuruna mimiking her father...🤣
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Abhi se itna attitude...
...but thats the thing that brought that smile on her parents face's...even in thier painful moment!
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"go n play with ur mumma"
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"ur dadda luvs u very much n he luvs me too"---(soon to be a happy n luving family...in true sense)🤗

Originally posted by: gudmeet

hey changing lemon tea with warm milk is really a better idea for one yr old

hereby i confirm again

that u would be a very very caring mother😊👏

another important thing abt ur work is though there are no cozy moments between maan and geet and no close scenes even between maan and pari ( thank u for that ) except one or two kisses{I would like to admit that i can't write physical initimacy and i would avoid it till my last breath and still if my story would need such a sequence,i will request any of my readers here to write it for me..😳}

it is only due to ur sheer writing brilliiance and very very strong story line which made this stroy so very interesting.

excellent, brilliant, amazing , awesome, fabulous...

( pls tell me some other adjectives for ur brilliant work ){your comment is the biggest praise for me..you don't have to appreciate my work,just voice your thoughts about the story in your comment..your interest in the story praises my work itself...

P.S. to bring maan and geet closer putul can say

mummm daaad kichi

{aww..that would be really cute..i would add it to my story,if possible...😛}