Maaneet FF Envious Romance THREAD 3 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel sorry for Geet😭
Really wanna know as to how did Dev become her fianc and then what happens in present???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Past aur Present ke beech mein, me feeling very for both b'coz i can't see them like that plz update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for an update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a shocking update. Poor geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...so maaneet's marriage happened like that...poor geet...kitna sehna par raha hai isse...

congratz..👏...humme vi treat chahiye...☺️...ek or update 😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago





SD caress her hair and went away...



Maan was watching this from far...




The sight was making him feel miserable...



He had to talk to her and apologise to her...



But what will he say...



he slowly went near her and stood behind her.



''I am sorry geet...i didn't know that u r...umm...I am sorry...but u also have to understand that i am involved with someone else and i...simply can't...marry u ''he mummered the last part...



he was feeling very uncomfortable ...from the moment daadima said about her depurture...he has been experiencing a strange restlessness...a strange feeling engulfed him...



What the hell is that...?????



Geet slowly got up and walked pass him...but maan held her hand and pulled her to him...frustated...he didn't even know why he did that...



''Don't walk away when i'm not finished...Damn it...tum samajhti kya ho aapne aap ko...haan...maanta hoon ki khubsurat ho lekin isska matlab ye nehi ki tum mujhe aise treat karogi...ye silent ho kar tum mujhe tarpa nehi saqte...(pst)...woh...umm...mein...jaao...so jaao...'' he left her hand frustated and went away hurriedly...a little drunk...but clearly in his senses...



Geet simply walked away...



Maan reached to his room and kicked the door close.



''What the hell is happening to me...???mana ki wo larki achchi hai lekin isska matlab ye to nehi ki we can be matched as a couple...i am a world famous buisness tycoon...and what is she...a mute...orphan girl...we can never be togather...can we??



Why can't we...????



Maan's stood by the balcony...his heart was asking his brain helplessly...



Why not...???



***************




Next morning...


Afte spending all night in the balcony...engrossed in that one question...Maan entered in daadima's room...only to see SD lying on the bed and geet tensely sitting beside her...nakul was standing beside her with medicines...



''Kya hua geet Daadima ko...??''Maan suddenly asked geet making the atmosphere worse...



Geet silently left the place...



Maan looked at geet painfully...



''Woh...daadiji ki BP low ho gayi hai...iss liye she was...''nakul said but daadi said tiredly...



''...i thought ki geet to mein personaly drop kar doongi...per...''



''OK...! Then she can stay till u recover...''maan suddenly said but geet entered the room with her bag...she was all packed up...



His heart started to beat faster seeing the bag and then geet...



geet signed something to SD...maan looked at her helplessly and then looked back at daadima...deparately wanted to know what she signed...



SD frowned...''bus ya taxi kyu...paidal hi chali jaao...''and gave a tired irritated look to geet.



''Don't be rediculous geet...ghar mein 17 cars hai aur tum bus ya taxi se jaao gi...???''maan said and he himself got shocked at his behavior...what the hell just happend...???



Geet cringed away a little from him...and tightly held the bag...showing her stubbornness...



''haan to driver tumhe drop kar degi...''SD said finally.




Geet slowly went towards her and touched her feet...



SD couldn't control her tears...she slowly caress her head and kissed her forehead...



Geet smiled and took the bag to go...



Maan was silently watching her...



He didn't know what to say...he didn't know how to hold her back...




Geet slowly walked past him and went away...



**************



geet was about to sit in the car suddenly maan shouted...''Wait Geet...!''



he came to her with office attaire...with his brifcase and laptop bag with him...



Geet looked at him confused...



He simply shoved them in the back seat... told his driver to get out from the car...and sat on the driving seat starting the engine...



''What r u waiting for...an invetation card...??''maan said to geet who was looking at him confused...



''utho...meri site...tumhari place ki raste mein hi hai...''he said putting up his sunglass...looking forward...



Geet looked at him and about turned to walk away...


Maan said not moving a little bit ... ''Mohan...agar geet madam ne meri gari mein nehi baithi to usse iss manshion se bahar nehi jane ki izazat nehi hai...is that clear...???''



Geet looked back at him...he was clenching his jaw...still looking forward...




But she can't stay here for a minute...



So she silently opened the door of the back...



''Tumhara baap ka naukar nehi hoon main...saamne aake baitho...''he said firmly...




Geet slowly came forward and sat beside the driving seat...she cringed away from him pressing herself slightly to the door...


'' Seatbelt...''maan said.




Geet silently fastened it...




Maan then started driving...



On the way he was looking forward but all his concetration was on geet...how she was wiping her sweaty palms in her dupatta...how she was uncomfortable sitting beside him...



...And he loved it...



Every bit of it...!



he caughed a little...to start a convarsation...



''Tumne khana khaya...?''


Silence...


''Geet...?''



She looked at him suddenly...


''Tumne breakfast ki...?''



Geet looked down and nodded yes...then turned to the window...clearly not wanting to converse further...



''Manshion mein breakfast 8:30 mein hota hai...it's 7:00am geet...so clearly u haven't done any breakfast...there's a 24x7 cafe on the way...we can have breakfast togather if u want...i mean maine bhi kaal lunch ke baad se kuch nehi khaya...aur mein jaanta hoon ki tumbhi kaal ki lunch ke baad se kuch bhi nehi liya...''



maan looked at her...wanting desperately for her reaction...geet looked back at him and nodded a no...and again concentrated on the outer view...




He looked forward...disappointed...he wanted to spend some time with her...now he wanted to know her...personally...no agency...no reference...he wants to judge her personally...and above all...the bloody distance of her ophanage and KM is decreasing...and he has no reason to hold her back...



''...By the way...u must have felt bored to eat those blunt lunch of u'r place na...i know a 7 star hotel...their foods r really amazing...u should try it out...i'm free this lunch...i mean i'm free after 1...if u want i can book for 2 today...''



Geet didn't respomd...and for that he got mad with rage...for the first time in his life he is asking a girl out...and she is refusing..!?!



''off course...tum kaise aa sakti ho...mere saath...?? tumhare liye toh...dev hai na...tumhe toh wo bauhot saare malls...disco...date...dinner...pe leke gaye honge na...''he said clenching his jaw...and bit out...




He was trying to be indifferent and casual but his words sounded like a despo...who is head over heels in love with a girl sitting who is now sitting beside him.



Wait a minute...



Did i just say head over heels...!!!!??



just then his cell phone rang...he parked beside a road...and when he looked at the caller id...he got serious...It's Sam...!




''Hello Sam...bolo...''he said looking at geet...to see her reaction...but she was least interested...and this created a pain in his heart...''



''Kahan ho tum Maan...i want to talk to u Now...there is some serious things to discuss...''sam said seriously...



''Hmm...''he said still looking at geet.



''Maan r u even listening to me...u got married in a mandir yestrday!!!' Sam screamed at the top of her lungs...



''how do u know this...??''maan said suddenly.



''Mohan se...'' Sam said fuming...''I want to talk to u...Now...kahan ho tum...i want to meet u...in private...ek kaam kar...i am near at xxx bridge...for a shooting...come there...NOW...and don't u dare forget it...!...and make sure that she comes with u...''



Maan cut the call and said...''we have to meet sam...The situation needs to be explained to her...''



Geet was silent...but feeling very irritated...she just wanted to go back to her happy old life...she has seen enough drama...so the sooner it ends...the better it will be for her...being impaitient...she started looking here and there...




Maan looked at her for sometimes...wanted to know her ans...but seeing her silence...he took that as a yes...




In 20 minutes they arrived at the bridge...she had parked her car far away from him and called him to come to her alone...



Maan cut the call and looked at geet...she was still looking out...he got mad seeing her casual behavior...he just couldn't tolarate her being indifferent towards HIM anymore...



He harshly pulled her towards him and said in a low tone...''We r not finished yet...tum chaho ya na chaho...tumhe meri baat sunni hi paregi...''



Her afraid doe shaped eyes were creating a different sensation in him now ...his grip on her arm lessen and he his other hand unknownly went to her face...



She fearfully freed herself from his lose grip and cringed away...



He said ,''don't u dare move a bit till i come back...we have some unfinished business...''



Suddenly his gaze fell on some boys...who were looking at geet with their lustfull eyes...maan's blood boiled seeing that...looked back at geet...who was unaware of that...so he pressed a button...which created a xtra black layer over the window and front glass...so that she couldn't been seen from outside anymore...



He harshly pulled her again and said...''U r going away...that doesn't mean that we won't see each other again...so...don't u dare ignore me again...sam and i need to sort things out and then we will talk about OUR future...till then...be in this car...got it..??''



Saying this maan got out from the car and crossed the road to meet sam...



Maan came and said irritated...''couldn't we disscuss this matter in a private place...??''



But he was surprised...sam wasn't seething with rage...she was crying bitterly...''Maan u know na i love u then why r u doing this to me...



Maan knew very well that she was acting...no one's mood can swing such a way so fast...he got irritated...



''Stop this nonsense Sam...u know that this is a illigal
marriage...at least...daadima
didn't take that step on which
u were panic about...''Maan said being least interested.



He suddenly got very irritated on himself...he himself didn't like his words...he didn't want geet to go away from him...but the realisation was still very weak...



''Maan plz...don't behave like this i love u and that's why i'm
doing things like this...look if
things go like what u've
said about our marriage...then i am willing to
say sorry to her for that day...




Suddenly a HUGE burst made them bend down and press their ears tightly...sudden screams...fire and crowd made maan's head follow that direction...



..Only to see Maan Singh Khurrana's priceless car crushed down by a petrolium truck and somersaulting it's way down...off the bridge...falling into the deep water...




...With his illigal Wife in it...!!!!!







Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan's car fell down with geet in it
what will happen now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update

OMG!!! Maan's mood swings, Geet's silent torture and sam's overacting, everything just superb...
Waiting for next part
Edited by GurtiArti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

0mg is geet in tat car

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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful update..maan was asking sorry or showing his angry.. my maan ur real jerk, instead of asking sorry u were showing ur right on her, u stil dont know wat u want?.. geet ur correct, giving silent treatment to maan, which makes him irritates.maan now atleast u realize ur love for ur geet, ignoring ur angry for som time. oh god my maan's car got accident with his geet.. hav geet went off before te accident?...i love te update so much dear
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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