you are only mine- mg ff pt 10/ pg 19/ 12.8.2013

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

read all parts in 1 go one request from my side make the update longer
and try to update soon

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Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

nice ff but plz give long parts

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice concept.
but I would suggest you to give long updates.
do continue soon.

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sayu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

NOTE-
friends my exams are started and end at end of october.
i had all parts updated like 10 parts.
but due to my mom pressure as she take my notebook i cann't give u ffs..
so sorry plzz bear with me and yeah i will definatly try to update this ff whenever i get time.
so soorry from my herat...

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@jssood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

best of luck for exams

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lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

all the best for ur exams dear.

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sayu123

@sayu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

jizz ume updating today. my mom go to her class and no one in home. so just took my notebook and updating it. if short then bear with me. bcoz i am irregurly updating and feel quit guilty about it. missing my maaneet and updates of this ffs.😭

part 5

past

geet just cried and cried after brij was gone from their. geet's maa and papaji was helpless infront of brij. but brij was not satisfied after waht he dont with our geetu. after thinking something he went to out of house.but all this drama was seeing someone from in laptop.

he cann't saw his geet in pain and being toture by her brother.

when brij went out of his house maan's bodyguard saw it and called to maan.

bodyguard:"boss, hmmm abhi abhi brij ghar se bhar nikla hua hai."

maan:"okay. make sure you were protect geet."

maan had order odyguards that when brij will go out of house they will onform him. maan has used some chip when geet changing her clothes from which he can be used to see all what ever happening in geet's house( friends this my imagination so don't try to find out whrere there can be any clip😉😆)

at the same time maan called geet's house. geet's papaji recevied the call.

papaji" hello"

maan" hello, geet ko jaldi se bhar nilakle aur se khana de kar doc ke pass le jayiye nahi to acha nahi hoga."

papaji"aap kaun? aur aap kya bol rahe hai?"

maan" aap ka subhchitak. jitna bol raha hui utna hi karyi"

he cut the call and fusliriously seeing screen where geet was sobbing and tied tightly.

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people plz avoid my mistakes and spelling mistakes.

criticism welcome and plz comment and like it.