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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...me on cloud 9...dancing in joy...finally...hmare maan and geet ek ho gye...wo maaneet ho gye...unki shadi ho gyi...m jst sooo happy...
Luvd geet's excitment for getting married...👏
it was such a superb update...flawless update...faboulous...plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago






PART 32


Maaneet were very happy and excited with this new event, the biggest event of their life. But little sad as they did not inform dadi and mohindar. But they knew, they did not do anything wrong as it was purest place to be get married and also, it was their parents agreement too , so they were relieved.



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Maan was over the moon. He had his soul mate, his jaan, his angel for ever. He looked her. She was looking so beautiful in this new avatar, like everything of her , was of him n him only. He took her in his arm and left form there. They came back to jeep and started their new journey to home. Everything was changed, every emotion was new . They were two when they came here, now they are one. It was so exciting for both, more for maan. It was all unexpected. Every view was dancing on their heart beat tunes. Mountain became more blue, cloud turned more white , like they have washed themselves for welcoming maaneet.



Other hand geet was happy, very happy. She had maan. She had her dream wedding and maan fulfilled her dream. She doesnt want to go home . She wanted to enjoy this moment with their special memories. " maan !! '' she called . "haa geet'' he replied



geet - maan I dont want to go home'' she said pouted



he stopped jeep. " kyu geet ''



"wo .. dekhiye na maan.. how beautiful place is it .. I want to stay here for a day.. mujhe yaha ghumna hai '' he smiled. She wished what he had been wanting, since they came here. A day only with her. " wo toh thik hai geet.. per hum dadimaa aur uncle se kya kahenge '' he made a serious face



"woh mujhe nahi pata .. wo sochna aapka kaam hai .. wase bhi..ab toh mai aapki wife hu to aapko meri har baat manna hoga ''she said with so much attitude..



"wife !! hamm.. per geet.. wife ke toh aur bhi bahut saare kaam hote hai '' he looked her and said in very romantic tone..



"kaam .. aree haan.mai toh bhul hi gayi thi '' maan smiled.. felt butterflies.



"maan ..aap niche aiye '' she said.



" kyu '' he confused.



"uff maan..jo mai bolti hu wo kariye na.. niche utariye '' he did what she said. geet went to his side. She covered her head with dupatta and bend down.



maan jumped" ye kya kar rahi ho ''



geet- maan ..sidhe khare rahiye ..hilna mana hai '' maan stood looking her antics. She bend down and touched his feet "maan ab mere sar pe haanth rakhiye aur ashirwaad (blessing) dijiye ..'' maan was amazed. He blessed her unknowingly. She stood up and looked down, covering her head more. She was smiling, kuch jyada hi



maan- ab ye kya kar rahi ho '' he frowned.



Geet- wo mai nayi bride hu na .. to thora sharma rahi hu '' maan was numb. He wanted to bang her head somewhere but loving her act also. " geet jeep me baitho '' he could utter only this much. They sat and started jeep. After some hour they stopped for lunch. Maan took food to jeep as he wanted to enjoy a single moment with her, alone. They feed each other lovingly. They finished and now , maan had to search for a place to stay as geet was stubborn, not to leave today.



"geet..yaha koi achhi jagah nahi mil rahi '' maan said, coming back from a local hotel, which was not so comfortable to stay.



" maan aap kyu pareshan ho rahe ho.. mai batati hu kya karna hai ''



"kya '' maan was scaring..



"wo hum jungle me rahenge .. jase wo film me hero heroin hote hai na wase '' she said like jumping from seat.



"you mean camping '' maan asked ' hmm ..wase idea bura nahi hai '' he was being romantic.. but least knew.. geet and romance cross connection.



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They were in forest. Making camp. He was very fond of camping so had all these things. It was dark . Dense jungle, surrounded with mountains, a lake was waving beside. Indeed it was beautiful place but in day light. Now it was looking so scary. Even maan was scaring a little, for her . But geet.. she was so happy as her dream was in front of her.



Maan- geet tumhe dar nahi lag raha



geet ' kyu ..dar kyu.. aap hona mere sath..



Her statement made him satisfied. He smiled. How easily she says , what he always wish for. She was so pure, away from any ill. He went to her. She was standing, near lake when maan came and hugged her from behind. "geet'' he whispered in her ear. She shivered. He kept his chin on her shoulder " kya dekh rahi ho '' he asked in husky tone..



geet pointed toward lake " wo.. kitna sunder hai na maan''



"nahi.. ''



geet turned to him.. " sunder nahi hai '' she asked ..



"hmm .. hai .. per meri gteet se jyada nahi '' he cupped her face and kissed her forehead. She shied and looked down..



maan- geet tum fir sharma rahi ho '' he asked smiling ..



geet nodded" hmm.. ye real wala hai '' maan laughed in her cute talk and hugged her tight.. "oo geet.. you are so nice.. so cute.. mujhe chor ke kabhi mat jana .. '' dont know when his eyes went wet ..




Geet moved back and looked him. She cupped his face and kissed on cheek " kabhi nahi jaaungi.. wase bhi aapke alawa mujhe kon itna pyar karega.. '' he smiled and kissed her.. they both spent their night, sleeping in each other arms .. happily.



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Next Day



They reached geet home, scared. They went inside and got more scared, seeing dadi there. Dadi looked geet with sindoor and red thread. She understood. " ye sab kya hai maan .. aapne shadi karli '' she was angry.



Geet looked maan thinking dadi did not accept her. Maan was going to say when geet stopped him. She went to dadi " dadimaa .. isme maan ki koi galti nahi thi.. wo maine hi sab kiya'' said looking down, with tears..



dadi looked her. "aree geet beta..aap ro kyu rahi hai .. hum to mazak kar rahe thy.. wase bhi aaj nahi to kal aap dono shadi to karte hi na.. fir abhi hi sahi .. hume khushi hai ki aap dono ne ek pavitra (holy) jagah pe ek dusre ko apnaya .. hum aapse naraz nahi hai beta . Haina mohindarji ''



mohindar- haan geet.. hum khush hai



dadi hugged geet , looking her pale face. Maan was looking them , lovingly.



Precap : Back To Delhi 😉




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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice, lovely part
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
it is really awsum
i loved it geet is so so so cute
waiting for next update
love u sweety
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
geet is so innocent unknown tat her life can change any second..
i really hope ki she never forgets maan
chahiye apna astitva bhool jaye par hope she does not forget their love
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Posted: 12 years ago
so beautiful and cute partcont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i always love ds cutipie geet..
real waali blushing.. i was laughing out loud..
Geet s all filmy.. she s relating all her life incidents in filmy manner..
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute part 😊
loved Geet's sharmana😉
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Posted: 12 years ago



yeh shayad aane waale toofaan ke pehle ki shanti hai...

kisi ne kuch nahin kaha...

all ae happy and accepted their marriage without any naatak...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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