LUST FOR REVENGE THREAD 2 pt 92/93 updated 5/12 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
Both parts r awesome.
Bt goli maan ko lagi ya geet ko.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved both parts they r awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome prts..nw maybe geet will forgive him
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is shot?????? May b dis will change geet...loved d updt...sameer knew Maan was der...all of dem were embarrassed...lovely updt
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Posted: 12 years ago

**LUST FOR REVANGE**
PART - 73

"GEEET", aftr d sound of fire Maan's sream sound echoed d whole jungle.Geet's eyes widnd frst den her vision trnd blurrd,she only hear d fire noise nd hr name scremd by Maan. Hr legs wobbls nd hr weak body falls blindly. Maan holds hr limp body in hs arms nd bend on knees tugging hr 2 hm. Hr chest area bleeds constantly,since bullet hit hr body. Maan's both h...
ands nd chest is drenched wid hr blood.

Geet ran wen he ordrd hr,bt she cant leave hm in danger alone,so she came bak nd sw hs life in dangr as Vikram is going 2 hit hm ny time. She ran nd cm btwen d bullet nd its trget.

Maan patted hr cheeks conti.2 awake hr,bt she lost hr concious cmpltly. Maan hugged hr tightly nd hell cryng.blood is oozing constantly.

Maan's voice fluffrd lyk hs nose:tume kuchh nai hoga Geet,tume kuch nai hoga.

He raised hr head near 2 hs lips nd kissd on hr hairs,keeping hr face glued 2hs chest. Meanwhile Sameer reachd dere wid search team,nd hs eyes filled wid horrer. He scared.

Sameer:bhai bhabhi ko ye kya ho gaya?ye sab kaise?

Insp.ordrd hs men 2 search d culprits. Dey tuk Geet's body in Jeep nd drove 2near by hospital. Insp.alredy informd so hospital team ws ready. Wen dey reached dey put hr on stretcher nd tuk hr 2 OT. Maan running wid stretcher holding hr limp hand in hs. Wen dy reachd OT Doc instructs all 2 keep out. Dey tuk hr inside. Maan's eyes bcm stone,nd only struck at OT's door. Doc locked d door. First dey put oxygen marks,coz hr cant able 2 breath nd hr heartbeat gettng lowerd.dey cleand hr wound nd strt operating on hr. Dadima reachd wid both kids. All had tears in deir eyes. Dadi trying 2 talk 2 Maan bt it seems he cant able 2 hear ny sound. Hs life is revolving around d momnt is sw hr last. Hs all hopes were hanging at OT's door. He is nt responding 2 ny1's. Sameer informd Geet's parnts abot dis. Wid in few hrs hr parents r dere. Hr mom hell crying. Hr father's eyes were wet 2,bt he is tryng 2 console hs wife. Brij nd mamji fell shatterd 2. All r praying 4 hr safty. Doc's r busy in deir job nd aftr sevral hrs dey cm out wid hr uncocious body laid on stretcher. Dey shifted hr 2 I.C.U. Maan's eyes movd wid hr. All rush 2 doc. He saw deir questioning eyes.

Doc in a weak voice:luk humne goli to nikal di hai lekin rite now we cant c nythng.blood loss bahut zada hua hai uper se goli lagi b heart pass hai.so we cant say nything until she regain concious.

Doc left dem all in deep moarn. Maan hear evrythng. He felt disperced as som1 stole whole land undrneath hs feet. He moved in I.C.U ward wid permission. He hold hr lifeless hand in which needle of a machine is inserted 2 monitor hr cndition. Maan gently kissd on hr hand.1 tear drop falls frm hs red swalloed eyes on hr hand.He caressed hr hairs nd kissed on hr 4head.

Maan talking 2 hr while crying:kya zarurat thi wapis aane ki?agr tume kuch ho gaya to i promise i ll die 2. Pls Geet meri galtio ki itni badi saza mat do. I know deir is no sorry 4 my sins,bt 4 dis y u punish urself nd all others who loves u so much.c all r going through so much pain,mere liye na sahi lekin un sabke liye to laut aao.Pls Geet cm bak 2 me,u cant leave me lyk dis.i cant stand widout u.

Maan wants 2 bring hr bak 2 hr sences bt she dosnt respond. Doc askd hm 2 leave now. He walk lyk a zombie,hvng no sences of hs actions. He strt walking outside cluelessly. Yuvi tryng 2 stop hm bt Sameer intrupts nd let hm go.

Sameer:jane de unko.wo is waqt kisiki nahi sunenge.

Maan walkout of d hospital nd walk blindly,where no idea,bt finally he stopped coz hs trance broked by d sound of bells of d temple. He luk at d Temple nd watch people going in having a lot of faith in deir eyes. But in mob of Venerators,his attenton is grabbed by 1 person who step up d stairs on hs knees wid a lightened lamp(deepak) in hs 1 hand. Maan enquired 2 d local vendor nd he explains him about dis.

Vendor:beta ye is pracheen madir ki manyta hai yaha jo b bhakt is tarah is diya hath me leke ghutno k bal chadta hai uski koi b murad puri jarur hoti hai.

Maan:baba kya sach me aisa hota hai?

Vendor:ha beta aaj tk jis kisi ne b ye dard saha hai wo khali hath nai lauta hai.

Maan:to main b ab jaunga.

Vendor:are beta ye itna aasan nai hai.puri 150 seediya hai.

Maan:mujhe uski parwah nahi ye 150 ki 300 b hoti to b main ye karta.

Vendor:thek hai beta maa durga tujhe shakti de or teri jo b mannat hai use pura kare.

Maan remove hs shoes. Vendor put diya o hs palm nd he ligtened it. Maan strt stepping up on hs knees. Wid evry passd stair hs pain is incresed in hs knees nd palm both,bt he only luk 4wrd 2 hs destination. Hs body strt aching bt hs love gave hm courage.no hurdle is big b4 its love 4 hr. Hs knees strt bleeding bt he ignores all hs pain coz no pain is bigger in front of hr life. Atlast he reached 2 d premises of d temple...
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

**LUST FOR REVANGE**
PART - 74

MAAN'S legs wr tremblng badly,no powr left 2 step ahed.hs knees r bleeding nd legs wobbles badly. Hs body trn weak,bt 4 sake of hs love's life he collct corage nd entrd in temple. He placed d diya in feet of idol of Goddess Durga. Priest cm 4wrd nd tikal hs 4head. Maan joined hs hands,closd hs eyes nd beg 4 hr life.

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Maan:hey maa plss meri Geet ki jaan bcha lo.i cnt live widout hr. I promise main use kabi pareshan nai karunga.

At d same time priest of d temple blow shankh as it ws d time of aarti. Maan atend nd stp bak 2 hospital. In hospital Geet's condition going worst. Nurse cm 4 hr chekup nd found she cant able 2 breath proprly nd hr wound's bleeds again. Monitor shows hr ECG trnd unstable. Doc cm hurridly. All scared more,deir herat beats abnormaly nd eyes trn wet again. Meanwhile Maan reachd dere. He was unaware of d hr prsnt cnditn. Seeing hs bleeding Knees all worried 4 hm 2. Brij went upstairs nd brot doc 4 hm,bt Maan wnt 2 c hr only. Dharam lied dat Doc r inside coz of casual chekup, doc cm nd bandaged hs knees. Maan now gt impatient nd move 2 hr. He sw Doc gv hr electric shock near hr heart 2 gv hr jerk,bt she cnt respond.it seems deir all tries going waste.Maan enquired. Hs breath sffocate.

Maan:Doc wat happnd?pls tell me wats going on exactly.

Doc in a low voice:truly speaking Mr. Khurana,inki nawz kamzor ho rai hai. She is nt responding 2 our ny treatmnt. It seems she doesnt want 2 live.

Doc's words nearly killed hm.how he cn tolrate dat she lost intrest in life bcoz of hm. Maan raan 2 hr nd bend on hs injured knees.as a result it strt bleeding again. Maan caress hr hairs nd pleads.

Maan:pls Geet getup u cant leave me.

He pleads nd cried contantly. Hs cndiotion is just like a small kid who is on d edge of lost hs spl toy. Doc doing deir job...


"It ws a lonly dark place full of fog nd mist. Geet walk blindly,cnt able 2 c proprly,suddnly she 1 familiar figure nd ran aftr hm. D figure strt moving mor fastly nd she ran behind hm.

Geet:pls Dev stop.dont leave me dis time.

D human figure stops nd turned 2 hr. Geet trying 2 touch hm bt he stoppd hr.

Dev:wai ruk jao Geet.

Geet:y?u alwys do dis 2 me.i wanna cm wid u.

Dev:no Geet u cant.tume to abi jeena hai.nd u r d only1 who bring me bak 2 life.

Geet:i cant gt u Dev?u made me cnfusd.

Dev:dat is d prob.of my sweetst frnd dat she nvr realize abot hrslf.

Geet:i only love u.

Dev:no Geet u loved me,bt now sm1 replace me alredy.

Geet hd ters in hr eyes:no1 cn take ur place Dev.

Dev:it only ur thots.just 4 1nc trying 2 listen d string of ur heart. Dey tell u who is d 1 who's simple touch made u mad. Who's mere presence affects ur heartbeat. Nd dats 1 is nt me Geet.dats nt me. Tumhare dil ki hr dhadkan pe har saans pe ab kisi or ka kbza ho chuka hai.(Geet lukd down while crying). Geet dont felt guilty.isme kuchh galat nai hai. He loves u alot nd u know dat. Dats y ur heart also responds 2 hm. Geet tell me m i rite na? U love bhai hai rite?

Geet sw wid hr teary eyes:and wat abot us?i dont want 2 betrayed u.

Dev:isme dhoka kaha se aa gaya Geet.janti ho beech me main aa gaya isliye shyad bhgwan ne apna faisla samjha diya. God made u 4 hm only. Geet hm hmesha dost rahenge. 1 meethi yaad bnkr bt dont spoil ur life 4 ur past. Geet insan ko sachha pyar badi mushkil se milta hai.tum lucky ho tumhe dusri baar zindagi ne firr muka diya hai,usse gusse ki aad me andekha mat karo(she trnd silent,as she is soo confused) Geet ws tm mano ya na mano pr pyar to tume ho chuka hai. Pls use apna lo.c he is calling u.

Geet:and wat about u?

Dev:filhal to mujhe jana hoga,pr main lautunga sahi samaye aane par.

Slowly2 hs figure blurred in mist. Geet trnd restless nd search hm here nd dere. She calld hs name bt no ans. Suddnly she hears hr name. Its Maan's voice. She trn nd saw Maan standing behind hving tears in hs eyes.he pleads hr 2 cm bak she moved 2 hm nd all things trnd black."

Maan:Geet pls wake up.pls cm bak.i promise aaj k baad jo tum khogi wahi hoga,bs 1 bar laut aao.

Maan still holding hr limp hand in hs hands nd crying 4 hr. D MSK who alwys knon 4 hs tuffness nd attitude,2day crying like a small baby. Doc get tensed more. While all others r clueless,hving no idea whts going on inside...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Emotional update!!!!!!!!

So geet took the bullet instead of maan aur abhi uski condition serious hain...hmm...Maan ko toh bahut jhatka lagahain yaar...
Jo msk kisi ke saamne jhuktha nahin hain woh aaj bhagwan ke saamne pe gutne thekkar jaa raha hain...
The talk with dev was described very beautifully...toh abhi dev ne use sahi raasta dikhaya hain...use aapne pyaar ke baare main realize karwaya hain aur kaha ki maan ke paas wapis chali jaaye...
Update soon...Waiting for geet to come back to maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
JUST LOVED IT DEAR
IT IS SO EMOTIONAL
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n very imotional updates

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