you are only mine- mg ff pt 10/ pg 19/ 12.8.2013

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

part 8
short update
brij 😡
maan apni misty ko jaldi dhundo

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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

bas***d brij...
Hate him...
Hope maan'll find geet b4 her punishment...

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

waiting for next part continue soon

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

poor geet😭
brij😡
continue soon

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sayu123

@sayu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

part 9-

maan was madly searching for geet. last two days was killer for him. he ddn't eat and sleep whole two days. the thought geet missing killing him from within.

the tape from geet's home showing error. after lots of searching he concluded that someone from family was culpid behind the geet missing.

it's had then he received called from shekhar " boss, i just get news."

maan" hmm..."

sh" boss, the name of culprit is..."

maan"what??"

maan anger was rising from second to second. he could not beleive that geet's own brother could do something to her.

he made some calls and arrnge the trap liked where brij could get easily ffoled.

sorry for short update.

plzz ingore grammer and spelling mistake.

have one q are u liking the story space ?

r i change it?

Edited by sayu123 - 12 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

part 9
loved it
finally maan ne brij ko trap karne ka plan bana hi liya
cont soon

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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nice update...
Finally maan ko pata chal gaya...
Waiting for his action...
Do cont soon...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

god they are such brutes man
and what pathetic excuse of humans her parents and brother are
how could they do this to the poor girl
god had maan not known he would never have found out it was her brother behind her disappearance
i hope you will give us little bit bigger updates next time please
hope maan gets brij for sure
he sure was going crazy not knowing where geet was