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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

awesome update
loved it

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tich.1990mg

@tich.1990mg

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: sdlife19
nice update

but nw me scared

geet kya karegi

u scared other ppl n me with ur updates of all fics,
n now i m happy ot see u scare😆
😆

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

So d devil after hurting Geet physically now opening up to her...lets Geet see what secrets he is hiding in his heart

Loving it

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tich.1990mg

@tich.1990mg

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
Superb update dear.
no problems about the content dear.. devil tho aise hi hotha hey, i have accepted that its a dark story..and will take this as only a story nothing more.. you hv sandwiched ur update by warnings..ha ,ha,

felt bad for Geet.. she is somewhere changing.. but it will be more interesting to see the sherni, omg shocked ..reading Maan's confession..loved that a lot.. beautifully written.. and happy that Maan didn't crossed all the limits.. i think now its getting more dangerous with Geet's changed behaviour..
and thank you for updating..ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAM ,
now can't press like..will press like when i get my laptop back..

awww so big comment, i was missing this. thanks sweety
and trust me with geet's strong story will be more dark

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

awesome update yar

maan feeling her pain

and in the end he open up a little those dialogues were amazingly written

love the update

best of luck for ur exams

LARAIB

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

awesome👏 n scary update

maan forcing geet...

geet being numb

geet responding to maan...

bt maan's straight confession left me surprised...

he seems to hve suffered so much in his life...

asking geet to be always with him...

no one can be said to be wrong...

he hs suffered so may be don't want to loose more

n geet suffering widout any mistake of hers...

n content as always its ur wish😊

all d best for ur exams...

will wait for updates😊

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

nice part dear

geet became numb

n he is opening

she want to give him pain

it gives him pleasure

awesome part

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

tich darling very very emotional lovely my maaneet love update.. i loved te way my maan claming his geet and geet is fear went off.. my maan stop wen seeing his geet in pain and geet in pain and my maan showing his aggressive love, wow lovely lovely scenes.. te way my maan confess his heart was so lovely.. now wat will be my geet's reaction, will she change my devil into angel...?my devil i love u so much.. no im not angry with my devil, as he have full rights on his geet..only he has.. i love te update so so much

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

OMG itni raw update...uff maan's anger made geet hurted to the core...geet is in pain and maan knew it immediately...oh no now geet has become numb and she's not responding to maan's desire...his every movement made her numb...aww she hated his actions to the core and wanted to give pain but maan is accepting the pain as well...maan is happy with her hatred...and loved the last confession..he may be devil but he too have a heart which wants to beat for geet...for her sweet gestures...uff...ab yeh devil geet ko darkest possession kehta hai lekin jaate jaate zindagi mein geet ko maan lightest and very strongest possession bhi kahega... waise waiting for the next update dear do cont soon...