MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 9 - Page 63

awesome update

Once again another dreammyyy update... hayyy !!!

beautiful update

omg...soo romantic...
i loved it yaar...looking fwd...

Congratulation for new thread

Sorry for late comment

As I was and am still in leave

Btw Come to the updates now

Part:-55

Nice, lovely, beautiful part

Loved it

Loved how maan try to go with everyone happiness, all cause of geet

May be geet's love is changing maan

Loved their little tour in brindavan , their masti enjoyment

Loved maaneet moments

Maan is trying hard with their relationship

Loved maan's gesture

Part:-56

Awesome, brilliant part

Loved it

Loved geet's excitement and more loved geet's achivement

Geet's happiness and the way she share the news with everyone of her family

Loved it

Loved the way maan feel proud of geet

Geet's happiness increase more with that

Loved their little celebration together and how maan agreed for street food

Award night:-

geet's excitement , happiness ,nervousness r all coming out

she is happy to see her parents , brother, devar, devrani, little vicky there

but her smiles vanish with the news of dadi ma and maan will not come

but her all happiness drained out when she find out her husband, her life partner will not come, she can't able to share this moment with him

she can't able to express her happiness with her husband

but geet's understanding nature is beyond imagination , that time also she is trying to understand maan's his other main commitment

I'm truly loved this geet whose understanding, determination r beautiful, beyond anything

I really don't know what to say about maan's his other commitment for any reason

Truly dispappoint with him ,

I can guess what's his main priority and commitment for that he missed geet's award function

But geet's is again trying to understand the situation

Loved it

Part 57:-

awesome, nice part

Feel sad for geet after know the reason of maan's absense

Well guessed it still

I can understand maan has big duty towards' poonam and her family it's really good and loved he didn't forget them I loved this gesture of maan

But that doesn't mean maan didn't commit a mistake by not attending geet's function

Maan may be think that his relationship with geet so much strong , this thing is so small to do anything with their relationship

Well just say m sorry or feeling guity is not done for maan

Another way don't know y m feeling maan never try to do anything for his relationship with geet

It's geet who always try not maan

I'm not saying maan should go that function

But there is thousand ways to control the situation but no he didn't try

He try short part by saying he is feeling guilty and sorry

Again maan disappoint

Geet's realy has big heart ,and again her understanding nature

How sweetly geet's understand maan and say she is feeling sad as a wife , that her husband didn't attend the function but not cause of the cause

But one thing geet said right relationship work karne ke liye koshish dil se hona chiaye which is very much lacking from maan

Sorry but there is thousand way to make the thing look better

As a wife geet's wish that she will take the trophy when her hsuband will be there ,w ill share this with her husband with her life partner but how easily maan said sorry and excusing himself

I'm not saying u can go without meeting poonam's family

That's also very much needed , as poonam's family member also very much imp for maan and m truly loved it

But what about geet and her wishes poor geet till now didn't get those things from maan,

He is trying and trying but not dil say

People can manage manything together but for maan choose what is too close to his heart not geet's function as he know somehow may be he will smajaho her , and she is so sweet and will understand

But what about a wife's wish to share her happiness with her husband, this things will not come again as I guess after their marriage this is first thing

Reason is not imp , for that maan missed but y maan missed a husband he again failed to fulfill his duty

There is huge lacking from maan's side

Maan is taking care of poonam's family very nice of him , m again loved this nature of maan but

As husband he failed

He should inform personally atleast if he can't attend the function

But I really' loved geet's understanding nature and words to maan , how easily she say and reasoned out those things

Hope maan understand he get a gem which he is neglecting very much

If he can't go to the function for few mins ( if he go for few mins and say some urgent thing or imp guest will come , so he can't attened ) that also good

If there is so much time problm that he can't get, just once he himself call geet, text geet about the reason , that he can't come as something urgent come but no y he will do that

Don't but truly disappointed with maan

Maan never think for geet's expectation as a wife, he choose short way for feeling guilty or saying sorry

Sorry if this comment hurt , m not saying anything against u, or this story it's just my view as reader for maan, sorry again IF my comment hurt u

Again truly amazed by geet's understanding nature loved it

Loved geet's understanding, so caring nature

About maan's insecurity well understand it'll take time for him .

Part 58:-

Awesome, beautiful hot, passaionate part

Loved it

Their first kiss was so beautiful with full of passion, submission

But geet is so much drown in passion that she didn't realise her hand is bleeding

Such mein iye lerki bhi na

Oh no not again,maan's sorry phir se suru hogaya

Geet said right by saying sorry he almost again ruin the beautiful moment

Part 59:-

Awesome, amazing part

Loved it

Maan is taking care of geet

But geet is feeling shy

Loved maaneet moments

Continue soon

P.S.:- one req if u can then show maan's understand as life partner how it's imp to share happiness and sadness with each other and how to manage time

Pls don't mind but pls make it na ,

P.S.:-hey pls don't end this ff so soon, m enjoying this ff pls continue it

M very sad to read the note and pls pls continue this ff

M enjoying it too much

I really loved this ff ,pls pls continue it

When are u going to update di...???? Waiting...