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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
awe beautiful update...awe he confessed...loved it...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
m in lov wid putul yr,she is so cute...
Aww maan confessed
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Geet and putul made him realise how much putul needs a mother and what mistake he made keeping away putul from geet.

Loved the way you written how she fed putul and maan fed teddy…lol…

Yes…T&J is all time fav cartton show for all age groups….even I too watch alongwith my daughter.

Ufff…..ye maan bhi na kuch bhi sochta hai….pyar jatane se thodi koi door jata hai….very good geet ….you slapped him at correct point….he should hold himslef back loving putul…

Hope that geet get him our of his insecurities of his relationships…

Baato baato me he confessed geet that how both are precious to him….kehna hi pada na…

Again beautifuly written…I crave for more of geet-putul-maan moments….very cute

Thnx for pm

Cont soon

Ya….i too want something like 'Mein Tera Hero'….it was awesome…hillarious OS.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: nostalgic_soul

OMG!!incredible,simply incredible update!!u don't know how much deadly tired i'm now due to the entire day's gruelling duty of mine!!i straightaway stood continuously for4hrs in a surgery jst before some hrs,yet after returning home when i saw tht u updated i jst cudn't wait for even freshening up,late alone having meal or anything!!!and u know it was worth it!!it was sheer pleasure reading the splendid part!!indeed it was an unusual confession from maan!
waiting for the next part,today tht's it from me,as now i need jst to crush on my bed and forget the entire world!!bt thanks soo much for the brilliantly written part and then for the update dear:-)

My update has helped you to soothe your tired nerves,,,As a writer,i can't ask for more...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Diva7

one of my most fvrt updates...my vocab isn't dat strong to show how much i luvd d update...

all i can say is dat i absolutely adore it😊
"Is it paining here too baby???"...my god INJECTION 😲 😲...tujhe daya nai aayi bachchi pe usse injection lagwa diya😡...u know ur injection scene remind me my nightmare which i had seen abt 10 days back...us din meri medical report aani thi n i was so anxious abt it ki mujhe puri raat doctor ke bhayanak sapne aaye ki woh in typical doctor style mein injection leke meri taraf bad rahe hai n my one hand was holding my papa n other my mommy...n i had tears in my eyes n m begging n telling mommy ki aap toh jaante ho ki i hadn't hav my breakfast...n empty stomach injection, i'll faint surely...bt dnt know y she wasn't listening to me 🤣 🤣 🤣 thnk god it was jst nightmare phewww
chalo dats d end of my ramkatha 😆
back to business
"Some tasks can be done by a mother only..." TRUE
"it was looking like maan was going to strangle teddy's neck."...🤣...poor maan kahan phas gaya maa beti k bich
"tom and jerry"...I thought putul wud be fond of shinchan 😉....chalo abhi she's too small fr him ...
now here comes "geet ka badla"...😲
boarding school😲😡
thappad ka badla thappad 😆
gud goin geet it serves him right...he badly needed dat one
"I am bound to loose my loved ones geet"...aah so much pain in his words i can understand his agony...sigh!!!!
."You and putul are too precious to me,I can't afford to loose both of you..It does not matter if i have to bear this pain of staying away from both you for this..I can't be so selfish..I can't..!!!"... .. beautiful unsaid confession finally atleast one heart(dats geets) will be in peace
"Her pink colored cell phone was glued to her ear and she was screaming on it in an attempt to copy her father"... aww cutest putul at her best 😆 mindblowing
woww such an astounding update👏

ohh diva...your nightmare...😆 kyu khali pet injection nahi lete kya???🤣anyways,even i am quite scared of injections..But i have to do it with putul..she is one year old and its hard to make her swallow antibiotics and syrups...i have searched google alot...😆😆
apart from injections,i fear "DENTISTS".. they are biggest nightmares in my life...
and yes..putul is really cute,just like you😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Geet and putul made him realise how much putul needs a mother and what mistake he made keeping away putul from geet.

Loved the way you written how she fed putul and maan fed teddy'lol'

Yes'T&J is all time fav cartton show for all age groups'.even I too watch alongwith my daughter.

Ufff'..ye maan bhi na kuch bhi sochta hai'.pyar jatane se thodi koi door jata hai'.very good geet '.you slapped him at correct point'.he should hold himslef back loving putul'

Hope that geet get him our of his insecurities of his relationships'

Baato baato me he confessed geet that how both are precious to him'.kehna hi pada na'

Again beautifuly written'I crave for more of geet-putul-maan moments'.very cute

Thnx for pm

Cont soon

Ya'.i too want something like 'Mein Tera Hero''.it was awesome'hillarious OS.

I will try to write another comic os but right now there is no such idea in my brain..if you want to read another comic piece by me and you have slight idea about GC's new show,punarvivah,then you can try this one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

i feel like doing a bhangra now...

after such a long wait of geet and ofcourse ours too ...maan had indirectly hi sahi, confess tho kiya...

this part was so lovely, mamma and putuls reunion, maans feeding teddy (i was literally imaginiing that😃), putuls personal dictionary😉 (btw i liked tum tum a lot), geets confrontation and atlast but not at all the least maans confession that geet was indeed important for him...loved all of them...

how did i forget the putul mimicing her dad... 😃

just a mind blowing update... continue soon

Thanks dear for your kind words and for your incredible bhangra...😊..
and from putul's dictionary my favorite words are pee-pee and kichi...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Congo on new thread dear, hehehe, sowwie me late once again.😭
But aftr reading those ammmaazzzing Putul-Dadaa scenes I feel lack of words to describe ur talent, Sacchi mei...👏
Just like the part 29, where poor putul is soo ill nd Daddaa maan taking care of her, its beautiful.
I swear I have imagined such SAME scenes a millions of time nd craved of reading it in some of Maneets FFs but havnt got something as per my imagination BUT ur 1 part made me like WOWWW...⭐️⭐️⭐️Thanks dear..you can't imagine how much hardwork i have done to make these scenes look as natural as possible..I have done phd in studying gestures of a one year old boy in my neighbourhood😆No wonder,if his mother would start thinking that i am gonna kidnap her son..😆
But i feel soo sad knowing it would end soon, plss Putul ko aisa hi rhne do, usko bdaa na karoo, nd Geet ko bhi family mei include kr doo. Pweeshhh,😳 heheh, I knw me being greedy.😆
I just LOVE ur writing.
And ur one PERFECT WRITER i can tell easily👏{no dear..i have not touched "P" of perfection yet..}

Continue sooonnn⭐️

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: palindrome

ohh diva...your nightmare...😆 kyu khali pet injection nahi lete kya???🤣anyways,even i am quite scared of injections..But i have to do it with putul..she is one year old and its hard to make her swallow antibiotics and syrups...i have searched google alot...😆😆
apart from injections,i fear "DENTISTS".. they are biggest nightmares in my life...
and yes..putul is really cute,just like you😛

aww thnx sweety, me cute haaye😳
plz dnt laugh😆 bt main nai leti kyu ki main behosh ho jaati hu🤣...last year it happened n i was gone fr atleast 5 minutes woh toh papa ji saath mein they toh he managed...bt ek baar bhai k saath gai thi toh mat pucho yaar itna daanta mujhe usne nalayak, keh raha tha meri naak kata di...n whole ride frm clinic to home he was asking peechey ho ki kahi ludak gayi ...😆...aur ghar aate hi declair kar diya ab main isko doctor k yaha leke kabhi nai jaaunga...mera bas chale toh main injection ka naamo nishan mita du iss dunia se😡...dentist ...biggest sigh!!!! mat pucho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diva7

aww thnx sweety, me cute haaye😳
plz dnt laugh😆 bt main nai leti kyu ki main behosh ho jaati hu🤣...last year it happened n i was gone fr atleast 5 minutes woh toh papa ji saath mein they toh he managed...bt ek baar bhai k saath gai thi toh mat pucho yaar itna daanta mujhe usne nalayak, keh raha tha meri naak kata di...n whole ride frm clinic to home he was asking peechey ho ki kahi ludak gayi ...😆...aur ghar aate hi declair kar diya ab main isko doctor k yaha leke kabhi nai jaaunga...mera bas chale toh main injection ka naamo nishan mita du iss dunia se😡...dentist ...biggest sigh!!!! mat pucho

😆😆😆..oh my poor delicate darling diva..may god save you from all the vaccines in the world...😃..

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