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Zariya

@zariya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

lovely ff
inner turmoil u dec]scribed was awesoe
need an epi logue

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Awesom Blossom update

The letter potrayed all his deep emotions and insecurties .

Finally. the sun rays dawned upon them and new journey started with so much love and trust .

Keep writing and waiting for next .

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

First a request plz, plz write lots of stories on Maaneet...u have an wonderful capacity of story telling which can make one visualise them

The end was beautiful...will miss Putul, she not only played cupid to Maan & Geet but made them parents also

Plz give us an epilogue na

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pingu.tingu

@pingu.tingu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

last update:O last update :O y every good thing had tocome to an end ?? :( loved every bit of this update n the letter part was the best n toughest part ...i dont know how easily u wrote that part?? ...seriously u r incredible :) will miss ya hope to see you soon with another oustanding work of yours :) your work biggest pankha (fan) pingu :D

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

omg..such fantastic last part yaar...love t kichi kichi😆😆😆..very lovely part...pls give epi...

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

awesome one...but it is over😭 dint expect it to end so soon...are we getting an epilogue??😳

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

simply beautiful

the way maan said evreything in tat letter was superb

and than putul kichi kichi superb

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362035

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

wow simply awesooome...superb...ending to d most wonderful story...
loved it...i am simply speechless...
will miss this FF a lot...
thanky so much for this outstanding story...
with this ff i came across such a superb & talented writer like u...
will be waiting for more writings from u...
t.c.
tfd pm...

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Superb dear,sad that this has got end. Lovely part.want an epilogue soon.

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Palin this is a song dedicated to maan's confsion!
...
Tu hi meri..hai saari zami..
Chahe kahin se chaloon...
Tujh pe hi aake rukoon...
Tere siva main jaaun kahan...
koi bhi raah chunoo...
Tujh pe hi aake rukoon...
...
Tum mile to lamhe tham gaye...
Tum mile toh saare gum gaye...
Tum mile toh muskurana aa gaya...aaa..
...
Tum mile toh jaadu sha gaya...
Tum mile to jiina aa gaya...
Tum mile toh maine paya...
Hai khuda...aaa...
...
...
...
Tujh me kinaara dikhe...
Dil ko sahaara dikhe...
Aaa meri dhadkan tham le...
...
Teri taraf hi mude...
Ye saans tujh se jude...
Her pal ye tera naam le...
...tum mile toh ab kya hai kami,
tum mile toh duniya mil gai,
tum mile toh mil gaya aasra..aaa...
...
...
...
Tum mile toh jaadu sha gaya,
tum mile toh jiina aa gaya,
tum mile toh maine paaya,
hai khuda...
...
...
...
Din mere tujh se chale...
Raatein bhi tujh se dhale...
Hai waqt tere haath me...
...
Tu hi shaher hai mera...
Tujh me hi ghar hai mera...
Rehta hai tere saath me...
...
... Tum mile toh mil gaya hum safar,
tum mile toh khud ki hai khabar,
tum mile toh rishtaa sa ban gaya...aaa...
...
...
Tum mile toh jaadu sha gaya,
tum mile toh jiina aa gaya,
tum mile toh maine paaya,
hai KHUDAAA..
,...
...
(wish i could dedicate this song by singing...chalo thik hai,
main yahi pe gaa leti hoon)