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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mel420

oye repeat queen the tile isn't made up by me na credit goes to my di

yeh sab mere mobile ka kamaal hai;) lol ohhh title tera dia hua nahi hai he he
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Congrats for the another work dear...wow luks like u have a few more in ur bag 😉...ab chalo I need at least one update daily😆.


Superb start dear...luking forward to it

Cherishh where were you kaha gayab hogi thi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mel420

Cherishh where were you kaha gayab hogi thi


Was busy with wrk dear, but still I read all yaar and don't wry me back to spoil plans of "shock booster."😆😆

Will comment from ur next updates dear...Keep rocking

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Cherishh


Was busy with wrk dear, but still I read all yaar and don't wry me back to spoil plans of "shock booster."😆😆

Will comment from ur next updates dear...Keep rocking

😆 your shock booster is ready bring it on 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: mel420

😆 your shock booster is ready bring it on 😛


Pehle katrnak updates toh do..If u r too sweet in ur updates, then my heart beat will increase its pace which just cannot be controlled😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Cherishh


Pehle katrnak updates toh do..If u r too sweet in ur updates, then my heart beat will increase its pace which just cannot be controlled😆😆😆

😆update this weekend so be ready
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Part 1

Maan put a struggling geet in the car.Hde sat down next to her.

G:What are you doing, where are you taking me, how dare you ruin my wedding day. What's wrong with you

Maan chuckled, while Geet looked with anger filled eyes at him

M:Geet breath. So many questions at once.

She looked out of the window to control her anger.

M:Misty let me answer you question one by one.I am talking you with me to KM, are home. I didn't ruin your wedding day, I just saved Vikram from marrying a girl who is already married.

G:Liar I never married you

M:I am not finished yet Miss hot head

Geet shot daggers at Maan. While he returned them with a smirk

M:Where was I haan your third question's answer.There is nothing wrong with me, at least nothing that I know about.

G:Your a mad stalked. I am not your wife. I would never marry a nut head like you and even if I was you wife then I want divorce

M:You want divorce

G:yes

M:Okay good to now

G:Great so drop me back home I will file a divorce tomorrow

M:No

G:No matlab

M:Matlab it's great to know you want a divorce but you ain't getting one. I am talking you to KM and that final

G:Kidnapper

M:If you want to see me as a kidnapper, even then I have no issues

G:What do you want from me

M:Nothing Geet I just want my Misty, my wife to live at her home

G:Are you mad. I ain't your wife.

M:Do you want proof Jaan

G:Erghhh No thank you, keep you fake prove by yourself

Maan stopped the car

G:why did you stop the car

M:Misty you where so lost talking with me that you didn't realise we reached hom.

Maan stood up and opened the door for her but geet didn't move.

G:I am not coming with you

M:How cute you want me to carry you. Alright Misty your wish is my command.

Maan was about to open her seatbelt when a fuming geet shoved his hand away.

G:No need I can do it myself

M:As you wish jaan

G:Stop calling me that

M:No

Geet felt like pulling her hair he was driving her crazy. They entered KM. Geet looked around dahm she thought so many guards how the hell will she escape from this hell. Maan saw her looking around.

M:Jaan you can't escape so let me show you your room

Geet walked with him to their room. It was full with their Marriage pics. Geet gave him a angry glare.

G:Why did you put up fake pics all over the wall

M:Meri marazi Jaan. Now you go and get changed

She nodded fuming from inside.She came outside to find Maan laying on the bed. She glared at him grabbed a cushion and went to the sofa. Maan stood up walked over to her and picked her up.

G:You monsterdwhat are you doing

Maan chuckled.

G:What's so funny

M:I just loved my nickname you gave me Misty

G:Erghhh I hate you let me go

She hid him with her little fists.

M:Misty you do understand that hitting me won't safe you. Sweetheart you hands will hurt and you will get tired so stop the useless effort.

G:I won't sleep on the bed with you

Maan pulled her cheeks jokely

M:Your so sweet when you angry

He put her on the bed and walked over to the sofa. geet's eye's widened

G:You will sleep on the sofa

Maan nodded

G:I guess you aren't that bad

Maan chuckled and closed his eyes.Geet wasn't feeling sleepy at all she get tossing and turning.She was thinking about Daarij he must be really worried she thought.

G:Maan

M:Hmm

G:Are you still awake

Maan opened his eyes

M:Haan Misty you okay

G:Can I call daarij to tell him I am okay

M:No

Maan closed his eyes again. He heard a sniffing noice he opened his eyes to find a crying Geet.He walked over to her and next to her. he carresed her hair.

M:You okay

She looked up to him

G:Like you care

M:I do. Tell me what's wrong

G: I wanna leave

M:Sorry Misty can't do that but if you want anything else I will do that

G:I wanna talk to daarij

Maan closed his eyes.

M:Theek hai

G:Really

Maan looked at her he fellt great to see her smile

M:Yes really.

Maan handed her the phone.

G:Daarij

D:Beta where are you. Did he hurt you

G:Nahi Daarij. Mein theek hoon

D:Beta come back

G:I can't he won't let me

D:Can't you escape

G:No

D:answer in yes and no. Is he sitting next to you

G:yes Daarij

D:Are their guards all over the place

G:Yes a lot

D:Okay try to win his trust

G:Hmm theek hai

Geet hung up

M:Feeling better

Geet nodded

M:Now be a good girl and go to bed

G:Maan

M:hmm

G:I am not sleepy can't we talk

M:Sure

G:Why did you kindap me

M:Goes I couldn't let you commit a huge mistake

G:Mistake

M:Haan trust me you would regret marrying Vikram at the end

G:Hmmm

M:don't you remember anything

G:No sorry

M:so you want me to tell you everything from the start

Geet nodded.

Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
am really linking the way this lovely FF is going!!

Res for comment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome Start...loved the Update
continue soon
thankx for pm




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Posted: 12 years ago
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mysterious & interesting story

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