MG FF- BE MINE FOREVER updated EPILOGUE on 02/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
great update. but I think this is only Maan. wiaitng for another update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
SO YASH IS NOW IN THE HOUSE
WILL THEY ALL ACCEPT HIM
THERE IS A POSITIVE CHANGE IN GEET
WILL SHE RECOVER
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93


Going interesting step by step...
Love it dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Awesome update

Loved it

Continue soon dear

Soory for late replying
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Posted: 12 years ago
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BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 8


Yash goes to Dadima. Her eyes clearly show how much happy she is aftr seeing him alrite. As she cant able to speak but her face
...
expressions shows everything. She tries very hard to speak.

YASH:dadima pls aap khud pe zor mat daliye.main yahi hu apke pas or ab apke pas hi rahunga.(he hold hr hand in his own) i promise dadima aaj k baad main apko akela chhod k kahi nai jaunga.

He caress at her forhead. Today Dadi felt so relaxed. Yash made her sleep again. When he came out Annie summoned him in her room.

ANNIE:abi tak to sab theek hai lekin aage ki rah bahut mushkil hai so jo bhi karna soch samjh k
krna. Har kadam fuk2 kr rkhna hoga.

YASH:aap fikar mat karie main apko shikayat ka koi mauka nai dunga.

ANNIE:or ha ek or zaruri baat glti se b apni hadd par mat krna. Tum Maan bhai hone ka natak kar rahe ho,Geet k sath ek hadd me rehna.
Understood?wrna mujhse bura koi nai hoga.ab jao Geet k pas baitho.

Yash moved to his room. Meanwhile Geet got concious nd gt feared not seeing hm in d
room. "MAAANNN",she screams his name in fear. Yash is at d door. He hear her voice.he isntantly get inside.she breathed very hard. Yash went to hr and sat in frnt of her.

YASH:what happened Geet?

She immediately hugged hm. She crying conti. Yash feel very awkward as she hugged him very
tight.

YASH:kya hua Geet,koi bura khwab dekha kya?

She hugged him more tightly.

GEET:ap pehle promise karo aap kahi nai jaoge.

YASH:ha Geet daro mat main yahi hu.ek kaam karo tum so jao.

But Geet dosnt want to leave him. Yash loosen her grip and maid her laid properly. As he start to move Geet hold his hand and put it under her head. Yash unwillingly sat dere again. She slept. Whole night pased but Yash was sitting near her head in d same position as Geet not allowed him to go. She still sleeping on his hand.

Yash thought:wah beta pehle hi dinn tera band baj gaya aage pata nahi kya kya hoga.

He again tries to move his hand nd finaly he sucessded. He came down nd greet evryone bt except Sunaina no one talk to him. Annie went to c Geet. Geet also wake up. Annie hugged her.

ANNIE's eyes wet slightly c her normal after such a long time of nine months:i m vry happy to c u back.

GEET:main kaha gayi thi,main to hamesha se hi tere pas thi?

Annie realize dat may b she is nt remembering those painful 9 months.

ANNIE:achha ye bata b.fast me kya khayegi?

GEET:Annie Maan kaha hai?

ANNIE:hey bhagwan is ladki ki to sari baat bhai se shuru hokar bhai pe hi khatam ho jati hai. Meri maa bhai sbke sath neche baithkar b.fast kr rahe hai. Ab tu b kuchh kha le warna aaj main office bina khaye hi jaungi.

GEET:kyu bina khaye kyu jayegi?

ANNIE:coz tu nai khayegi to main b nahi khaungi.

GEET:tu kabi nai sudhregi hai na? achha main fresh hoke aati hu fir dono sath me b.fast karenge.

Geet went to washroom. Annie felt extreame happiness aftr such a long time. Both eat together...
One week passed. Slowly2 Geet start recovering. Yash still hav to prove Sunaina nd Karan so he decided to gave reception party
for Karan and Natanya. Both were in amuzement.

NATANYA:jab hum tume Maan veerji mante hi nai hai to tume kya zarurat padi hai ye sab karne ki?

YASH:ab tm dono mano ya na mano lekin bada bhai hone k nate mujhe tumhe kuchh gift to dena hi hai so i decided to throw a rocking party for both of u. Jisme mere or tumhare sare frnds invited honge.

Natanya want to said somthing but Karan stops her.

KARAN:theek hai hume tumhara ye gift manzoor hai.

Both go in dere room.

Natanya:Karan aap jante hai ki ye ek froud hai firr bhi apne uska proposal accept kar liya.

KARAN:jaan relax maine bhi use accept nahi kiya hai.lekin uske aane k baad se company ke shares ki value firrse bad gayi hai. To humare liye bhi achha hai ki ye yaha rahe or firr ghar pe rahega isme koi harm bhi nahi hai.

NATANYA: are you sure?

KARAN:Ofcourse dear. Waise bhi jab party mein or log iss se milenge to unhe bhi yakeen ho jayega ki MSK laut aaya hai. Or firr humari company k shares or up ho jayenge. So pls party me normal behave karna.

She hugged him.

NATANYA:ok as u said.

Both smirked...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 9


As per Annie's instructions, Yash maintained proper distance wid hr,nd she doesnt feel awkward as she is use to wid dat kind of a coldness. So she nver complaints. Both were keep silent in their
...
room. Bt she had a relief dat Maan is perfectly fine nd Yash doesnt know on wat topic he made discussion wid hr. So both keep silent mostly. Wen Annie got to know abot d party she summoned hm.

ANNIE:wat d hell r u trying to do? Ye party ka kya drama lagaya hai?

YASH:aap hi ka kaam kar raha hu.

Annie doesnt get hm wat he is trying to do.

ANNIE:kya matlab?

YASH:main ab Maan hu to us hissab se apne chhote bhai ki wedding pe use gift dena to banta hai na.bas isiliye ye party rakhi. Or Adi ne b bataya tha ki Maan ko parties ka bahut shauk tha.

Annie agreed wid hm.

ANNIE:yes u r rite.tum ye party kr
sakte ho. Party k sare arrangements main kar dungi. Or ha pls is party me bahut hi high
profile log aayenge so behave lyk a gentlman in frnt of dem.

YASH:dont worry i' LL handle.

ANNIE:good ab tm jao mujhe abi or b kaam hai.

Geet also kno abot party so she go to Annie to discuss wid hr.

GEET:Annie main b teri help karungi party organize krne me.

ANNIE:nai Geet abi to tu puri tarah theek b nai hui hai or itna stress. No way.

GEET:pls Annie main bore ho jati hu pls.

Annie cant say no to her.

ANNIE:achha baba theek hai tu karle sare arrangements.

Geet felt happy

GEET:achha sun Maan ko mat batana ki sb maine kiya wrna wo gussa ho jayega.

Annie cupped hr face.

ANNIE:meri cutie ka hukum sar ankho pr.

Both smiled nd hugged. Geet get hrslf busy in d party's arrangements. She make sure dat
Maan dont kno about dis as she doesnt want to make hm angry. She do best to make dis party rocking nd lavish. Bt Yash saw hr
working fr a party. On d day of party all dressed up so beautifully. All went to party hall in Grand Hotel,owned by Arjun Oberoi.

YASH:wow mam apka taste to bahot achha hai.itni shandar party to maine pehli baar dekhi hai.

ANNIE:first of all font call me mam here,ny1 can listen nd secondly,
ye arrangmnt maine nai Geet ne kie hai.or uska taste bahut classy hai. Ab suno aaj yaha bhai k frnds b aayenge to tumhe bahut sambhal kr rahna hoga. Or ha Sameera bhi aayegi aaj party me, coz ye hotel Arjun ka hai.

YASH:dont worry abot hr.waise is party me family k sare members hai par jisne itni mehnat ki hai wo khud gayab hai. I mean Geet kyu nahi hai is party me?

ANNIE:kyunki ye party Msk ki hai.

YASH in confusion:to?

ANNIE:actually shaadi k baad mom ne bhai or Geet k liye aisi hi party throw ki thi. Bhai k sabi frnds ko invite kia tha.(she start
telling hm what happened dat day...)
On dat day all friend of Msk and Sameera ws also invited by bhai in dat party. Geet also came to attend it. But seeing hr in his party
Msk's blood start boiling. He dragged hr in a corner nd scolds her badly.

MSK:tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri party mein aane ki.yaha mere sare friends aaye hai or tume dikha kar main humilate nahi hona chahta.

GEET:lekin Maan ye party to hmari recception ki khushi mein di hai.

Maan fumed more.

MAAN:mujhe or gussa mat dilao.tumse shadi karke waise hi meri zindagi kharab ho chuki hai.ab kam se kam kuchh pal to shanti se jeene do. Meri ek baat achhi tarah se samjh lo aaj ke baad meri kisi b party mein apni ye manhoos surat mujhe kabi mat dikhana ab dafa ho jao yaha se...

Annie turned silent for few moments...

YASH curiously asked more:Annie mam ek baat puccho aapse agar
ap bura na mane to?

ANNIE:ha puchho.

YASH:lekin apko ye sab pata kaise chala.apne kaha tha ki Geet kabi kisi se kuchh nahi kehti thi yaha tak ki apse bhi nahi.

ANNIE:Geet kuchh nahi batati thi ye sach hai lekin main sab janti thi. Wo meri best friend thi isiliye main us par nazar rakhti thi. Us dinn bhi jab bhai use daant rahe the main wahi thi. Chhupke sab dekh rahi thi.

YASH:apne Maan ko roka nahi?

ANNIE:kaise rokti. Geet kuch batati to main bech me padti. Anyways i think ab tumhe bhi Geet se waise hi behave karna shuru kar dena
chahiye.

YASH:lekin Geet abhi bhi beemar hai aise me mentaly torture karna kya theek hoga?

ANNIE:i know she is weak,dats y i m asking u to start it now. wo jitni jaldi bhai ke moh se bahar aa jaye wahi achha hai uske liye.

YASH:theek hai jaisa aap chahti hai waisa hi hoga.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
nice updates😊
feeling bad for Geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
part 8
does Karan and Nayanta have any hand in Maan's life?
nice part...
poor Geet but shes back...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9
that was so rude of Maan...
what did he hate Geet so much?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh...so yash is acting very well as maan...
I guessed right that karan and his wife are villans...mujhe lagta hain they are responsible for maan's accident isiliye they are not believing this guy to be msk...hmm...they are only worried abt office and money...crooks...
Geet ne toh bahut kuch saha hain msk ki haathon par uff tak nahin kiya...bechari...i feel very sad for her...
Aage party main kya hota hain dekhte hain...
Will be waiting for ur update...

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