LUST FOR REVENGE THREAD 2 pt 92/93 updated 5/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Feeling sad 4 geet nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
@new thread..
a hearty congrats sweets...osm ff...u deserve loadz of thread

@update...oho..!!...kuchh jyada hi bura bura ho gaya yaar...
for 58th part..i think ayesha wasn't wrong..
suddenly if a guy will ditch w/o telling u any reason, doesn't matter even if he is the hero of our story...def the gal will feel bad n angry at the same time..
maan just ignored her..n started falling for geet...first he imagines that geet i wrong so he torches her..
then he starts feeling for geet...so he ignore Ayesha...other pp also hv some feelings...
n i think in whole sequence Ayesha was just a puppet...
so there is no problem if she reveals maan's truth...he deserves that...

in geet POV...she always behaved properly with maan..bt it doesn't mean that she'll forget dev so easily..n will start loving maan...n would luv his proximities...
it's just a few months that dev died...

so i think story is going very good..bt i won't like if Ayesha gets that punishment which she actually doesn't deserve...



in the end...ROCKING UPDATE...
thanks for 2 parts...
this time u make us to wait for long time..
nw do cont soon,,,:)
luv u loadz richa...<333
-akki(:

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
oh no geet ko sab pata chal gaya...ab kya hoga?????
Dis must be ayesha...!!!
pills ko importance dia matlab ku6 gadbad he...
Maan ko phone ke bare me kese pata chalega????
Maan ka suffering time aa gya he...
Will wait 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awesome update.eagerly waiting to know what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
😭 poor geet & maan.
All happeh coz of ayesha and maan's mum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread🥳

update was awesome unexpected twist 😲,poor maan😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh sab ayesha k kiy-dharaya hai...she is taking revenge on maan...wht a twist...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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**LUST FOR REVANGE**
PART - 60

GEET nt in a mood 2 listen ny wrd frm hm. She trying 2 move bt hr head strt spinning nd hr vision trned blurred slowly2. Maan caught hr bt she jerkly freed hrself nd fall on floor near bed. Hr womb is also paining bdly nd she sobbng cont.Maan steps 2 help hr bt she showed hr hand nd made hm stop.

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Geet:stay awy frm me.

Maan feared seeing hr cond.so he calld Annie in hs rom. D view she whch wid hr entrance in deir rum horrified hr,cnt undrstnd wats going on. She ran 2 Geet nd supports hr.

Annie:bhai y r u standng instead of helpng hr.

Maan again tried bt she stop hm again.

Geet:stop dere Maan.dont cm here.Annie he is nt allowed 2 touch me.

Annie scared + confued so she calld Dadi in hurry 2 handle d sit. Dadi also in amusmnt wat happnd wrong suddnly. She 2 sat near hr on floor. Annie hv tears in hr eyes seeeing hr condition. Dadi also asked d same que nd Geet agin said d same words.

Geet:Maan if u cm near me i do smthng so betttr u stay away.

Her voice fluffered nd vision gone sloly2. Dadi enqured wat happned exactly. Geet raised hr finger nd showed d files laying on floor. Dadi tuk dem nd read dem, she 2 stred Maan in angr nd hs eyes lowerd wid guilt. Annie also read nd gt huge shok. Dadi immediately called Sameer in rom.He also had d sam ques.in hs mind.

Dadi:Sameer beta is wqt samjane ka samy nai hai aap apni bhabhi ko uthaiye unhe hospital le jana hai abhi.

Sameer followed hr instruction nd lift hr up.bt wen he lifts hr in hs arms he felt smthng nd hs eyes widend.he chek hs hands nd scared more.

Sameer:dadima bhabhi do hurry bhabhi ko bleeding ho rai hai.

All shoked nd scared both. He quickly placed hr in a car nd all reached 2 hospital. She faints. Doc tuk hr 2 OT. All r in ten.nd angr both. Aftr 1 hour doc came frm OT nd dadi asked abot hr nd baby. Doc lopwrd hs head whch is a clear sign at smthng wrong happned.

Doc:i m sorry.

Hs words increased tension Maan tuk hs collar nd asked hm wat happnd wrong. Dad nd Sameer trying 2 losen hs grip.

Maan:frst u asked him y he said sorry.

Dadi trying harder bt he nt listning.so she slapped hm.

Dadi:chodiye humne kaha.aage apki wajhse baot bardasht kr rae hai sb ab or tamasha mat keejiye.

Annie:doc pls tell clearly wat happned?

Doc:i m sorry aap logo ne unhe lane me der kr di,isliye hum bache ko nai bacha sake.i m sorry.

All were in moarn again. Maan falls on hs knees,it seems as sm1 stole deir all energy. Maan bcm blank. Doc's word echoed hs tears. Annie nd Sameer falls deir heads on dadi's shoulder. All r criying badly. Geet shifed 2 normal ward. Aftr sm time wen she awake she shouts. Dadi went inside immediatly to cmposed hr. Dadi embraced hr instantly. She enquired about hr baby.

Geet:dadima where is my baby?y i cant feel my baby?(dadi only sobbing havng no courage 2 tell hr d truth)bolo na dadima where is my baby?

Dadi:sambhaliye apne aap ko beta.we lost our grandchild.

Geet:no aisa nai ho skta aap jhooth bol rae ho na.mujhe mera baby chahiye.bas.

Dadima hugged her tightly. She nodded no no. Her mind denied d truth:bas beta bas keejiye.bhgwan ki yahi marzi thi.itna rona apka liye thek nai hai.

Geet crying like hell. Maan is peeping from outside. He cant resisit hr cndition. He wants 2 fill hr in hs eembrace nd sooth hr pain,bt he dont hv a courage 2 face hr. He closed hs eyes wid immence pain. Maan cusred hmself.

Maan(thot):what i hv done. Pls Geet dont cry i cant c u in pain. Aaj mere gunaho ki saza sab bhugat rahe hai. Ye kya ho gaya mujhse.

Doc went inside 2 chek her. He cheked her pulse.

Doc:pls aap sab inhe aram karne deejiye.itna rona inke liye theek nai hai.

Doc gave injection 2 hr. Dadima made her laid again. Soon she went 2 sleep due to d effect of injection. Dadima caressed hr nd moved wid Annie nd Sameer.

Annie:dadima bhabhi bilkul tut gai hai.

Dadi:aaj humne Dev ki akhri nishani ko to kho hi diya hai lekin ab hm Geet ko nai kho skte.hum sabko ab unhe kafi support karna hai. Isliye apme se koi b unke samne royega nahi.

Aftr 3 days she gt discharged. Annie paked hr belongings but Geet denied 2 go bak 2 KM. Dadi mnd Annie trying 2 cnviense hr,bt all in vein.

Geet:pls Dadima dont force me.main us insan ka chehra b nai dekhna chahti jiski wajhse maine apna baby khoya hai.pls dadima try nd undrstnd,now its nt easy 4 me 2 go nd live dere.or waise b ab Maan ko meri koi zarurat nai hai.unka matlab khtam ho chuka hai or hmara rishta bhi.

Annie:pls bhabhi.

Dadi:nai Annie mat rokiye unhe.

Dadi kissed hr nd all 3 hugged.

Geet wnt wid Pinky nd Sameer tuk dem both 2 KM. Maan hears evrythng but his guilt stop him 2 face her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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**LUST FOR REVANGE**
PART - 61

PINKY tuk Geet along wid hr 2 hr place. Mr. Walia knows evrythng so he dosnt asked nythng frm hr. Geet ws nt in hrslf. Again tears strt sheding frm hr swallowed eyes,due 2 conti.weeping. Mr. Walia embraced hr nd console hr. He cant send hr 2 hr parent,coz Dharam recently gt minor attack. Mr. Walia decided 2 keep hr wid dem until Dharam gt well.

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Mr. Walia:bs beta bs kr.sab theek ho jayega. Tu to meri strong beti hai,aise himmat nai har skti.

Geet hell crying cont.soo Mr.walia nd Pinky 2:uncle my baby...

Mr.Walia:bs mera bachhe bs.

Both trying 2 calm down hr. In KM Dadi, Annie & Sameer ws angry wid Maan nd avoid talking 2 hm.. Only Arpita hv no complaints wid hm,coz she considered hs step is rite.

Arpita:y u r all ovrreacting? Watevr he planned is rite. She ws nt of dat worth 4 whch evry1 blaming my son.

Dadima glared hr:apko smjhna waste of time hai.filhal to ap ye sochiye ki Samrth jb Geet ko yaha nai payenge tb aap or apka beta kya jwab denge unhe.

Dadi lefts. Maan ws vry upset. He turned silent nd loked hmslf in hs cabin. Whole he dont allowed ny1 in hs cabin. Feeling of guilt broked hm badly. He ws going through d same pain frm whch Geet is going at d time of death of Dev. Destiny shot back his plan ovr hm nd return hm whch he gave 2 Geet. D ters whch he alwys gifted hr now he wrote dem in hs own.world. D hate game whch is use 2 play wid hr now bcm hs own destiney.
Maan's ws lost in hs thots. Hs rum ws filled wid darkness nd he cant able 2 c nythng. In veil of drkness he is tryng 2 sw d fogged image whch luks familiar 2 hm. He askd who is dere nd eyes widned wid shok wen image clears. Dev ws standing in front of hm wid a smile on hs lips. Maaan cnt able 2 met hs gaze. He wnts 2 apolozise 4 hs all sins.

Maan:Dev u here? How is it possible?

Dev smiles:bhai i ws alwys near around u.

Maan:i kno u also angry on me? I m failed 2 take care of Geet or Baby.i hv lost u again. I m sorry 4 hurting ur love.

Hs eyes filled wid tears.

Dev:pls bhai stop blaming urself.whatevr is happnd is nt ur fault at all. Nd dont think dat u lost me.i m alwys near u. Bhai u want me bak in ur life na?(Maan nodded yes) den scm out of ur sorrows nd bring bak ur love in ur life.(Maan sw hm shockingly) dont amused bhai,i know u love hr alot. Or shyad wo b karti hai.

Maan:no Dev she only loves u.

Dev::i kno she loves me alot wen i ws alive. Pr ab wo apki ptni hai,or apse pyar b krti hai. Bhai wo pagli aisi hi hai use sabka khyal hai isliye apni chahto or zarurto ka use pta hi nai chlta hai. Bhai wo meri thi pr zindagi or maut sath2 nai chal skte.ab apka hi uska aaj or ane wala kal hai. So go nd open ur arms 4 ur love.

Maan:bt Dev she hates me nd i deserve dis only.

His eyes filled wid pain,voice lowered nd evry bit of hm wants hr bak.

Dev:no bhai u misundrstud hr again. She ws so naive nd nvr hates ny1. Ha wo naraj ho skti hai pr nafrt krna uske bas ki bat nai hai.i kno is tuff 4 u pr apko use apne pyar ka ehsas dilana hi hoga.

Maan:lekin kaise?

Dev smirked:bhai u wnt me bak na? Den u must win hr. Ap dono k ek hote hi ap mujhe pa loge.

Slowly 2 he steps bakwrd,hs figure trned fogged again. Maan tryng 2 stop hm

maan shouts:Dev stop.

But he dont nd vanished out of hs sight. Maan shout in panic 'DEV'. HEe opnd hs eyes nd he searched 4 hm. Sasha cm in hs cabin

Sasha:wat happnd MK?

Maan twisted d talk nd asked hm y she is coming. Sasha passed hm a financial repot nd left d cabin.

Maan(thot):wat is all dis whch i sw few min.b4.no it ws nt my illusion,Dev ws dere around me.o god ab main kya karu?

Maan ws so lost in hs thots. He only think about Geet nd hs talk wid Dev. In evng wen he returns 2 KM .deir was a complete deadly silent. Lyk no 1 lives dere. Den he saw Arpit comin from d stairs.

Arpita:Maan main tumhara hi intezar kar rai thi achha hua tum aa gaye.

Maan:pls mom i dont want ny discussion.

Arpita:bt it is necessary beta.

Maan:ok mom tell me wat u want?

Arpita:Maan ab jb wo sinister apki life se chali gai hai to apko b apne bare me sochna chahiye...

Maan cuts hr b4 she completes:1 min mom bf u made ny plan i want 2 tell u 1 thng. Apse kisne kaha ki wo meri lfe se chali gai hai? Geet meri patni hai or rahegi. Ladkiya apne parents k ghar jati hi hai so wo b gai hai.lekin kal main use wapis le aaunga.

Arpita:but Maan..

Maan:pls mom let me finish frst. I love hr only nd no1 is allowed 2 take hr place in my life. Yaha main sabko bta du ki main use is ghar me wapis lake rahunga.

He steps 2 his room. Dadima, Annie, Yuvraj and Sameer also hear deir convo. All r in confusion now what he going 2 do? All r clueless nd hopes 4 d best only coz dey knows it was not very easy 2 bring her back...




Plsss Guys i req u all atlest hit like if u r not able to comm... Plsss its motivates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh no dear...yeh kya kar diye apne...miscarriage...wht a twist...ek twist kya kam thi ki apne doosra de diye...koi baat nehi...kyunki hum sbko phirse ek twist ka samna toh karnahi padega...jab geet ko uski parivaar k badbaadi k peechhe ki history pata chalega...m ready...aur maan ne jo kiya...usse toh bhugat nahi padega...kahabat hai na...jaise bowoge,waise hi paoge...

awesome n beautiful n superb updates...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago

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