**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF#9 NOTE ON PAGE 147

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Speechless.. Superbly written
Eagarly waiting
Contionue soon

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Khusluvsmaaneet

@Khusluvsmaaneet

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Thnx a lot 4 d wonderful update:-).thnk god dat geet responded +vely to maan otherwise maan would have been feeling more guilty..bt hw cn dadi ma think so low abt maan.
I m sure maan's love n care will remove d bad memories from geet's mind very soon.
Hope rano n mohinder will understand maan's decision.
And yes!good to find dat geet is xcited abt living with maan in the same room..
It was a gr8 update..each n every line was awsome.
Maan's presence now soothes geet...
i cnt stop praising this update..its its..sry i m getting speechless..

Edited by Khusluvsmaaneet - 13 years ago

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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

hey...

haven't read this update yet but I know it wud be brilliant...

but I promise will comment in detail after reading it...

thnx for pm...

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

love u

Marhaba

awesome update jaano ..i bow to show

u showed all the feeelings amazingly ... muaaah!

maaneet ka dard ho ya passionate love, innocence of geet aur maan aur dadi ke baatein!

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

hann lovely pics .. just superb pics .it goes 100% with d scenes that to with emotions!

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

wow simply awesooome upd.
loved it superb...
cont.soon...

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

You know everytime while commenting i really feel short of words.I really need to brush up my vocab so that i can properly praise you outstanding work.1st of all i'm moved wid d pain maaneet are going thru & then their passion swept me away.The mini honeymoon was hmmm...again i'm at loss of words.Now eageily waiting 4 d elders' reaction on maaneet's marriage. And finally thanx 4 reading our comments so deeply & then taking out time to reply us.It really feels great.

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

i 2 hate dose who raise deir hand on any1...bt in case of dat rajji i jst wan 1 slap frm a brothr to his sis for hr wrng deeds...!!!

Bt nevr mind it was jst i want 2 burn hr alive due 2 hr act...being geet's sis how can she...was she so much involve in hr pleasure dat she doesn't care of hr surroundings...!!!

I m truely agree wid u varshu...bt when i think about naive n innocnt geet...nothng wrks...!!!

OK NOW ABOUT UPDATE...
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omg update was so emotionly passionate...!!!

Maan was himslf feeling so much guilty for geet's state...he was totaly wrench out...!!
I was also feeling realy sad for d cnditn of maan n his innr turmoil...!!!

Strnge was dat stil now geet was al d way thinking dat he is angry wid hr...she is such a darling how could any1 get angry on hr...aftr suffrng so much also she was thinking dat is was hr mistk...!!!
Oh so finaly aftr dpresion dat kiss was needed...both were pouring deir fear n al inhibitions...n i was lost in dat*wink*
so finaly FLAMES OF DESIRES r ignitnd inside geet too...bt poor totaly cnfusd n scard by d hr own body's reactn...nw i dat case maan have 2 wait n take evrythng slowly!!!

D discussn of dat rohan-rajji fiasco...gosh i was so...chaddo...!!

*sigh* finaly maaneet r back to delhi...i m so much happy...yippee!!!

Due to past events dadima had lost her trust in hr own blood...how could she think so low about him...*me n maan both r hurt*...bt hr dis 1 actn shws how much she luv geet...!!!

I can't undrstnd neithr brij nor darji had told anythng to mr. N mrs. Handa about thngs happn in hoshiyarpur...!!!

I m sure evry1 wil undrstnd d whole situation n geet's situation...i can't even able 2 imagine how much hurt dey r gonna feel...!!!

darling did i evr tel u how much i luv u...u r such a mishty...u had describd d al situations n emotions realy wel...i jst luv u so much...u r jst 2 gud...!!!

Luy yaa...
Ummaaahhh...

Already waitng for nxt...

Edited by deepali1022 - 13 years ago