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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

poor maan ab khel antakshri...😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
me ur all link of ff
my inbox was full tih i delete al message so plzzz give me the update again plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago



ha ha Maan ke sath Antakshri khelegi Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
becare maan hamesha inki bholi bhali baaton mein phass jaatein hain
but what can he do also he cant not listen to what she has to say naa
so they are going to temple to start their relationship off with a new start and blessing of god good
so wonder what gonna happen in the temple
man these two are so good together naa
hope they will be together forever
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update dear all are happy now
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update love it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

(Banner credit goes to me only )


PART 30



(i m not feeling well, so giving short updt this time..dont know how it is .. pls bear for once )


Maan please chlo na antrakhshri khelte hai '' she requested. Maan was in dilemma. He in his whole life, never ever had played this song game.. in fact he never liked singing but now , how could he refuse his angel request. He tried to divert her mind. "look geet... abhi kitni raat hai.. hum kal subah khelenge ''


"nahi..mujhe abhi khelna hai'' she was stubborn. "if you wont play then I wont talk to you.. dekh lena '' saying she turned in anger. Maan was trapped. " thik hai geet Khelo '' he said irritated and quite embarrassed as he dint know much songs.. she jumped and kissed his cheek. He smiled looking her smile. So she started ..


(I picked these songs from Maine Pyar Kiya Antrakshri as I love it )


Aaja aayi bahar dil hai bekara, o mere rajkumaar ..tere bin raha na jaayeee.. aa ja '' she acted with song like any typical 60s heroin.. maan rolled his eyes..


"maan.. J se aapko gana hai '' she said excitedly... maan chocked. He again tried to make her understand but she did not. Finally maan had to sing .. he started "ja..ja mujhe na ab yaad aa tu .. '' as he sung geet burst out laughing.. she held her stomach and fell on back seat laughing.. maan was dumb stack.. he stopped jeep and looked her.. " geet kya hua.. tum pagal ho gayi ho kya'' he was feeling embarrassed yet happy to see her happy.


"o..o babaji.. maan aap..aap na mat gaaiye.. '' she was stammering while speaking due to extreme laugh. Maan now felt bad. He started jeep without talking her. After few times geet stopped laughing and looked him. She noticed he was upset. She felt bad and cursed herself. "maan'' she called him softly but he was hell upset.


Geet came closer to him and again called him but he dint replied. Geet cupped his face and brought to her side, but maan removed her hand. She was feeling like cry. She pouted and held her ear " m sorry maan.. please mujhe maaf kar dijiye.. kasam se , mai fir kabhi nahi hasungi ''


"shhh..'' he stopped jeep and kept finger on her lips making her quite. " khabardaar geet jo fir asa kaha.. '' he cupped her face which had tears . He wiped it " geet tumhaari hasi meri zindgi ki sabse bari chahat hai .. fir kabhi mat kahana ki tum nahi hasogi .. when my geet smiles, my whole world fills with happiness.. I would allow whole world to laugh on me geet, if it carve a smile on your face'' he kissed her forehead. She hugged him tight. " m sorry maan'' she again whispered. " its ok geet '' he replied. She raised her face and kissed his both cheek. He too kissed her cheek and started jeep.


"tumhaari nazar kyu khafa ho gayi .. khata baksh do..gar khata ho gayi " she again started …


"humaara irada to kuch bhi na tha.. tumhari khata kud saza ho gayi .. '' this time maan too sing with so much of love.. they played for some time then geet started feeling sleepy. She rested her head on his shoulder and slept. Maan covered her in his arm


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They reached temple when it was almost morning. They took blessing. Both, heartily was praying for their future. Maan looked geet. She had closed eyes, lost in her prayer. He looked her with pure and deep love. He prayed God to keep them together forever. A mere thought of separation brought drops in his eyes. He wanted to have her , only for him, in all births. He could not live without her. Since he got to know about geet condition, he had died thousand time, thinking what if she would forget him, their love.. still he controlled his heart, made it understand , she could never forget him. But now, dont know why, he had fear.. fear of loosing her, fear of she would forget him and his love made him weak. His heart was shaking and crying. He wanted to do something which could tie them together. He wanted his authority on her in all sense,, he wished his ownership of her mind more than her body. He knew her body is his only, but mind.. what about mind ?? No I need my rule on her mind, her soul her entire life... he looked to Goddess statue and then red color powder. which was laying below statue. He saw geet . she was still in prayer. He wanted to ask her but he knew , she had already accepted him, in her life. He stepped ahead and He took that sindoor and filled her head...





Precap : ye kaha aa gaye hum. yuhi saath saath chalke
Teri baaho me hai jaanam.. mere jism jaan pighalke 😳




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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovuuu superbbb update...hehehehehe omg antakshari part was sooo funny 😆...maan was singing hehehehe me also imagine maan while singing 🤣...hehehehehe lovely...waise i got ur surprise maant ne geet ko sindur pehna diya iska matlab omg maaneet ki sadhi 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
so maan's fear made him to do tat

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