Her Bitter fate#3 UPDATED Epilogue / Pg 24 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. finally maan and geet got married and became one soul.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ended😲! Plss nooo😭😭... Want more
Lovely part di, finally maneet married
Oww nd their union was too beautifu😳l...
Loved it thoroughly, Ab toh 'Continue soon' bh nh bol sakti.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cant believe u ended sooo early...i m gonna miss dis...thanx sweety for sharing such a beautiful story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
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finally maan and geet became maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
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finally maaneet r married
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Epilogue



After 2 Days Of Marriage


Maan was standing, resting his back to car front. Geet was resting her body on maan. Maan was crossing his hand to geet front , tight, hugging her from back. He was keeping his face on geet cheek, caressing, kissing. They were looking toward dusking sun. the white mountain was shading deep blue, far, surrounded with green valleys. White clouds were turning orange and red and then darkening. As dark was passing, wind was getting more cold then colder. Geet was lost in this beauty of nature. Her eyes was reflecting every color of around. Sweet smile was decorating her pink lips. Her white shining face was beaming with maan love. She was total lost in this moment with her love of life maan. Whereas maan was looking her. He did not need to see around, for knowing what nature was drawing,.. geet face , her expression her smile , her pout was enough to know. He was lost in her .. he was seeing her with so much love when he felt her shivering with cold. He smiled, thinking his pagli was so lost exploring sight around, as did not even knew she was feeling cold. He kissed her cheek and left. Geet came in sense and looked him confused. " kya hua maan " she asked. Maan said nothing. He turned and went to car. Brought out a shawl and covered her. She smiled knowing how much he loved , he understood her needs. He came and again gained his previous posture. Geet kissed his cheek lovingly.


" maan how you knew , I was feeling cold " she asked.


Geet.. I know you more than you know yourself. I know Your every breath, I know your every pore, I know meaning of your every unsaid expressions geet.. because I love you so much .. you are angel, you made my life better then heaven geet.. " maan said cupping her face. He kissed her forehead. She hugged him tight more then ever. They spent few hours there looking, saving those beautiful sight in their heart till it been night. Geet was feeling sleeping. " geet, nind aa rahi hai "


"hmm.." she cuddled more in him. He lifted her and made her sit inside car. He came to driver seat and drove to hotel.



After 2 years



" Geett... geettt kaha ho .. " maan came from office and shouted.


Dadi- kya hai maan bete ..kyu shor macha rahe hai "


maan- dadi geet kaha hai.. she is not in room as well .. aapne dekha usse


dadi ' haa dekha hai na.. wse ab aapke shout karne ke din gaye bete... " she said smiling


"maan- mai kuch samjha nahi dadi.. and where is geet.. " maan was being irritated


dadi- wo terrace pe hai .. jaaiye " saying she patted his cheek and left smiling


maan confused run to terrace, he stopped right behind geet, she was looking to stars smiling. Her duppata was flying like it was happy to touch his geet.. " maan felt jealous. He went behind and slipped duppata from her shoulder. Geet shocked first then confused, then understood maan s intention. Maan was coming to her lips smiling when geet put her hand on his lips nodding no. maan raised his eyes asking " why" .. geet smiled and blushed . Maan confused looked her, strange gesture. Geet understood. She held his hand and kept on her stomach and smiled. First maan dint get but then shocked .. feeling a strange breath inside her stomach.. something was vibrating inside her.. a strange sensation runs in his body. He bend his knees and sat on floor. He looked up to geet who had tears in her eyes.. smiling.. maan kept his right ear on her stomach. He listened a sound.. sound was very familiar to him.. it was his breathing sound which was coming from her stomach.. it was his part who was growing inside her.. it was Babaji gift to him.. it was most precious gift for him from heaven .. from his angel. He stood and hugged her tight. He kissed her whole face with happiness which was not in his control anymore.. it was over flowing from his eyes.. they was going to become one .. they was going to have part of them ' in their hands.. they were going to become parents.



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Maan was walking back n fro in hospital corridor. He was very restless. Dadi and rano was trying to make him calm his heart was not listening anyone. He wanted to see geet.. is she ok. His body was crying.. his geet was in pain, in labor pains and he could not do anything. She was alone tolerating hell like pain and he was only walking and hearing her cry.. oo babaji.. please meri geet ko aaram dijiye .. please babaji" maan prayed in every possible way and at last his wish accepted. He hears a baby cry.. they run to room where doctor came and congratulated him, as his junior angel had came .. maan could not believe.. he became father.. " omg .. my geet.. my little geet became mother .. we have our angel , a small cute baby in our life, in our hand " he run inside to see his both angel, one was laying on bed, with happy tears , waiting for him., and one was laying next to her, covered in white sheet, moving her hand and leg like was trying to fly.



Geet saw maan. He was standing on door , looking them one by one as was trying to accept , these both angels were of him. Geet smiled in tears and pointed to baby, nodded. Maan run to her and sat besides. He asked geet " tum thik ho na " kissing her forehead


" ab thik hu " geet replied smiling. He too smiled looking baby. Geet took baby and gave to maan. She was so soft, so light, so tiny. Her eyes was of geet, nose was of maan. Her lips was of geet and chin was of maan. Her skin was of geet and face shape was of maan... she was truly maan & geet baby.. she was maaneet baby.. yess She was indeed Mannat ... A Divine Wish Of Maaneet





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Hope I Did Good

Thank You So Much Liva (Raingurti) For These Most Memorable Photos


This FF was my first dream in Maaneet dreamland.. and today my dream is ended.. i am feeling emotional right now.. but it doesnt mean i will stop dreaming 😊

Hope you all liked and enjoyed this journey of my maaneet dream

Love You All For Giving Me Support And So Much Encouragement so I Could Finish It So Well





My New OS
Dharkan Zara Ruk Gayi Hai


Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u so much monika...

flawless i can say

beautiful

loved each and every word...
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you for giving us this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovuuu sooo dreamy so romantice epilogue 👏🤗...mein toh kho gayi thi...hayeee

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