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CHAHA HAI TUJKO - PART2

Maaneet were sitting in the park on a bench.. holding eachothers hand.. n were lost in thre eyes… were speaking with their eyes… dy were in love… both loved each other so much…

A boy with bhail puri came thre…

Boy- saab… saab..

Maaneet's eyelock broken n both left thre hands…

Boy- saab kuch le lo na..

Maan- nahi.. nahi.. tum jao..

Geet- aree aise kaise jao??

Mjhe bhook lagi hai.. suno 1 bhail dedo..

Boy- gg… n strts making bhail 4 her

Maan- kya geet… y u r having this… we can go to a shop.. u r nt gonna eat this roadside bhail.. see he didn't wash his hands…

Geet- ufff maan.. kuch nahi hoga… n I jst roadside bhail.. u knw its tasty… also more dn ur shop vaali…

Boy gave geet the plate of bhail… n ask for money..

Geet with her eyes said to maan to give him money.. maan gave him 100 rupee note..

Boy- aree itne paise.. mere paas chute( change) nahi hi..

Maan- no prob.. u can take it.. tum saare rakhlo..

Geet widens her eyes.. hayee babaji.. itne paise dene ki kya zarurat hai maan… n snatches the note 4m boy's hand.. aree rehne do.. mere paas hai na.. 10 rupee.. she opens her purse n gave tht boy 10 rupee… bt when boy was going 4m their he gave him 100 rupee…

(stinna- hayee mera kind sa maan)

Geet was having the bhail by making faces… she was enjoying it… she asks to maan to have it.. its yummy bt maan refuses.. to which geet make golgappa face… maan toh can do anything 4 her na.. she is her jaan… he took the spoon n eat tht bhail… geet smiles to him…

Maan was happy seeing his jaan happy.. geet is her life… he can do anything to see happiness in her eyes….

Dy enjoy tht bhail by feeding each other…

Both stands to go back… geet strted walking.. n dn she found she is alone… maan was no where.. she got tensed.. she scream.. MAAN.. MAAAN…

Bt maan was not thre.. she searched him everywhere… she saw every where in the park… ask to peoples abt maan… tears came into her eyes.. she sits on the ground on er knees… screaming abt maan.…

1 tera was abt to fell…. Bt it doesn't touch the ground… he catches it… maan catches it before it touch the ground…. Seeing maan infront of her eys… geet immediately hugged him.. he was happy to found her maan.. her life. Her everything… she hugs him tight…. Like she will nt let him to go.. to go away 4m her.. never… ever… maan alos hugs her tight… she came out 4m his embrace.. n strt hiting maan with her tiny fist.. maan holds her hand

Geet- kha chale gaye the?? Haan.. mje chod k???

Maan with her thumb cleans her face…

Maan- aree mn to bs..

Geet- haan btao…

Maan- mn to mjak kr rha tha geet… y u crying??

Geet- aage kabhi esa majak mat krna… khabardaar agr mjhe chod k kabhi gaye toh… kabhi baat nahi krugi tumse…

Maan- haan baba.. nahi jaugaa.. kabhi nahi jauga tumhe chodd ke…

Geet- vaada… n forward her hand…

Maan holds her hand.. "pakka vaada" n hugs her tight…

Geet- pta hai mn kitni darr gae thi… agr tum mje chodd k chale gaye dn I cant live.. I cant think my life without u…. I love u so much..

Maan- love u too jaan…

Na mi tumhe kabhi chodd k jauga.. na tum mjse kabhi door jana… hum dono hamesha sath rahenge.. ek dosre k…

Geet- hmm….

Maan- ab challe…

Maan opens his eyes…

His eyes were still teary n red… it were swollen due to continues cry…

Maan- geet tumne toh vaada kia tha.. tum mje kabhi chodd k nahi jaogi.. tum mje pyaar krti ho..

Fir kha gaye tumhare vaade???

Kha gya tumhara pyaar????

Kya vo sab jhoot tha, dikhava tha, areb tha… nahi mn nahi manta.. nahi mant mn..

Bt geet kyu gae tum je chod k… mje.. jannat ko.. hum dono k bare mn 1 baar bhi nahi socha tumne.. itna kaise gir sakti go tum… tum meri geet nahi ho.. nahi ho tum meri geet… jisse mne pyaar kia ttha

I hate u geet…. I hate u… he screamed…. He was screaming loudly thrught his lungs..

Geet- haaan….

Geet scream .. MAAAN……

She was on the bed…. Her eyes were droopy.. it were also red…

RK hurriedly came into the room…. "geet.. geet kya hua tumhe??? R u fine???"

She was crying…. She strtd crying more… Rk came n hugs her tight…

"geet.. chup hoja… stop crying…"

Geet- I love him… I love him so much … he said I don't love hi anymore…"

RK- "I knw geet".. he was telling her.. consoling her… caressing his hand on her hairs…

He cupped her face in his hands… "geet rona band kr.. its not gud 4 ur health"

Geet- hw … kaise karu… mn apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kr paugi.. kabhi nahi,,

Mne use jo dard dia hai.. mje bhi uski zaroor milenge.. mere babaji mje kabhi maaf nahi karenge….

Nahi.. maan v kabhi maaf nahi karege mje RK… he said he don't want to see my face… she was crying her heart out… she was crying over her lungs… she was having hiccups… RK took glass of water 4m side table.. n gave to her… geet throws the glass on the floor… it break into pieces…

Geet wokeup 4m thre.. RK tries to stop her… bt she was nt listening..

RK- geet sambhal k.. vha kaach hai.. the lag jayegi.. bt she didn't listen to him.. n went..

The glass hits geet's feet.. n strtd bleeding.. blood strtd oozing out 4m her feets…. It was paining her.. she came out of the room….

RK- geet ruko..

Geet was going… she went downstairs.. tears were nt stopping.. dy were flowing out 4m her eyes like a waterfall…

"mje bhi saza milni chahiye… mne apne maan ko jo daard diya hai.. uske samne.. she saw her bleeding feet… ye to kuch v nahi hai…"

She was going toward the main door… RK gave instructions to his servants to close the door…. RK was asking her.. telling her to stop.. stop geet.. for god sake… maan k liye ruk ja. Dekh tere paaon se khoon a rha hai…

The servants closed the door…. When she was abt to go out..

(stinna- remember guys.. devdaas last scene.. when ash was running towards the gate to meet srk.. bt the gate closed…)

RK came thre running…. He hold her….

Suddenly geet became unconscious… she fell in RK's arm…

RK- geet…. He picks her in his arms n take her to the room… n made her sit lay on the bed,…. Geet was still murmuring in her mouth.. "m sorry maan.. plzz forgive me.. sorry."

RK couldn't see her frnd like this… seeing her crying.. carving 4 her maan.. 4 his love… e came near to her…. Caressed his hand on her forehead…

"tere ismn koi galti nahi hai geet… don't blame urself.. plzzz don't punish urself.. jo kuch bhi kia…. Vo maan k liye tha"

He goes 4m thre… after cloing the door… n switch off the lights.. so tht she can sleep…

PRECAP- full truth abt their sufferings..

So soryy frnds… 4 nt completing it… I knw I told u all tht I'll reveal all in this update… bt my hand is paining .. n I cant write more.. bt will pakak promise.. nxt mn to krugi hi… es baar jhel lo… seriously m nt in the state to write…. Will update soon….

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Originally posted by: nats0101

superb..

waiting for d truth!!

awesome...loved it...
looking forward to know the next...

thats oaky dear we will wait for it
suspense can draw in more readers for you no really
so they are both suffering being away from each other
wonder why she did this
what the hell is she doing to herself
take your time dear
that was so intense the feelings they have for each other so beautiful
cheers for pm

nice update.

superb update..loved it
Aww Maaneet past moment ws so cute
OMG!! geet suffuering for sum disease
waiting for the truth
continue soon
thankx for pm

superb update...
maaneet loves each other sooo much but reason kya h jo geet maan ko chodkar chali gyi...