Waqt ka ye faisala/chap 10/ pa127/IMP NOTE/ PG 137

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Fantastic update...and i read it b4 getting u'r pm...yippie

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kuhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

lovely update ... cont soon

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Bhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Congrats for the new FF.

Nice and cute start I should say.

Loved the bonding between father and daughter, which is admired by one and all...

Luking forward for the story ahead.

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Mixed feelings dear...absolutely loved Maansi, Geet and Maan part...but not so convinced with Priya's part. I know she was wrong but a husband hitting a wife and that too Maan - slaps and hunter...i don't think that is something i will like to see with my hero.

Yes, fighting, divorce and custody etc I can understand. Keeping child away for sometime also is ok. But physical abuse...that is not correct for whatever reason. Just because he is more physically fit? Agar yahi reverse hota toh? I hope you got my point

Sorry if you feel bad...just my POV...

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poongs123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

hey jsut now gone thru very nice concepts weest i m loving it but one smaal reqeust as i don understan hindi fully its really diff toread i knw certain extent oly own lang can give that flavour but still if u cud add more englist it will be really helpful for me to enjoy even more ...

just a request dear but choice is urs ... any ways apart from tat i m loving this story plz continue soon

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valli30

@valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

acha hua you made us masi😉 warna😈😆
wayse masi loves mansi sooo much😃
oh mansi is such a cutiepie .❤️

priya she deserved that😡.
continue soon

Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

geet and maansi are great fun together

nice part

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piya27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Ek kaam kar usse do aur hunter meri bhi taraf se laga de loved the update

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preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

awww mansi baby dada se kya kya karwate ho...hope ki apke dada apki har baat maane or geet ko apki mamma bana le...hehehehehe
loved the update...
priya sach m chudail hi hogi jo itni cute si baby ki koi fikar nhi karti...
priya deserve that...