MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..tanya..

Awesome Superb update Partner🤗
Geet is so caring towards her family luv the bond she share wid her family and her mom gayatri understands her so well😛
From the first meeting only dadi is impressed with geet and they shared the special bond..after knowing all about Geet's past she wanted to make her DIL that was so sweet of her😃
luvd the way everyone was fumbling and passing it to each other their excuses were so hilarious🤣
Finally when they came to know Dadi maa and maan have selected the same girl they all were so excited and i was just imagining maan all happy and smiling to himself😳😆
luvd Dadi maa when she was convincing and assuring gayatri that maan is perfect for geet and he will keep her happy always..they are meant of each other maan and geet😊
Hope geet accepts the proposal excited to know geet's point of view😳
Thanks a lot partner for the awesome long update as always beautifully written..PERFECT🤗
Luvd it...Pls update soon❤️

PS: partner it's more than 100 words comment now i want a biggg rply😳😆


awww thank u partner 🤗 ur comment was lovely and totally made my effort of updating successful 😃
yeah are one of the reasons why this SS is running 🤗 love u for all ur support n encouragement.. 🤗 ❤️
next update is being constructed, it will be up soon...promise 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally i m here...😳
awesome parts wahi...😳
aww dadi and geet meeting was nice..
so dadi is impressed with geet...😳..
hehe..sab maan se kitna darte hain😆
so maan and dadi's choice is same..our geet...😳
now waiting for geet pov...😛..
cont soon..
love ya...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

finally i m here...😳

awesome parts wahi...😳
aww dadi and geet meeting was nice..
so dadi is impressed with geet...😳..
hehe..sab maan se kitna darte hain😆
so maan and dadi's choice is same..our geet...😳
now waiting for geet pov...😛..
cont soon..
love ya...🤗



thank u anshu 🤗
love ya 2
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Posted: 12 years ago

The next update is meant to be kind of emotional with a happy ending, so hope to make you all emotional at the beginning and then make you all smile. I don't know whether I have been successful in making it emotional or not. I hope it meets your expectations.

I just wanted to thank my partner Tani (..tanya..) for all the support and encouragement.

A note for Anshra: The book 'A Devil's Desire' finally arrived, I read the book in a day, which is an achievement for me, as I have never completed any books that I read, forgot about completing the book in a day.

And I would like to dedicate this update to one of my foodie friends, her birthday was on 24th Sept. She is none other than Faria (faria86). Fairy, this is one is for you.

Part 7

At the Sharma's:

Gayatri, Payal and Priya were sat in the hall waiting to discuss about the proposal. Geet had just come from work and went to freshen up.

Geet: wow, what's happening here, why everyone is so quiet, this is unusual especially when Priya is here.

Gayatri: Geet come here beta I want to talk to you.

Geet came and sat next to her and tried to read the expressions on all their faces.

Gayatri: Geet you know how well we have bonded with Savitri ji in these last few weeks, and she has also told me that she is very fond of you. And she has asked for your hand for her eldest grandson Maan.

Geet was shocked; she did not know how to react. She could not handle it anymore and left for her room.

Priya: Aunty let me go speak to her.

Priya went to meet Geet and saw looking out the window of her room. She walked towards her and placed her hand on Geet's shoulder and made her turn around.

Priya: Geet, you know I am meant to be your best friend, who should be able to understand better than anyone else, but now even I am confused, it seems like I don't know you anymore.

Geet: Priya please don't say that. You're my only friend, the one with whom I shared everything. And I know what you're thinking and I am ready to answer your questions.

Geet: when I married Prem, I did not know anything about him, apart from the fact that he was in the army. But the fact that he decided to marry a girl who was in distress, who he did not know, only to not let down his mother he accepted to marry and save me from the hell.

Geet: my respect for him touched the sky, even though I never ever spoke to him and neither did he, I felt this special connection with him. He was like my saviour, the one whom I look up to. I was shattered when the news of his death came; I felt like I should have done something to save him, it was my duty as a wife to protect him like he had saved me from my horrendous aunt uncle.

Priya was listening to her carefully, and Gayatri and Payal were at the door, they did not have the courage to enter otherwise they would break down in front of Geet, and this is the first time Geet is opening up.

Geet: at the time of our marriage, I felt no love towards him but the respect I had was way more than any one can imagine. I knew that once we start our lives as husband and wife, we will understand each other, and eventually we both may feel something for one another.

Geet: But unfortunately destiny had other plans, Prem went away and never returned. I blame myself for that somewhere. I feel like because of me, he is no more. A wife is meant to bring husband luck, good health, basically brighten his life and his family, but what did I do, what did I bring to his life and everyone else's.

Geet: as soon as I entered their lives everything came weakening down one by one. Prem never returned. Maa lost her son. Rajeev bhai lost his dear brother. Bhabhi lost her devar and friend. And Simi she lost her Chachu.

Geet: all I brought with me was my bad luck.

Geet broke down into tears, and Priya, Gayatri, Payal were all in tears too. Priya hugged Geet and consoled her.

Geet (crying): how can I destroy another family, I can't go through the same phase again Priya

Geet: I lost my parents at an early age, I ever received any love from my uncle and aunt. They tortured me.

Geet: this family gave everything, love, care, support, encouragement, independence. And I want to fulfil my duties as a daughter and care for this family till my last breath.

Priya: shhh Geet. Why are you blaming yourself for what happened? No one can stop destiny, what is meant to happen will always happen, no one can control it. Your life back in Hoshiapur was controllable but you insisted that they should be left alone. Otherwise I swear I would have had them behind bars till today and ever after.

Priya: What happened with Prem was not your fault. You should not be blaming yourself, you should be proud that he died for the country, not many people have the courage to do so. Just think what Prem must be feeling seeing you like this.

Priya: would he like to see you like this, blaming yourself for everything? No Geet, we all know that even he too wishes to see you settle down.

Priya: Geet, Maan is a very nice guy, only in a few meetings I got to know him so well, although he is quite reserved but trust me, he is totally made for you.

Priya: and his family, well you have already met Dadima, and his family is also very sweet, they all have seen your picture and like you very much, and they also know about your past and they all want you to be the eldest daughter in law of the Khurana's.

Geet had quietened down a little and was listening to Priya.

Geet: how do you know Maan?

Priya: maan and Raj are best buddies since childhood.

Gayatri and Payal also managed to gather some courage and walked into the room.

Gayatri: beta, we have never considered you the reason of Prem's death, I have always loved you as a daughter and will always.

Payal: yes Geet, we all want to see you happy.

Gayatri: and what did you say, you want to fulfil your duties as a daughter for this family. Geet beta, when a daughter goes to her sasural, she does not break ties with her maayka, you will always remain my daughter even after marriage.

Gayatri: Savitri ji's family is very sweet, I am 100% sure that they will always keep you smiling.

Just then Raj entered to pick up and he heard their conversation.

Raj: absolutely right aunty ji.

He greeted everyone and turned to speak to Geet.

Raj: Geet, I know what kind of questions must be arising in your mind right now. And I may have answers to a few of them, as I know Maan very well.

Raj: Maan has always kept his loved ones above all, above himself all his life. He took the responsibility of his whole family, he took the responsibility of his family business at a young age and made it touch new heights. Khurana Constructions is one of the best constructions companies around the whole world. All thanks to Maan.

Raj: he has never ever glanced a look at a girl, and don't worry he's straight (he said laughing, which made Geet smile a little).

Raj: he fulfilled his duties as a grandson, as a elder brother. He never made his younger siblings feel that they are orphans, he loved them as if they are his own children.

Raj: he got his younger brother married to the love of his life, he took all the responsibility of Dev's marriage and trust me the wedding was like a royal wedding.

Raj: Geet all I can say now is that Maan truly loves you, he saw you first time at our wedding, oh you have also met him at our wedding.

Geet started to think, and Gayatri and Payal were also confused. Raj and Priya were smiling.

Raj: let me tell you, do you remember almost tripping from the stairs whilst carrying the tray of flower petals?

Geet went into flashbacks and remembered that handsome face. She nodded her yes indicating that she remembers to Raj.

Raj: well the person that saved you from falling was Maan himself. From that moment onwards he can't stop thinking about you, and only a few days back he accepted his feelings for you to us and he also told his family.

Raj: umm Priya may have told you Maan is a reserved person, it was difficult for him to speak out to us and to his family. But looks like luck was also favouring us, as Dadima had also selected you for Maan.

Priya: Geet, Maan and his family are really happy with this proposal. But the last and final decision would be yours and only yours.

Payal: Geet please think over it, don't worry about us, we just want to see you happy.

Gayatri: Beta, I want to see you settled before I leave this world or else how will I face my son..

Geet hugged Gayatri. Gayatri broke away and wiped Geet tears. She placed and envelope in Geet's hand.

Gayatri: I know you have already seen Maan, but here is his picture too, think over this proposal.

Geet nodded and they all exited her room one by one.

Geet sat on her bed looking at the envelop in her hand. She slowly opened the flap and pulled out the picture.

She remembered the fall at Raj and Priya's wedding, Maan's strong grip, she had to admit that she felt secured in his arms. His big eyes that were locked with hers, had some kind of magic that she could not look away.

She noticed that at the back of the photograph there was a number, and just then she phone beeped. She picked up her phone and saw a message received from Priya.

The message read: "I know by now you have seen the picture, Geet trust me he is the one for you, and if you have any doubt than call him, don't hesitate. You feel more assured once speaking to Maan".

She smiled to herself and rang Priya, and Priya picked up the phone as soon it rang.

Priya: Geet what have you decided?

Geet: you wrote his number at the back?

Priya: Geet I asked you a question first so answer that.

Geet: ok madam, I have decided to consider this proposal... happy now..!!! now tell me did you write his number at the back of the photograph?

Priya: yes darling, it was me. Kyun?

Geet: nothing.

Priya: so are you gonna call him?

Geet: umm, later. He might be busy (she started to make excuses).

Priya: Geet, if you do not call him as soon as I end this call, I swear I am not gonna talk to you.

Geet: Priya what is this...?

Priya: Geet you know I am stubborn so why are you dragging this? And I can't stay angry with you for long, so don't make me get angry at all and call him.

Geet: ok

Priya: promise

Geet: promise.

Geet kept gazing at the number, she mustered courage and picked up her phone again, she dialled a few numbers and then cancelled it. She repeated this a few times and one she entered the full number she was meant to cancel it again but she accidently pressed the call button.

Geet: Oh no, what have I done?

She cut the call as fast as she could and started to curse herself. Just then her phone rang again. And the same number flashed on the screen.

Geet (nervous): oh no what should I do, that's him calling, I'll let it ring and won't pick it up. No Geet you are not that rude (she told herself). With shaking hands she picked up her phone and answered the call.

Maan: hello, I just call from this number. May I know who it is?

There was silence.

Maan: hello, anyone there? Hello

Geet recalled the moment where Gayatri, Payal, Raj and Priya were explaining to her, that she should move on, Maan is made for her. Not wanting to put their efforts down the drain she gathered all her courage and decided that she needed to speak up.

Geet (stuttering): hello, ji main G..ggeeet

Maan (surprised): Geet

Geet: woh... Priya gave me your number. I hope you did not mind me calling.

Maan: no of course not.

Geet: actually, I wanted to meet you in person, is that okay?

Maan: yeah of course. Where do you want to meet?

Geet: umm, MG Cafe on ABC Road. In an hour or so, if you're not busy.

Maan: okay, umm shall I send a car for you?

Geet: no thank you, it's not far from here, I'll manage.

Maan: okay then, I'll see you there (he said smiling).

Geet: okay. Bye

Maan: Bye.

Precap: they finally meet, face 2 face. Maan buying flowers. Geet confused about what to wear.

I hope this update was up to everyone's expectations. I said a maaneet meeting but thought the update was getting too long but I added the conversation.

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it Wahu.
waiting for next update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

loved it Wahu.

waiting for next update😳


thank u Shalu 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
superb upd...'
lov it...'
waitin 4 dere meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

awesome...

superb upd...'
lov it...'
waitin 4 dere meeting


thank u 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww cutie loved it...loved the whole family confrontation and geet finally telling her insecurities was really good...

cant wait for maaneet meeting bless maan must be soo excited lol 😉

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