Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Palin, i was damn right about this. You are defo MY gem. I thought that you can write ANYTHING on THEM and honey, you proved me right. Me will say again, me proud to have you and can very well imagine your 'chocked breath face' coz of my imaginary tight hug. Trust me, you are among the best writer of my gang. This story gave me another reason to fall in with them, to break your bones with my jhappis and capture yet another beautiful memory in my soul, till eternity. You made my life more COLORFUL after this. I read some of the parts from 'obession' but it was not coming under my 'have to read it' criteria. Hope you don't mind BUT do tell me whenever you write something new. Sara, as promised, will always be there. Back in times when i used to have so much extra time, me always post long, colorful, full of smiley and different text style comments. My buddies very well understand that THOSE were not the ONLY ways to convey my feelings about each updated parts. So, if in future you see not-so-long comment, than don't dare to think that i lost interest.
About the story, itna bolne ke baad bhi kuch reh gaya kya? But simply adore the way you mixed their each and every emotions with the color of mother nature along with the dialogues. The blue mermaid, the yellow sunlight-cum-sunflower, the green rose of hope, the red symbol of HIS love, the brown chocolate of balance, the pink color as both's fav, the orange of new day, the purple of their togetherness and the white of engulfying ALL, simply perfect. Sara is not at all good in expressing emotions through words. But the way you connected each VIBGYOR color with their own meanings, emotions, mother nature and dialogues, hats off to you. Is se zyada kuch nahi bol paungi. Love you a lot.
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