FF-Obsession,chapter29 and next thread-pg150,7oct.

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

srikrithi

@srikrithi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Nice & interesting ff.
Loved all parts.
Waiting for next.

Quote

dreamy4ever

@dreamy4ever

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Nice update. Baby part was too cute 😳.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

what a turn of events u have planned! awesome!!!! so a lil gal have come to maans life... 5 weeks she will be so tiny... obviously he will need geet out here... 😃

she was found in the garbage?? well thats the truth of this society where we live! read a lot like this regularly in the newspapers... but atleast y dont they think of the babies safety and instead of places like garbage y not in front of an orphanage or so? dont they feel scared? patha nahi raat ko chain se kaise so patha hai yeh log...😡😡😡😡

i totally loved the way u used "WE" for taking her to the hospital...🤗

am looking forward for some cute scenes of parenting job by maan... and ofcourse maaneets and now with the lil one too... continue soon

Quote

gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

fab update dear

liked the baby twist and the poem

maan and maan's little pari now

interesting

liked the line

he did not request her but told her to come...request and thanku...

shows great bond between maan and geet

i think if he will ever propose her he wont ask her

will u marry me geet

but tell her

marry me geet

and yes do take time to create maan geet love or bond

will wait for the next update

Quote

Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

hi dear just read your fic
its awesome
completely different concept
initially didnt liked maan and pari as couple
but later on with story its just seems great
continue soon and add me in your pm list

Quote

fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

superb update...oh horrible parents should rot in hell..so pari's obsession finally did smthn gud littly baby got shelter n maan got reason 2 live ...

Quote

Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

It was beautiful

People who dump their unwanted babies in garbage bins or drains r the most inhuman creature of d world...l don't know how their conscience let them live in peace afterwards...but baby Pari here is lucky as she got wonderful parents

Quote

seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Amazibg dear. Can you post the picture of the baby if possible,i feel due to this baby maaneet will come close to each other. Continue soon

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

so she wanted to adopt a baby because of kavitas poem
man at least some good came of it then
now maan has more reason to live without pari his daughter
aww the poor baby how could they do such things to babies man thats horrible
but now she has maan as her father so thats okay well hope it will be okay