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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
omg my maanu no karan
oh babaji what should i vcall him no he is my maanu bas😆
bt maanu go through so much
his family
that bas**** arjun is alive abi tak or not if yes maanu go n kill him also😡😡😡😡
n abt geets' reaction im sure
she will lv him

waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing part.. Maan has gone through so much..Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really painful.He was a good guy .how he changes that is really painful.Pari helped him against evil and conditions made him evil himself.His sister is still in coma what about her pregnancy when she come out of coma.I think her husband is also some where behind things.Kahi Ram Kapoor he to uska pati to nahi.Hav to wait .Thanx dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update..
Awww maan a army officer.. hmm his past is so sad..
liked maneet moments..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Quite a painful update... nice one...

continue soon... but i love MSK as army officer... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Wonderfully written! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WANTED




PART-20


Geet was shocked beyond when she heard maan's past.she never ever thought that man like maan could have such bitter past which no one wishes to happen in their life.he seems hard from outside but today she saw the maan who is very sensitive by heart n no one except geet is aware of this maan.he never let others know his inner turmoil..she felt bad for her behavior.she was taunting him for not confessing his feelings when he was fighting with himself.


Maan who stood at window with his back facing geet spoke"this was the reason I always tried to stay away from u geet..i know no girl wishes to stay with murderer like me n I know very well that I don't deserve an angel like u but I failed to stop my heart from loving u..iam sorry geet I would have told u before hand..believe me I never thought to hide my identity from u..i..i"he is fumbling for words..he don't know what to say..once he thinks that he don't deserve her n geet should not be in a relation with him n at once he feels a pinch in his heart when he thinks to go away from her..he loves her so much n very much attached to her that he could not even think to live without her but he left decision on her.


Geet who was listening to maan couldnot able to take when he was confessing indirectly that he cant live without her..she came to him n hugged him tight from back.this hug gave all answers to maan.his heart danced in joy..he turned to her n hugged her tight.both stayed in the same position for long time.there was no need of words for them but being with each other gave them enough peace n they are rejoicing the moment..there is no secret,no lie in their relation now.both love each other n cant live without each other is the biggest truth they know now.


Days went on n maaneet's relation blossomed n became stronger day by day.maan still wanted to reveal his identity to everyone in the family but everytime something or other goes wrong..khurana constructions was in huge losses when it was in bharadwaj's hand..maan is slowly slowly trying to build it back with the help of aadi n geet.


One day when maan,aadi n geet arrived home they saw daarji,s.d n rano discussing something seriously.from their convo they understood that they are planning to sell their house in HP.

Maan:daarji what are u saying??what is the need of that now??

Daarji:beta we thought to tel u but kabhi mouka hi nahi mila..wo darasal meera ki shaadi honewali hai kuch dino mein..she was engaged before ur arrival..iskeliye toh kam se kam 20-30 lakh lagenge..itne saare paise kaha se layenge hum ..toh hum ne socha..

Maan:toh aap logo ne soch liya ki wo ghar jiske saath aapke bahut saare yadeein jude huye hai,jis mein aapki jaan basti hai wo ghar bhejna chahthe hai na ..(maan said sarcastically)..aur muje kabar tak nahi…aap logo ko lagtha hai ki mein meera ki shaadi bhi nahi kar saktha??muje lagtha tha aap mujse naraz nahi the par..


"nahi beta aisa nahi hai"daarji said


maan:agar aisa hai toh ghar bhejne ki koi zarurat nahi I'll give money for meera's wedding..n that's it no more discussions now


Maan gave a cheque to aadi to draw the money from bank n aadi did that.soon in a week wedding preparations has started n everyone became busy in wedding preparations.

Meanwhile,ram kapoor got the list of withdrawals n deposits from bank..his gaze fell on particular depositor who deposited 2 crores,the highest amount few days back.he thought for a while n called the bank to enquire about the details of depositor..he guess was right about the depositior as he came to know it's none other than karan who did that..😭

He enquired again n came to know that 30 lakhs were transferred to hoshiarpur branch n 30 lakhs were withdrawn from karan's account..now everything seemed clear to him but needs to clarify it.he immediately reached hoshiarpur branch.he checked the list of people who withdrawed the amount..

Ram:can I know who is this person??he withdrawed 30 lakhs??ram pointed the name of the person who signed there whiel withdrawing money..

"ha sir he i mean aadi took the money a week back.."

"did he give u any cheque or …???"ram asked him..

"ha sir he did through cheque.."n he showed the cheque to ram.."can I know who gave u the cheque??"

"wo hi ladaka aadi jo paise lekar gaye the..wo hamara dost ka beta..wo log bas yahi rehte hai paas mein..hum acche se jaathe hai unhe infact unlogo ko har koi jaatha hai is village mein.."he started saying all unwanted things to ram.

ram checked the account number n it was karan's account number..even though he got clear idea he again asked.."yaha toh aadi nahi hai account holder ka naam"

"sir account aadi ka nahi s.d ji ke beta maan singh khurana ka hai..he gave the cheque..aadi ne muje ye hi bataya tha"

"but yaha toh karan ka signature hai..ye karan koun hai??"ram asked him..


"kya???"he saw the sigh.."mein ne dyan nahi diya tha sir..hum acche se jaathe unlogo ko toh mein ne teek se check nahi kiya tha"he said n literally scracthed his head not able to undetstand what to do as it's matter of hsi job now.

but ram thumped his hand on table in triumph as he found the signature on cheque as karan.."yes!!chahe jitna bhi bada criminal ho koi toh mistake karega zarur n here is the proof"he immediately picked his mobile n dialed a number..


here in KM meera's wedding took place n she bid good bye to everyone before leaving to her sasural..almost everyone left the venue except few friends n family members..


maan is busy on phone in his room when aadi enterd the room.."maan there is a call for u on landline"maan confusingly went to take the call thinking who might call him..the other side it is none other than ram kapoor who held his breath for the last confirmation.."hello"maan said busy in his thoughts "karan"ram said without leaving a nano sec for maan to think who called him"ha!!"maan answered involuntarily n realized what he said..he closed his eyes tight holding his forehead as he is caught now..

"yes!!got him"at the same time someone from hospital phoned ram saying they got some chain from dead body's clothes n maan singh khurana was engraved on it.

ram kapoor smiled widely n immediately started to KM

Maan didn't understand what to do..he saw that everyone in the family is happy very happy..he always wanted to reveal his identity by himself but not by others..n today ram is already on his way..he is sure now that ram will come there but he wanted to answer the family."I cant let him catch me now..not now!!!"maan thought.he was not scared of police but his reposnibilities..his responsibility to answer the family,his responsibility to take care of his di who is in coma since few months,his responsibility to teach arjun a good lesson for his deeds..he saw geet passing the way n dragged her withhim in to his room.


He held geet's face in his hands n said"geet listen!!i need to go now..ram kapoor I mean CBI came to know that iam karan n he is on his way..i cant let them catch me now not before completeing my task..arjun ko sabak sikhane se pehle mein kahi nahi jaa saktha n di she needs me..i also need to answer the family so I need to go now"he said without even taking a breath indicating his urgency..

"maan ye aap..kaha jayenge aap"she said almost shocked..she is literally shivering thinking what would happen now..she is already in tears..maan just hugged her tight to pacify her.."geet plz trust me..just once..everything will be fine..i'll be back but I need to go now..plz don't cry"


She nodded in tears"be careful"she mumbled..for which he nodded n pecked on her forehead..he hugged her tight again n left the room jumping out from the window.


Geet cried for sometime n quickly composed herself determined on her task to handle everything when ram kapoor arrives.

After only 5 minutes ram kapoor surrounded the house with his entire team n cops started searching for maan..fotunately there were only family members there n everyone else left the venue.."s.d ji iam sorry for coming like this but we are here to catch dangerous criminal karan who disguised himself as ur son maan singh khurana..ha he is not ur son"he said to s.d who was about to question him.."iam sorry for this but ur son is no more..train mein goli lagi thi aapke bte ko n he was dead at spot.."

Geet couldn't say anything now as ram may question her so she stood there silent holding shocked s.d in her arms..

Ram n his team searched for him in the whole house but he is no where.."I guess he escaped..sorry for inconvenience but jaroorat padne par we'll come here again n u all has to cooperate with us"ram said n left the place leaving the family in shock..except geet daarji s.d rano n aadi stood there in shock n tears welled up in their eyes..

Precap:

Maan back to KM n his face off with family😕


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-mona😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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update ram in km family knowing about karan maan and maan ran waiting for face offf



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