NEW SS-MOTHER OF HIS CHILD-Last update/pg75

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Mahi-Mahak

@AAKMH2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

PART--11

He parked his car infront of hospital,asked her to follow him.She quietly followed him in ward.Her dropped face lit up in happiness seeing her mom infrnt of her.She instantly leaned on bed,hugged her mom tightly.She luked her mom in disbelief,tears of happiness flowing from her eyes.Her mom softly wiped her tears:rona bnd kr,maa apne bcho k aansu brdasht nhi krskti. .ab to pta chl gya naa.
She kissed her mom hand:aur ye bhi pta chl gya maa apne bcho ki muskuraht k lye apne kitne aansu chupati hen.Mandira finally noticed Maan precence,nervously:maalik aap bhethen.
Maan:nhi aap dono aaram se baatien kro,men doctor se milkr aata hun.
He gv dm warm smile & went out.
He went to doctor & asked about Mandira condition.Doctor informed him:hum ne last mnth hi Seema madam ko inform kya tha k donation k paiso se in ka aage illaj nhi ho skta. Pr madam ne saaf mana krdya,aur phone krne se bhi mana krdya.Maan lukd him in shock:aesa nhi hoskta,aap ko koi misundrstndng hogi.Doctor:jii nhi,aap kahen to men aap k samne call krleta hun.Maan confused:leave it,aap ye check len aur unka ache se acha illaj kraeyn.ye mera no. Bhi le len,jo bhi kaam ho mujhe call kren.He left from there,wonderng:mom aesa kese kr skti hen?""
After four hour,Geet came out of her mom room gt surprised seeng Maan still there.Geet shocked:aap abhi tk yahen hen?Maan:men tumhe chor k kese ja skta hun?""His tone,his gaze translatng hidden meaning behind his words which directly reached her heart.She looked away,lost in thoughts.They walked outside.Maan:visitng hours bs 4 ghante ka hi hota hai.hum kl phir aa jaeynge,jb tk hum yahan hen tum roz apni maa se mil lena.She nodded in yes.He softly:preshan mt ho tumhari maa bilkul theek ho jay gi.She luked at him like she gt ray of hope in helpless darkness.
He smiled:mene doctor se baat ki hai.wo buht jald tumhare sath hongi,bikul theek.
Finally she smiled,her hopefull eyes whisperng thanks.Maan:chlo ab ye juice peelo. phr khana khate hen.She confused luked at straw,pulled it out about to throw it bt he hold her wrist:ye kya kr rhi ho?is se peeo.
She set it again tk it in mouth,cnfused wht to do next.He tk juice pack from her show her how to drink & gave it back to her.She sipped so hard dt made her chocked.Maan:aese nhi.He again tk her straw in mouth & show her.She again tried it,dis time successfuly.She smiled widely:hogya!They sat in car,she playfully enjoy new way of drinking.She got embarrased noticing his gaze on her:aap ne nhi lya?He innocently asked:kyun tum mujhe nhi dogi.?he instantly brought her hands near his mouth.He tk her straw in his mouth still lukng at her:itna acha to aaj tk kbhi koi juice nhi lga jitna ye lge hai.She didnt understand why her cheeks flushed & stomach fille wid countless butterflies.
As Purvi & Saleel reached Mumbai,Purvi:Maan to hotel men hai hi nhi men wahan ja kr kya krungi?Saleel asked:to phir kahan jana hai tum ne?Purvi enjoyng cool breeze of evening:jahan tum le jaao!
After taking early dinner,Maan tk Geet to mall.Seeng big buildings,wide roads,lots of lightning. . .Her expressions were like she came to kind of wonderland.As he found Geet engrossed in exploring jewellry shop,he called Purvi who was sitting in library,ofcourse bored!""Purvi:ab kya hua Maan?""Maan:kya krun men?ek ghante se hum yahan ghum rhe hen,usne ek bhi cheez lene ko nhi bola.jb bhi uske pass jata hun wo tumhara poochti hai. vese tum ho kahan?""Purvi lukd for proper answer: wo men..library.""Maan in disbelief:tum aur library?""He added wid chuckle:tumse to apni books hi parhi nhi jati.""Purvi:very funny.""She angrily lukd at Saleel who was sitting infrnt of her,lost in book.She loudly:men khushi se yahan nhi bethi hun,sirf isly tumhe privacy mil ske.""Maan helpless:aesa kro tum yahen aa jao,wo mujhe kuch bta hi nhi rhi to men use kese shopng kraun?""Purvi eyes on Saleel:idiot,stupid,duffer, ladkyan sb kuch khud nhi kehti,smjhna parta hai.agr tum apne kanno se nhi apni aankhon se kaam loge to tumhe us ki dil ki awaz zrur sunnai degi.""She cut da call while Maan was like:what?""
""Librarian aunty came again:bola naa library men itna uncha nhi bolte.""Purvi rolled her eyes.Saleel gt up:sorry mam,bs hum ja rhe hen.""She left dm alone,Purvi annoyed:men uncha bolti hun?apni awaz dekhi hai?""Saleel:men nhi chahta ye mujhe is library se band kren,islye plz tum chlo.""Purvi:kahan?""Saleel confidntly:is city k one of da best resturnt men dinner l lye.""Purvi mockngly:uske lye subha se table resv. krana parti hai.""Saleel polietly:kra di thi naa,islye to yahan beth kr wait kr rha tha.""He picked his cell,asked her to follow him.As he walked few steps away,she grinned:special dinner,pehle se res?""She put fake expressions ran behnd him:pr tum ne to mujhse poocha hi nhi.""He went out shooking his head.""
""Maan worriedly luked for Geet in jewellry shop.Old shop keeper helped him:aap ki wife samne wale toy shop men gaeyn thi.""After sayng thanks to him,he quickly went to it.He tk sigh of relief as his eyes fall on her.Her innocent face glowing in happiness seeng colourful cute toys.Her elbow hit a fluffy toy(baby boy sitting on his hips)by mistake.As soon he touched da floor,it played: i love you mom.""She luked it damn surprised.Shop man came,pickd it & gv it back to her.She creased his little features in awwe.Seeng her precious smile,he admit:u r right Purvi.""He walked to her,tk it from her:chlen?""Her face dropped.He called shop man:ise pack kr den.""Her dropped face instantly shine brightly.""He teasngly asked:ab khush.""She cudnt stop herself to say:buht!""
"" He slightly rubbed his ear,luked over his laptop.She was sitting on bed,full happy wid her toy.It was nearly 1000th time she pressed his belly & giggle hearng his sweet voice.""Maan:kal to ye chlega nhi.""She lukd hm questnly.He switched off hs laptop walked to her:kb se is bechare ko chla rhi ho?iski sari energy/takkat sb khtm ho jaey gi,isko sone bhi nhi de rhi ho.""Geet innocently asked:agr mene isko sula dya to ye khrab nhi hoga?""He tk it from her lap:bilkul nhi.tum fresh ho kr aajao phr dono so jana.""She nodded went to washroom.He thought for a moment dn tk out its battery:sorry baby,precaution k lye.""
""He came out of washroom found her sleepng already wid her new toy.He slipped in cover,kept his hand on her whch was kept protectively on baby toy.They sleep peacefully...just like a perfect family.""
""Precap:wil be beTEer dn dis.

sorry for late...plx do comments mean alot to me

love u

Edited by AAKMH2 - 12 years ago

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srikantharaja

@srikantharaja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awesome update but can only uderstand little bid plz translate thanks some body

awesome update i really like the ways maan and geet relationship shaping up great works best work i really love all i wish u all best with future ff writing . plz i request write often thanks new idea new story totally new everything bring more humor plz thanks i love it plz update often requsting

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

awsm updt...jus loved it...aww...geet is such a kid at heart...love ,maneet moments

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

short but very sweet ! after all the window shopping...she took a baby toy and couldnot even leave it in sleep...! purvi is a true friend...!! and drinking juice with one straw is cute...!!

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

You updated after sooo long Nice part Finally Geet met her mother thanks to Maan and Maan has also got to know a little bit of Pammi's wickedness Loved the way Purvi made Maan realise that Girls just don't ask what they want openly the man has to understand it Give the next update soon