MG SS My Hot Professor Thread 4

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

hey yeah!! it's lovely to read this ff...bt this time all dialogues r repeated..so a lil bit boring..

ur r8..plz add some present moment with the flashback..

sugg: rather than repating the whole sequence..u can just add like maan laying on bed,,n remembering hw he felt on that sequence...so only imagination part..rather than writing whole sequence...

n it's just sugg..don't feel bad..

coz i luv ur ff... :)

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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

maan all the while watched Geet ...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

amazing update

maan's pov is really hilarious

especially his expressions after geet's long long speech

update soon

waiting eagerly

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

nice one

am actually enjoying his pov .. so if the present is skipped for more updates am still ok with it

go with the majorities

thanks for pm

cont soon

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aisha_1998

@aisha_1998

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

nice update !

i donot find maan's POV boring obviously,

but i hav ALREADY read the parts rightt,, so yess
PLEAASE add present parts to it also :))))

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

awesome part...loving maans pov too...update soon

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@SecretKhabri420

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Please go forward in future, as this would be repetitive... You can mix both point of views at each updat, sorry, but I am eager to know next... Want their confession, marriage and life after marriage :) please...