(MG-SS) MLS SEASON 2 THREAD 1 - Page 58

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MLS update nahi diya na isliye...
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am hanging in the mid 😳
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jo ready hai woh update diya karo...
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

jo ready hai woh update diya karo...


mls was half typed but i just asked from all ffs

and response was RM

990 words am posting RM now

in 30 mints
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PART 4

Geet was just looking at him, without taking bottle from him..After few secs …


Shekher:- Lets go.. police is there … Just leave the bottle she will take … come on lets go..shekher dragged him by pulling his arm…and they went out…


On their way back ,MK was confused at his own behavior and top of that ARYANS were giving him weird looks .. makting him more frustrated … To break the awkward situation..


Shekher:- so ??? we will have to handle them to sir and then get another target.???


Adi:- yes I think… what do you say MK…???


MK:- Huhh!!!


Yash:- seems like you are again lost in HER????


MK:- Its nothing related to her…


Yash:- oh how come you know ..we were talking about THAT HER???


Mk:- yash, shut up…. He said angrily to which he shuts his mouth…


Rahul:- we were saying that we must handle them to mehra sir and then ???


Mk:- Hmm… Right then head to our new mission…


Shekher:- Brief???


Mk:- Hmm.. It's a college re-union party and acc to sir we will get our next target there… that would link us to his boss…


Samar:- but how are we gonna fit in ???


Mk:- Everyone will be wearing masks like they do in these kinda parties… so we will also opt masks and pretend to be the passed out students.. we will also pretend that we are enjoying there.. but our eyes must be focused on our target rather on girls around.. (MK said looking at yash and samar sp..)


Yash:- of course MK we will ….


Nikhil:- you just take care of your eyes.. who knows the distraction of your eyes might also be there….


Mk shoot an angry glare to Nikhil but rahul supported


Rahul:- Be focused MK…


Mk:- I am always focused ..Its just that I wanted no harm to the innocent ppl out there.. that's why I saved her… also.. nothing personal…


Shekher:- ok guys.. Now plz no more discussion on that issue and get back to works… all nodded and dispersed..



On the other hand Geet and payal reached their flat… Geet was all scared.. shweta and avni were sitting there …


Avni:- Geet, what happened ???? Not getting ans from Geet she turned to payal ,who told everything happened out in boutique…


Girls were scared also ….shweta immediately came to Geet…


Shweta:- Hey Geet , come on… Its alright now .. ok.. come on back to yourself.. Geet.. sweet innocent and sheerni one… come on, shweta encouraged her by rubbing her arms to sooth her also. Geet looked at her with small smile .. and hugged her ….


Geet:- you know naa.. I only fear one thing .. guns and cuts ….. blood.. I hate blood.. and they were firing as if it wasn't a big deal…


Avni:- Geet ,for them it wasn't a big deal naa… after all they were criminals …..


Geet:- I know.. and it won't affect me now..


Shweta:- That's the spirit.. come on now lets see what have you bought..


Then with shweta ,avni and payal .. soon Geet forgot the incident and got busy with the girls and preps for the evening..



Evening , outside college (where the re-union was)


Mk:- Everything set..


ARYANS :- yes…


Mk:- Guys, no scope of committing mistakes…


Rahul:- we know that…


Samar:- you take care MK…


Mk:- I will.. He glared to all ..stop teasing me …



All smiled and went in, grabbing masks for themselves ..They were just in there few partying around and shekher and Maan at the drinks bar…but all's concentration was on the man ,to be entered and that was their target of the night.. to pass time


Shekher:- So MK has felt something for someone ???


Mk:- what???


Shekher:- come on, you can tell me…


Mk:- I don't know what are you talking abt???


Shekher:- The girl, coz of whom we were lost our target and then were abt to lose him on our second attempt..


Mk:- Its nothing abt her.. she is a disaster I guess.. Every time gets on my nerves..I just hope she won't show up here again..


shekher:- what if she does... ??? shekher asked looking lost somewhere..


MK:- I will kill her first then move on to our target... (ST):- I have said before too this line but why I didn't do that ???


shekher:- well I don't think you will be able to kill that beauty...


Mk:- what are you saying ???


shekher:- why don't you see yourself... He said and pointed through his eyes ..Maan followed his eyes and there he saw his disaster queen was there..coming inside, in red dress with a mask in her hands...and after her, few more girls came ..



Geet looked here and there slight scared of what happened in the boutique but confident as she had her friends now on her side ..


MK(ST):- she is looking wow… much prettier than before… He was again lost in her and shekher nudged him


Shekher:- come back dude.. we are not here for her…


Mk (gave an irritating look ):- I know.. I was just.. looking .. for him..


Shekher:- yeah I saw that…


Mk:- back to work… He said that to avoid any other talks on the girl and then raised from chair went to roam here and there...MK tried to not to look at the girl's side but involuntarily his gaze kept going to her …and sometimes to the target of the night…



The college students were very delighted to meet again after ages and so was with Geet …she was very much excited to meet pinky after so many years … and also meet priya who was pinky's classmate and friend of hers but also with Geet.. Thanks to pinky…


Geet was oblivious to the face that someone was watching her from far in concentration.. as she was busy in talking and giggling with her friends..



Soon all were asked to join dance floor wearing their respective masks.. all went there except Geet and on other hand Maan…


Geet was hesitant to join, though she was a dancer but she got very conscious as she saw the crowd…


All were dancing in order like.. adi-pinky…shekher-shweta…yash-payal..nikhil-priya…rahul-avni…and samar with a random girl…



Many guys approached Geet but Geet just straight forwardly denied … MK was watching her all the time also the guys who tried to dance with her..He liked the boldness in the girl.. He smirked and went ahead…


Precap:- what will MK do ??? 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update doc...
MK losing his focus again...
Next MG dance sequence
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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IF wasn't working so was late
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ahhh i'm agreed yar😈 DISASTER QUEEN GEET is MAAN'S DISATER,right hehehehehe.
awesome update yar and ya maaneet dance is coming na...how well i know u&maan😎.
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DOC DOC U THERE...
what happened to the teaser????

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