NEW SS-MOTHER OF HIS CHILD-Last update/pg75

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Hey Just read Your ss. Its simply awesome

Continue soon

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

awesome but i forgot the story
on which track is it
i have to read prev pt

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

part 13 (1)
awesome...
cont soon dear...

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jitupatole5

@jitupatole5

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

it was too nice.😊.thank u so much for this update.WISH YOU A VERY

HAPPY NEW YEAR. egarly waiting for the next update, plz try to update weekly.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

wow maan...good...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Read this one in a go. Lovely. Enjoyed it a lot.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

wonderful story, beautifully written...👏 the way Maaneet are slowly opening up to each other despite of Maan's guilty feeling, scared Geet who is threatened for her mother's life and the misunderstanding created by Seema impeding both from expressing their feelings and tell the truth.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Loved the emotional bonding Maaneet started to share, the scene of socks, both sharing the pain of losing their parents, Geet comforting Maan for the loss of his mother and Maan also trying to calm her about her father's death. the way Maan is making efforts to make her trust him by expressing himself and then Geet's courage in facing the snake incident fear of losing Maan...lovely updates.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

And the innocent Geet, the way she is fascinated and attached with the baby toy, her golden fish...and the humor that gets created due to this, I was rofling while reading the talks on Dolphin and bath tub, and Geet mentioning - 'aap us mein gend se khelate ho...' 😆

Enjoyed reading all the updates...waiting for the next part.