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cue1

@cue1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

OMG OMDZZ!!

Im so excited for the next update

He's gonna put a stop to it...ooohh it sounds so good!

:-D

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arunaprakash.16

@arunaprakash.16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Yummilicious update Sarzah.U wrote the part very well...Loved the way Geet asked Maan to stay with her for the night as she doesn't want to be alone..Hope that Maan does something and proposes to Geet in the bid to make her his as he cant tolerate even the thought of her being with another man..So,act soon Maan and send in your proposal fast..

I always feel that their is a stark contrast in your two heroines that is in ASCOH and in PASSION..In ASCOH Geet is so bold,can express herself so well and is a thorough professional and at the same time very emotional and sensitive and blames herself for no reason in her relationship with Dev.Here in Passion,the heroine is very shy,cant frame a sentence properly in front of her love and yet she has all lust filled thoughts...This is just lovely Sarzah,but I wish u made your heroine of Passion a bit more like your heroine of Ascoh,it will be deadly,if she can give a piece of her mind to her parents...

What Geet's parents did to her is unforgiveable,though her parents too came to know about the same albeit very late...She should speak her mind and its really high time..Maan saying "kya yehi milni thi mujhe" was sooo cute...This ff and ASCOH are really good works of yours Sarzah,keep the good work going...God bless...

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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

u forgot to pm me. not fair😭. please pm me when u update next time. otherwise your update was fabulous.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Hi saw u updtaed nw! Did nt get pm 😭! Nyways fab update! Superbly written! Maan stays! Maan teasing Geet bt innocent Geet does nt understand n takes it to heart! Maan hu8ngry n Geet goes n makes pasta for him! Maan happy! Maan nagry wid wat happened n will do something abt it! Update soon n do pm! Thanks

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

awesome part...

geet n her innocence...

wow pasta again...

maan babu cloud nine se neeche utro n ask Geets hand for marriage...

ll be waiting dr...

sorry for late comments

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Sarzah

@sarzah

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

I'm here to confess.
Guys, I made a terrible mistake. I forgot to sent out PMs for the last update. I thought I did, but I realized last night that I didn't! I am so sorry. This usually doesn't happen, and I never forget. I don't know what came over me!😳😕
Anyways, you can expect both updates tomorrow.
And, this time, there will definitely be PMs going out to all of you. (I mean, the people who are on my buddy list😆)
I'm sorry again.
Love
Sarzah