Waqt ka ye faisala/chap 10/ pa127/IMP NOTE/ PG 137

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I m going to tell in next chapter who inspire me for writing what I thing about my writer and readers like

Valli dii----inspire me how to write a person innocene like how to write story in innocent manner which touch ur heart.

yipppeee..me first...

omg..i dont know what to say..when i started writing i never thought some people will get inspired by me also..its a great honour to me that u mentioned me...n u r so much better than me...i love this cute maansi..bua ki tarafse der sara pyaar...lol...n ur pictures give life to stories..maansi has already decided to make geet as mom..so let her play cupid between maneet...i loved the whole part..interesting precap...

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

sooo cute update

love mansi's antic

kya sabak sikhaya tha mansi to that sasha

love mansi nd geet bonding

maan is openly drooling over geet haayye

mar java

precap is little scary

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: valli22

I m going to tell in next chapter who inspire me for writing what I thing about my writer and readers like
Valli dii----inspire me how to write a person innocene like how to write story in innocent manner which touch ur heart.
yipppeee..me first...

omg..i dont know what to say..when i started writing i never thought some people will get inspired by me also..its a great honour to me that u mentioned me...n u r so much better than me...i love this cute maansi..bua ki tarafse der sara pyaar...lol...n ur pictures give life to stories..maansi has already decided to make geet as mom..so let her play cupid between maneet...i loved the whole part..interesting precap...

diii dont make fun of mee i know if i die also in writting tu bhi i never write like u

thanku so much

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nat10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

⭐️ awesome update. like maansi cute acts.

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: bulbul164

diii dont make fun of mee i know if i die also in writting tu bhi i never write like u
thanku so much

i am not making fun..its true...this story is too gud n maansis cuteness n geet politeness all the way u r describing is nice..n whats that big word..die in writing...experience makes us better...n u will write many more than me..

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

awesome update

mansi ne sasha k sath achha kiya lolz kya makeup kiya sasha ka with curry

oh my cuty playing with geet's dupata like it so much

hai maan drooling over are geet and wo b so openly hai marjawan yar kya update di he

oh no in precape maan is ill .

some people trying to kill him oh no mansi b maan k sath he god geet maan and mansi are in danger

continue soon dear

will wait eagerly

LARAIB

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preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

awesome update...
morning scene was superb...
little devil mansi ne to sasha ki band baja di...
hayeee maan drooling geet...
mansi playing with geet dupata taaa hehehehe just loved it...
loved the whole update...

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meettu

@meettu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

I m in love wid dis story
tooo god
mansi is sooo naughty
seriously yaar
kaise maan ka way block kiya to go office
nd her xcitnent after listening to geet name.
Geet blushing seing maan
precap intwresting.