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Posted: 11 years ago
Finished reading in one go... Awesome superb story
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey When are You updating Next Part???
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plz update soon. egarly waiting.
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Eid MuBarak everyone...Wish all of u Lots of Happiness
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Originally posted by: AAKMH2

Eid MuBarak everyone...Wish all of u Lots of Happiness



EID Mubarak 😃
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NEW SS:Mein tenu Samjhavaa kii

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3780648

do check please
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when r u updating 😭😭😭
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egarly waiting plz update sson.
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when will you continue,egarly waiting,plz plz plz update soon.
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Happy New year
PART-13(1)

'hmara baby'.She looked up at him surprised.This time he didnt looked away or put up any fake expressions to hide his true feelings.His lips were pressed together in silence but his eyes saying it all.She felt herself lost in some other world as his honest gaze sanked in her heart.Both looked away as Purvi entered clearing her throat.She leaned down to hug Geet,added teasingly:lg rha hai mene wrong time men entry mari hai.
Maan teased her back:hmesha ki trhan.
Maan smile disappear while Geet's grew wider as Saleel came inside wid bouqet of fresh red roses.
Geet excitedly:Saleel tum?
Maan cudnt help his dry tone:tum yahan Mumbai men?
Saleel was about to answer maybe truth bt Purvi intertupted:ye bhi yahan kaam se aaya hai.jis hotel men hum ne stay kya hai whien mila mujhe.u know coincidence.
Saleel raised his eyebrow while Maan suspeciously luked at dm.Purvi:Maan hm Saleel k friends ki car men aaeyn.unhe Geet se milna tha,if u dnt mind men unhe andar bula lun?
Maan nodded,she went out to brought dm.Saleel sat near her lovingly hold Geet hand dt turned Maan face red just like an angry chubby child whose expressions saying'isko kis ne license diya meri wife ka hath pakrne kaa?'
Purvi entered wid Simmi & Sanchit.After friendly shake hand wid Maan dy greeted Geet.Simmi admired:tumhari friend to buht brave hai.itni delicate cndition men bhi itni strong.
Saleel:haan,tbhi to mene pucha nhi ye kesi hai?mujhe pta hai ye bilkul theek hai.ye bchpan se hi jhansi ki rani hai.rakhi men bndvata tha aur ulta ye meri hifazt krti thi.
All laughed while Maan mumbled like a fool:rakhi?
Geet got so excited remembering her best childhood memory: meri rakhi sb se bdi hoti thi.
Purvi:wow. .mene dkhni hai.
Saleel:sure,mene Geet ki di sb rakhi ache se smbhal ki rkhi hen.
Saleel could easily read sudden happiness & assurance on Maan face.His tone teased:Mr.Singhania aap kahan kho gaey?
Maan instantly got up,afraid to be caught:nothing,tum sb aaram se baatien kro,men doctor se mil kr aata hun.
He left,Saleel caught Purvi staring like getting whole scene.He gave assured smile to her in return.

On Request of him,Doctors kept Geet in hospital for two days for complete checkup.Surrounding of hospital was scaring for her bt along wid Saleel,Purvi her new friends Sanchit & Simmi visited her 2 or 3 times a day.But da realy reason behind her smile was da way he didnt let her hand go for a moment..she felt it like heaven.His little actions whispering smthng sweet,smthng special to her always.His care,his worry left nt only her bt nurses & doctors in aww.


When dy came out of hospital her mind went back to memory of deir earlier arrival here.She rememberd blind start of her life wid a stranger whose child she was caring.She surprised feeling his hand on her back..lyk a perfect life partner who wanted to protect his precious blessing at any cost.She luked away from his shiny eyes bcoz dy were showing her path widout destiny.
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Simmi & Sanchit tk dm to all superb fun places as dy promised.Camping,fishing,movies,shopping...dese 4 days flew like minutes.It became realy hard for him to work on his mission as Purvi & Simmi always revolve around Geet.But he never missed a single chance whnever he gt to shower his love.He knew vibes of his love was reaching her bcoz her moves were lyk too sensitive,too afraid to hurt.She always luked away from ocean of his love,always tried to moved away from his precense bt her hesitation had became his determination.

She watched him in aww as he was tryng hard to adjust all dishes on little serving table.Geet sitting in bed'ab men theek hun,men kr lungi'

Asusall Mr.London attitude:men krlunga,mujhe bhi aata hai & continued to do his work.
After setting plate he forward his hand to feed her bt she turned her face to other side,said wid same attitude:men khud kha lungi,mujhe bhi aata hai.

From sweet to sour'Oh these ladies-what a mood switch?but he too was a perfect match.Without a word he handed her plate & started eating his own.Instead of familiar spoon there was fork for her but dt was not a reason of her pout.The reason was he should insist her,ordered her to ate wid his hand...But why?she asked herself.
Lost in thoughts,she pressed da fork on chicken piece more dn enough.His fork frozed before reaching his mouth as da flyng meat did goal on his neat,clean white shirt.He got up quickly to wipe da stain from tissues.In a moment he found her standing inches away from him,trying her best to wiped her gifted stain.
He hold her hand dt was wiping his shirt on chest area.She luked up in his eyes;da look dt always produced heat inside her.She whisperd:sor..ry.
Her cheeks turned red on sudden desire dt aroused by his gaze.Her shiny eyes big in shock,her cheeks red in guilt, embarrasment.She was realy looking like a pure kanch ki gudya.He Oh God hw much he wanted to taste those trembling lips.Hw much he wanted to crease dt soft skin of her cheeks bt instead he let her hand go.The sudden look of disappointment on her face arouse his confidence.His condition was same to her even more worst dn her bt no he cudnt tk a wrong move.In all dese days,he was so close to her dt limited to good night kiss on her forehead only..Because he didnt wanted to force her anymore,he wanted to mk her so strong to hear voice of her heart..dt only belong to him now.
He instantly assured her wid his cutest smile:its ok,saaf ho jay gaa.'tum khana khao men ye saaf kr k aata hun;lady Ronaldo.
The look on her face assured him dt dis time she herself will mk da 1st move.


So Sorry for Late..Will surely updt regularly.
Waiting eagerly for ur comments..mean alot to me😳

Please do check my new SS-Mein tennu samjhava kii

love
Mahi
Edited by AAKMH2 - 11 years ago

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