'A Damsel In Distress' (MG)~~ Part 24 (pg 100) - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago


PART 18

Rahul picked her up holding her arm. "Uth jaa moti"

Geet sat and rested her head on Rahul's shoulder. Rahul rolled his eyes, 'khane ke liye yeh kitne bhi natak kr sakti h'

"Uth ja Geet le samosa kha le." Rahul took the samosa near Geet's nose so that the aroma could get inside her nostrils and magic! She woke up and sat like nothing happened to her.

She took the samosa from rahul's hand and ate the whole in 1 minute. She took another ro the packet and ate it and then 1 more, 1 more and 1 more'.

After eating 8 samosas she stood up and asked, "tum logon ne mujhe khilaya kya?"

Rahul went flat on the ground hearing her reply after eating the thing like a coyote she is asking what she had? Yash and Raghav slapped their foreheads.

Geet twitched her lips and said, "nhi batana mat btao, yeh natak kyun kar rhe ho?" and turned around to change and go home.

Yash called her, "Geet!"

Yash took her away from rahul and raghav and said, "Geet abhi mat jaana ghar. Adi sir aane vale hen unke saath hi jana. He will call you once he is here okay?"

Geet: But where are you going?

Yash rolled his eyes, "meri Maa kaha toh tha ki Maan sir ne bulaya h."

Geet: ohh Okay go then.

After sometime,

Adi called her and asked her to come out. She came out happily jumping and smiling. Adi smiled at her and asked, "Kya baat h bahut khush lag rhi ho? Hume bhi toh bataiye apni khushi ka karan?"

Geet: Ek shart par, tum yeh baat kisi ko nhi bataogey? Promise.

Adi: Okay promise.

Geet: you know what Yash is going to perform with my group in this competition.ohh teri subah he was going to tell me a bad news also mein poochna hi bhul gyi kya bad news thi?"

Adi: okay great ki at last Yash ne dance dubara join kr liya but usne'. Chlo chodo bata hi dia hoga. You call him. (Adi thought, 'usne maan sir ko bataya ya nhi aur Tanu ko?')

Geet called him and said, "oye Yash you were telling me something this morning na. Bad news? Kya bad news h?"


Geet heard him say, "Oh teri, Geet bahut badiii bad news h, mene Maan sir aur Taruna ko bataya hi nhi about this. Ab kya hoga mein toh mar jaunga dono mujhe milkar garam tel mein boil kr dengey.. oh no, oh no!"

"YASH calm down calm down eisa kuch nhi hoga hum dono milkar unse baat karengey okay?" Geet said.

"Tu bhi bolegi na mere saath?" Yash asked like a kid.

"Haan yaar now take rest, Kal jaldi aa jana subah okay?" Geet said.

"Okay vaise bhi tune itna nachaya ki mere per ab dukh rhe hen. Chal me going now Maan sir aa rhe hen ok bye." He said and disconnected the call.

"Adi, ek baat bolon."Geet said looking in front watching the road.

Today for the first time Geet gave the car to Adi, to drive as she was not feeling well.

"Haan bolo." Adi replied.

"Stop the car!" Geet said holding her stomach.

"Kya, par kyun?" Adi asked in confusion.

"I said, stop the car Adi I wanna puke." GEET said holding her stomach tightly.

Adi stopped the car immediately and Geet opened the gate of her side and puked.

Adi passed the water bottle and asked her to drink some water. She wiped her face with tissue and took a sip of water but again she puked. Adi was hell worried now. From the past 10 minutes she was puking. She puked the last part of her meal out. And now her stomach was empty and was looking pale.

Adi rushed the car when Geet stooped puking. She stopped because there was nothing in her stomach left to vomit. Adi was confused what to do now. He called Maan and asked him to come to Geet's house immediately and he will tell everything in detail later. Geet was leaning against the seat resting her head on the headrest and closed her eyes as her head was spinning.

Suddenly she started crying a lot, Adi looked at her and asked her to keep quiet and not to cry. "Adi, I am not feeling well, mujhe bahut ajeeb sa lag rha h. My stomachi is aching a lot." Geet said crying like a little kid.

"Bus Geet thodi aur dur 5 minutes ka rasta reh gaya h na bacha."

He was consoling her like a elder brother asking his little sister to not to cry.

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Maan was hell worried. 'Adi's was worried. Kya hua hoga? Kahin Geet ko kuch. Nhi mein usse kuch nhi hone dunga."

He took his car keys and rushed to her house. He reached before them and rang the doorbell continuously.

Dev opened the door and asked Maan, "what happened Maan?"

"GEET ghar aa gyi?" he asked hastly.

"Nhi, abhi tak nhi aayi? But why what happened?" Dev asked now he was also concerned seeing Maan so tensed.

"Pata nhi I got a call from Adi saying ki mein jaldi se yaha aa jaun. Bus itna hi bola fir call cut kr kiya'" Maan was saying this when he heard NT shouting from behind,


"GEET!!!"

They saw her clinging to Adi's shoulder for support and her face was pale. Her hairs were messed up and she was standing on the ground with great difficulty.

Maan's heart skipped a beat seeing her in this condition. He rushed towards her and picked her up in his arms and took her inside room. Everyone was shocked, but Maan Singh Khurana didn't care about a damn.

He took her inside her room and placed her on the bed. Geet was touched with his care, suddenly her stomach cramping again started she screamed in pain it killed Maan.

She squeezed her stomach hard to decrease the pain but it increased only. Everyone came inside hearing Geet scream.

NT was shocked to see her sister like this and Adi went out to call the doctor. Dev came and sat beside Geet on the other side.

Dev: Geet bacha, what happened kya hua?

Geet cried and replied: I don't know jiju, my stomach's hurtin' a lot.. pehle car mein vomit (Sob) bhi hua tha.. (sob).

Dev: Don't worry baby. We will call the doctor and he will wash all your pain away.

Maan didn't know what to say or do he was breaking down seeing his angel in this condition.

Adi came running inside and said, "Doctor is on the way!"

NT asked Adi, "Adi isne raaste mein kuch ulta sidha khaya toh nhi tha?"


Adi: Nhi ma'am bus raste mein isne mujhe gaadi rokne ko kaha and then she puked for more than 10 minutes and then I called Maan sir and asked him to come here.

NT was soo worried about her that she started crying and started scolding her, "kya krti rehti h Gappu, kyun ho rha h tere pet mein dard."

Geet was not feeling well but still her sister was scolding her she too shouted :Kaisi behen ho aap ek toh apki choti behen yahan maar rhi h aur aap ho ki abhi bhi mujhe daat rhe ho.

Maan was now angry and glared at her like saying, 'dare you say that dieing part again.'

Geet understood what he was saying and replied with eyes only, ' vaise bhi itni jaldi peecha nhi chodungi aapka, aur mujhe pata h you will not let anything happen to me'

Again her stomachache started and NT asked her drink some water. She drank but the water was dribbling down her throat with a great difficulty.

Doctor arrived and asked everyone to go out but Maan was not ready to leave her side, everyone was confused with his behavior but then thought he must be worried like others, that's why.

But no one knew the real reason behind it. That he LOVES his Geet, she is his life, agar usse kuch hogya toh Maan will be finished.

For the first time Maan confessed his true feelings to himself.

Geet asked him with her eyes to do what doctor is saying.

PRECAP~~ Geet in hospital...


Sorry guys... I was unable to update the ff for soo long.. Hope you like this part... 😃

PLz plz like and commnt...

PART 19

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

OMG geet ne 8 samosa kha liye

main toh 2 khaalun wohi kaafi hai😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
8 samosa khane ke baad kisi k bhi pet me dard hoga...
it was due to samosas or anything else????
Jaldi se update dena waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
8 samose khane ke baad yeh toh hona hi hai
but poor geet
apni tabiyat kharab karli

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous part
geet ne 8 samosa khaliye and maan finally accepted his feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

OMG geet ne 8 samosa kha liye

main toh 2 khaalun wohi kaafi hai😆😆



Thnk u and yeah mein toh 1 mein hi full ho jati hun 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

8 samose khane ke baad yeh toh hona hi hai

but poor geet
apni tabiyat kharab karli



thank u deaar... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shabnam22

8 samosa khane ke baad kisi k bhi pet me dard hoga...
it was due to samosas or anything else????
Jaldi se update dena waiting for next...



OKay... wil update tomorow... FINE?? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE: Hello everyone, I was actually thinking That I today I updated after such a long tym, so Galiyan and jutiyan toh sasbki ready hongi..(POor me, ready to have it..)

So do you want another update tomorow or any other day>??? plzzz tell me...

Ur lovely (or bad) Writer.😳...


Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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next update jaldi se dena

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