Maaneet FF Envious Romance THREAD 3 - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago
plz tc bravo thats the spirit of maanetian ur amazing thinking of readers in such state bravo love u even if u don update tonight
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't stress urself dear...Take time for the update...Give ample rest to ur hand...
By the way ur comment about writers of gf getting a hand injury is true...it happened to almost all the writers...
Get well soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
take care
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dear plz take care of urself
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... Thats sad
take care dear updates can wait...
Get well real soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really sad for you plz take care
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Oh god take rest dear,dont strain too much..we wil wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zahra plz take care!
hum toh hain hi hungry pan aise nahien ke aap apne dard mein bhi update do.
plz do take care!
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Posted: 13 years ago

guys...!

I have a bad news...!


I broke my left elbow...i was coming down from stairs as the lift of my house was taking a long time...damn my lift...damn my large bag...and damn the water of those stairs...!


I think for the writers of maaneet fictions...hand injury is a must...Why don't know...!


BUT WAIT...!!!!!



That doesn't mean that i won't update anymore...!!


Off course i will update...!in fact i will update tonight...Cause i can never ignore those hungry reader's puppy faces...but as i will type it with just one hand...it will take a little time more...



Tonight i will submit the update...after that i will go to hospital for bandage...


LOVE U...

Zahran... 😔









''...Who the hell was that girl...??''

...jo maan bhai ko itna paagal kar dia...?''

''...Kaun thi woh...?...''


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It took five doctors and 3 powerful doses of injection to calm him down...and finally have some rest...



The news became the hot topic of the year...news,gossip channels...magazines were publishing articles and shows like crazy...Though they couldn't gather any pictures due to acute security...but the news of accident and the slight gossip of the ''Hot...but...Cool'' MSK 'getting hyper for an unknown reason 'itself was enough to bounce up the TRP levels of those channels...




In the mean time Sam was feeling out of the world...the reporters...paparazzi's were following her like psychos...and getting her interview like mad...and she loved that...finally some limelight to show off her Gucci...Channel...dresses...and designer accessories...




Maan was continuously on drugs to be calmed down...another week passes...and the frown on Dr. Mehta's forehead gets deeper...




Aanie's condition was also not good...her whole life revolved around her big bro...and when she sees her idol in this condition...anyone can guess...what would have gone through her...but in this situation...she couldn't even break down for a minute...she has to be strong...



...4 live media conferences...and 12 interviews...finally made the media less active...plus office works...deal signs and meetings for these 2 weeks...made aanie aware of the true meaning of ''misery''...being a barbie doll of the khurrana's she never faced such condition...and this made her a matured young lady...



but though she works 20 hours per day...she never missed the chance complaining to his unconscious bro about Sam's acting during these days...and finally dosing off keeping her head on his bro's bed holding his hand...




Dr. Mehta finally stopped the treatments to make maan conscious to see his present reaction of this accident and the news about the girl's death...




Maan slowly gained his consciousness to see aanie looking at him like a shivering excited puppy with her big round shape eyes...(she only needed a crazy dog tail to fill the missing link of dog and mankind )



Seeing her state and thinking the bracketed line maan smiled closing his eyes again and spread his one hand to signal her to hug him...annie made a cry sound and hugged him with a jump hiding her face in his chest...




''Meine 2 weeks se bed pe nehi soyi...''she managed to say that between her sniffing...




Maan rolled his eyes tiredly and kissed her head smiling...in this serious situation her first expression has to be a 'complain'...!




''nini...abhi bhi complain...?mujhe khara to hone de pehle...''he said in a broken voice...




Maan always calls annie 'nini' when her pampers her...


Dr.Mehta secretly sighed...maan is normal...he didn't react like he used to do lately...!


''...hamari raani bitiya har raat tumhare paas hi thi...aur bauhot saari complain ki sam k bare mein...hai na Annu...??''Dr. Mehta said loudly to ease the situation...and it worked...a bit...!




Maan chuckled and lightly slapped her head...''Idiot kid...''




Idiot...??


Suddenly he started thinking...where had he used that word before...




Flashback...




...''just 18 ho...isnt it a little odd to droll over someone with 11 years of age difference...?''



Geet whole face turned beet red...she
was caught red handed...and she was
guilty...she turned her head down...being
sorry...and little humiliated.




Maan walked round her...looking at her
figure...her height...her hair...her
complexion...then stopped standing in
front of her...



''...its true that u r beautiful...but u don't have the quality to attract men for acute
primitive urges...so,u r no match for
me...
''saying this he went away...but he turned his head one last time before
going again for his unfinished work
out...



She was standing with a cute confused
face...she didn't get the last line...'acute primitive urges' means...?




Maan understood by seeing her facial
expression that she didnt get what he
meant...he smiled a little...'' idiot '' muttered and then walked away...


Flashback ends...


Maan looked at the plain brown colored wall in sadness...and tried hard to control the tears which were shamelessly fighting back to ooze from his determined eyes...




Annie sensed this and immediately said...''Bhai aap jaldi se thik ho jaao...woh Handa's bauhot problem kar rahi hain...''




Maan narrowed his eyes...suddenly the ruthless...arrogant...ever cunning MSK became alert...again...!


''What problem...??''maan swiftly asked...



''Woh...they r not accepting my signs on the legal papers...they r saying that ''The MSK'' must sign...cause they don't wanna take any risks...''Annie complained.




''God Annu...! haar baat ko tum complain mein kaise convert kari ho...???''Dr. Mehta said being super amused...!




Annie gave doctor uncle a proud smile...but maan's super brain was working with it's full speed...which projects were hanging...which were left to be signed later...and which meetings might be due...what about those inters entry...did that happen...cause to start it only and only his personal choice and interview matters...




''Oye...! 'windows 90' model ki super advanced PC...!stop working warna...!''




Annie's words made mehta uncle laugh loud and maan to look at her and smile...




''maan u'r immune system always surprises me beta...i hav'nt seen such cases like this a lot u know...cause u like u r good to go...''he said happily...




''daadima nehi aayi...?''maan said slowly...




''woh daadi...ko...woh heart attack hua hain...''annie fearfully said.




Maan's head shot up...he looked at annie and asked...''What !!! how is she now...where is she...why r u here...u should be there taking care of her...and u'r with...i'm fine...!''maan said restlessly...




'' Why.???why u won't come...??daadi bhi boli thi ki tum bhi usse na milo...!kya hua bhai...??i wanna know it from u...mujhe sam se wrong info nehi sunna...mujhe aapse sunna hai...!''



Maan looked around Dr.mehta was long gone...There was only them that time...



''kya geet saach mein...?''he couldn't finished...


''She was in the explosion zone and for that there was nothing left of... her...body...''annie said uncomfortably in a low voice...



Maan hid his face in his palms...and cried bitterly...his whole body gave up hearing this news...




annie looked at him carefully...



''You Loved Her bhai...!!!!!''Annie said shocked...!!!




''I STILL LOVE HER ...annie...''Maan said looking into her eyes directly...!




Annie wiped her tears and again hugged him...



''aisa hamare saath hi kyu hota hai bhai???...pahle mumma...phir papa...aur phir ye saab...kya humne koi galti ki...????''annie cried hugging him tightly...




''I have done Wrong...thats why this all has happened...''maan too hugged her and wiped his tears swiftly...


''Lekin aapko toh aapni zindegi mein aage barna hai na...wo...wo...aah...geet ko bhulake...''




''...I am a married man annie...and i can never in my life think of someone else in my life without my wife...''Maan said firmly.




Annie jerked back from him and looked at him astonished...!!!




...the sins i've done...can't be forgiven even if i repent for the rest of my life...so i don't want to do anything...i just want to be with my geet...baas...aur kuch nehi...wo nehi...toh usski yaad hi sahi...''he said controlling his tears firmly...

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Thank u...


I want to type so many things for u guys...but can't cause i think the wound is turning blue...not sure...gotta go to the hospital...


I may won't be able to pm...but i will definitely post it on ''FF Daily Updates Thread 3''


Thread-4 added

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Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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