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Posted: 13 years ago
arre bass babba...
Tu evdha ka vaet vatun ghetes???
Tula mhi navhta na,mhanun zala tu muddhamun thodi na kela
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Ho pan tari.. Yevdhya divsa pasun barobar aahot.. Vicharayla hava hota na mi...

Ok let it Go... Haveee Sweet Dreamzzz Of Maaneet...!!!!!!!


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FLAMES OF DESIRE

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PART-37
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins now😳)
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
Geet cried screaming for maan...she was petrified with the turns of events...And now darji taking her away, felt like a near death...She looked at maan with panic and found him marching towards them...And the next moment with a harsh pull he took geet in his arms, giving a deadly look to darji...Maan dragged geet towards the mandap, which was placed in the mid of the hall...and the next moment filled her forehead with sindoor, marking her his...
"ab hui yeh maan ki geet" he said with oozing attitude, directly looking at a stunned geet...
The whole hall went numb, as everyone looked at them in shock...Maan crushed geet into his arms, who looked petrified with the turn of events...Rage took over maan, as he felt her shivering in his embrace...With a reflex he hugged her more tightly nearly crushing her bones...His red blooded eyes flared with uncontrollable anger as he looked at darji with pure disgust..."maan ki geet" he said it loud, directly boring into darji's guts...Then moved his intimidating gaze towards brij who looked away in guilt...He somewhere knew geet was innocent but then all the villagers accusation, prem being in hospital and that too almost on death bed, and prem's friends telling the whole truth...made everything look blurry...But still he believed there is something fishy here...but then the last blow for him, was when rajji herself agreed that she saw prem and geet together for the last time...
Brij looked at rajji with his questioning look, now he was doubting her fact...While rajji looked down hiding herself behind beeji, terrified with the fact that her truth will be revealed soon...
Rage took over his senses, as he realised what sin he has commited by accusing geet...
"geet" brij called out, walking towards her, pleading forgiveness...but maan stopped him in his tracks, by showing his palm..."maan please..." brij again pleaded but maan ruthlessly pushed him away, dragging geet with him...
"maan tum aise geet ko nahi le ja sakte" darji commanded from behind making maan halt his moves...
Maan turned back directly staring at darji giving him his muderous look..."kaun rokega" he gripped geet's wrist more possessively, keeping her close to him...while he smirked looking at everyones faces, who looked down fearing this man's worth...
"sirf sindoor maang mai bharne se shadi nahi hoti maan...geet abhi bhi hamare ghar ki beti hai" darji said still maintaning his crap attitude...while maan mocked looking at this man's audacity...
"call her GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA...ab woh sirf maan ki geet hai" maan securely hugged geet sideways, who still looked dazed staring at everyone lifelessly...
"I thought that beating was enough for that bas***d, but now i think there are more on the list" maan pulled out his mobile and dialed some numbers to the nearest police station...While he was speaking everyone including geet looked at him in panic...fearing what he is upto...
"maan" geet whispered shaking her head in no...while maan hugged her, hiding her face in the curve of his neck...still continuing with his talks..."please make it fast...i need to move on with my wife to delhi" where his last words as he disconnected the call...hugging geet more tightly, feeling her painfull hiccups...
"how dare you call police in my house" shouted darji feeling insulted with this boy's attitude...
"just now you said geet is your family...so the people who abused her should be punished right" maan said keeping his straight face...while geet clinged more into him...knowing it all will get ugly now...
"maan no please" she cried on his skin, burning it with her tears...
"shhh jaan...maan cupped her tear stricken face...moving her messy curls behind..."you trust me" he asked gulping the lump formed in his throat looking at her panicked state...
Geet nodded innocently, then again hugged him back...biting her lips, inorder to stop her hiccups...
"maan yeh tum kya keh rahe ho" intervened beeji with this revealation...
She was too shocked when everyone came up with there accusations for geet...And she was the one who asked rajji for the truth...as she knew rajji took geet towards the feilds...But then her hope crushed with rajji's lie...
"kya hua tha kal geet ke saath" beeji asked still shivering guessing the truth...while darji looked away thinking the same...
"she was forced...tried to rape" the painful words came out from his throat, as his tears gave away inducing a brutal stinging sensation pricking his heart with this disgusting truth...Geet suddenly looked at him, gulping his words...She didn't knew exactly what rape is, but had heard about this somewhere, she didn't remembered...
"he only beat me maan" she innocently clarified, still feeling uncertain about what maan said...
Everyone present their gasped in surprise, then started talking shit, still doubting on geet's character...Brij closed his eyes in disgust forming his fist...then walked towards prem's friends who where about to run for their life...He grabbed each one of them, and smacked hell out of them...till they collapased on the ground pleading for their life...All the villagers came forward holding him back, while he was madly kicking them ruthlessly..."how dare you touch my sister" he screamed his lungs out...Making geet flinch in terror, she hugged maan more closely, getting scared with the horrifying scene infront...
After almost murdering them all, brij looked for something...he looked here and there like a mad man...then found the person, he was searching for...He marched towards her, and grabbed rajji by her hair...pulling her out..."what you said...geet khud gayi thi prem ke saath" he asked gripping her hair harshly...while rajji cried in pain...
"veer ji please chodiye mujhe" rajji cried in fear...while darji came forward to stop brij...But brij made his hold more voilent, making her scream for her life..."jhoot kyu kaha" he shouted again...
Maan was feeling helpless while consoling geet, who was shaking in fear..."veer ji rajji ko kyu maar rahe hai" she cried, asking him to save her...but maan cupped her face gesturing her to calm down..."she deserves it" he said gritting his teeth...
With in no time police came there...and moved brij away, who was beating rajji like anything...Beeji cried holding rajji close, then looked at geet with guilt...She knew rajji is at fault but then she couldn't stop her mother instinct...Brij fell on the ground crying bitterly, feeling disgust with himself...Maan was right, he is not worth calling himself a brother...
Maan could guess now everything will go verse after this...he looked at geet who was clinging to him like a small fearful baby...He thought it wont be right for geet to face all this things...He tried moving away from her inorder to get over with all this as soon as possible, but then geet hugged him again from back...crying with her closed eyes...
"maan please chaliye yaha se" she whimpered with agony...feeling her heart sinking with this unbearable fear...
Maan turned around hugging her back, then cupped her face, trying to calm her..."jaan hum bas abhi yaha se chalenge...but first you go up and pack your bags"
"ummm aap chalo saath mai" she was scared feeling darji will again try to part them away...
"jaan i need to sought this out...warna brij will again hit rajji" he tried making her understand with this, as he knew how much geet loves her sister...
"ummm" she halfheartedly agreed for the sake of rajji...and maan walked her out of there...moving towards her room upstairs...
Both of them entered her room...geet meekly looked all over glancing at her room, while maan hugged her from back...hiding his face in the curve of her neck...He was finding it hard in controlling his emotions...then silently cried on geet's shoulder, feeling guilty for putting her in this state...
"maan" geet slowly called, feeling his warm tears wetting her shoulder...then tried turning around, but maan hugged her more tightly, squeezing her more into him...
"I promise i will never make you face all this again" he uttered with difficulty, controlling his temper...then nuzzled his lips on her neck, trying to ease the tension building in him...
"ummm" geet just moaned, surrending her self completely in his arms...then shivered, as his arms squeezed her waist more carnally...
Geet closed her eyes, feeling him nipping her skin...then she bit her lips gulping her painful moan...
Maan was loosing his senses, drowning in the feel of her skin...then he sensuously started licking it, frightening her further...Suddenly he made her turn around, and crushed her into himself...madly caressing her back, and kissing her all over her bare skin...
It was getting unbearable for geet to react, as she felt herself locked in his arms..."maan" she panicked with his aggressive hold...then bit her lips trying her best to not react by pushing him away...Tears flooded her hazels, as she blinked her eyes inorder to have a clearer vision...
Maan hungrily kissed geet everywhere, following the path from her shoulder to her neck...and finally bit her chin, moving towards her trembling lips...Her whole body shivered as maan covered her lips with his mouth, aggressively kissing her showing his dominance...He just wanted to make her his in every way...just wanted to feel her safe and close to him...
Geet was competely worn out, almost on the verge of fanting...still beared his madness, giving in like always...
It took some time for maan to realise what he is doing...He was tired himself, still kept nibbling on her swollen lips...taking out his anger, his frustration in the form of his wild passion...He caressed her waist, pulling her more closer if ever it was possible...then moved his hands up her arms...and hugged her by her shoulder, crushing her body...invading his tongue through their glued lips...
Geet cried in pain, as his hands painfully squeezed her bruised arm, making him snap open his eyes...looking at the horrifying scene infront...Geet in his arms, her painful moans, her tear stricken face, and their glued lips...His eyes grew bigger, realising what he did with her...He pushed himself away from her, unknowingly making geet tremble back with her weak structure...
She was about to fall down in her dazed state...but maan quickly took hold of her petite form in his strong arms..."i am sorry" he cried looking at her with pain...Then picked her in his arms, and laid her on bed...He was ashamed to face her now, knowing he acted no less then what prem tried to do with her..."please forgive me" he whimpered caressing her face, wiping her tears...then his gaze caught her swollen lips...He hided his face in shame, not able to bear her sight...
"maan" her soft whisper made him flinch in agony...as he now looked away, not able to bear this heartwrenching torture...
"hum packing kar le" she said still panting with their soul searing kiss...then tugged his shirt, feeling him not responding...
Maan was sitting sideways facing away from her...while geet was sleeping looking at him...She pulled herself up in sitting position, then placed her head on his shoulder...hugging him from his shoulder...
"I love you a lot" she whispered unknowingly soothing his bruised heart...then made him look at her by holding his chin...She cupped his face, looking at his downcasted eyes...then gave a small peck on his lips, gesturing him she is ok...Maan hugged her the next moment, feeling blessed having this angel in his life...how much he unknowingly harms her, but she always cocoons him back, showering her impeccable love...
He broke their hug realising he needs to get her away from here now...and cupped her face, saying..."you pack everything...i will be back" and he rushed downstairs, locking her room...
He calmly climbed down, again getting back to his ruthless self...Everyone there where waiting for him, even the inspector...As soon as maan came to the main hall, brij tried talking to him...but maan ignored him walking straight towards the inspector...Maan quickly started telling him what ever happened, making sure each and everyone standing there, hears him properly...He started with how he came to known about geet being trapped by prem...and that is why he smashed prem's friends...then how he saw rajji with her boyfriend, who at the end blurted him about geet's where about...
Darji looked at rajji in anger, and marched towards her...he took hold of her arm..."kya maan sach keh raha hai" he questioned with shame...then reading her eyes, he grabbed her neck, almost choking her to death with his harsh hold...but beeji came forward pleading darji to stop...while brij looked away, feeling himself like a looser...He baselessly accused geet, when his own sister was ruining there name...
Maan smirked looking at the dramatic scene infront...He continued what ever happened ignoring all the drama...Finally police registered his complaint, and since they where dealing with the maan singh khurana...they agreed whatever he said, without verifying it with geet...As maan strictly threatened them not to involve her in all this...
Finally everything was soughted out, as police arrested prem's friend and took them away...they then moved towards hospital to arrest prem, as he was the main culprit...
Maan gave a deadly look to everyone, as the villagers started walking out...leaving the family to deal with man all alone...
"maan please maaf kar de yaar" brij came forward, still feeling ashamed of his deeds...but maan pushed him away, pointing his finger towards him...
"dont you dare to call me that" he spoked with rage..."tum toh uske veer ji ho na...phir bhi usse galat samjha"...maan said with pain..."tum hi the na, jo uss din mujhe samjha rahe the, how innocent she is"...then he pulled brij holding his collar..."but why i am expecting this from you...when you failed to even manage your own sister's character...issiliye woh apne boyfriend ke saath...chi...shame on you" maan didn't felt even right to utter what rajji is being doing behind his back...He pushed brij away, who looked down...knowing his sin could never be forgiven...
Maan moved towards darji..."geet is my wife now...so dont you worry, because of her, your family's reputation won't get tarnished after this" maan gritted his teeths, then looked at rajji smirking..."i hope rajji brings glory to your sky high reputation" maan mocked...then ran upstairs, and entered geet's room...
He walked in, then smiled looking at his jaan obediantly packing her things..."ho gayi packing" he asked softly sitting besides her...
"ummm" she said then pointed towards her cosmetics which where kept on her dressing table...
"mai lata hu" maan stood up, and went to pick her all the things...then helped her in completing her packing...They moved out from the room...with maan holding her bag and geet walking besides him...They reached the main hall, and geet looked at everyone, again getting emotional...Maan continued walking, then realised geet is missing from his side...He looked behind and found her standing infront of darji...She bowed down to take his final blessing, while darji kissed her forehead, feeling ashamed of his deeds...He walked out not able to bear her leaving like this...Geet then moved towards beeji who was holding rajji protecting her from darji's worth...She hugged her from other side, as beeji was already holding rajji in her arms...then kissed her cheeks...
Geet then slowly moved away, looking at rajji...she wanted to bid her good bye...but then got scared to remove her from beeji's hold as she looked really petrified...So she innocently kissed beeji again, saying..."yeh rajji ke liye" then smiled painfully moving away...
Finally it was brij, as geet felt tears brimming her hazels as she walked towards him with heavy steps...How much she craved to see her only veer ji in grooms attire...then getting married, bringing a sweet bhabi for her...But then it was her destiny to miss his wedding, she looked at the newly wedded girl standing at a corner...She guessed her to be her bhabi...Geet walked towards her, and hugged her closely, whispering..."aapke liye gift liya tha...upar wale room mai rakha hai" then parted away smiling...
Maan was helplessly looking at his mishty, who was still showering her love over everyone...he looked away, controlling his tears, blinking his eyes to get rid of it...
"geet chalo yaha se" he screamed painfully...making geet flinch in fear...She hurried towards brij and stood infront of him...forming her words to say something...then just hugged him, saying "love you always"
Brij closed his eyes in pain...then moved his hands to hug her back...but before he did that, geet pulled away and suddenly kissed his cheeks...and ran back towards maan...
Maan hugged her tightly, as she came running crying her heart out...hiding her pain of leaving her family like this...Maan gave an accusing look to everyone, then walked out still holding her close...He softly made her seat in the car, tucking her under seat belt...then keeping her luggage in, he got inside taking his drivers seat...And screeched away, finally taking her out of this awfull place...
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Precap:- Back to delhi😃...and facing the family😲
Omg bohat mehnat karni padi for this part...i myself started crying imagining this scenes...i hope watever i have written sounded right with the situation...I REALLY TRIED TO PUNISH THEM ALL ACCORDING TO YOUR WISH...but then this is wat i have come up wid considering geet and maan's character...I hope it satisfy's u as i have dedicated a whole update just to full fill ur wish...warna toh i wanted to take maaneet away from here as soon as possible...
so now better give me long comments and too much likes...kyuki i am planning some lovey dovey scenes in future for ur treat...
and next part wud again have a chota wala twist...so guess wat it will be now😉
and finally i big kissy wissy n hugs for all of them who liked and commented...
love u lots,
varsha😳
Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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THIS ONES FOR U GARGI
>>>>pls open this link...and here this song<<<<<
>>>>>>I'm so lucky to have a friend like you<<<<<<<
>>>>>>In this world, where everything seems uncertain, only one thing is definite. You'll always be my friend, beyond words, beyond time and beyond distance<<<<<<<
>>>>>I hope that you're my friend forever because that's how long I'm gonna need you<<<<
ABHI SENTI SENTI LINES KHATAM...AND ASLI TREAT KA TIME START😉
YEH SAB AKELI MAT KHANA...thoda share karo...bday ke din kanjusi nahi karte😛😆
this flowers r specially hand picked from my bagicha...sachi😳...lol i am just joking😆
socha tha yeh teddy final gift hoga...then socha thoda aur khush kar du tumhe...so presenting u my bada wala hot hot gift...my manu janu😳
😳dekho kaise ghoor raha hai tumhe...kahi faint na ho jana😆
LASTLY WANA SCREAM A HAPPY WALA BIRTHDAY TO U...ENJOY UR DAY N ROCK IT...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY GARGI
Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanx for wish...!!!


update was awesum...!!!

Dis is wat i wanted frm u...i realy luv'd it...d punishment was realy great bt stil i realy missed d one line most "rajji got tight slap from brij and she hit d ground"...u didn't add d word slap anywhere *me pouting*

koi na...daarji i jst hate him...look at his guts...aftr al dis 2 he had guts to ques maan...gosh he is so mean...!!!

Geet is realy sweet aftr so much also d love she had for hr family didn't decrease a bit...she is so cute sweet n adorabl doll...!!!

Al i want 2 say dat i realy luv'd it...n waitng for nxt one...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.


So MSK ne apna raub yahaan pe bhi dikha hi diya.

Geet still doesnt knw wat actually happnd to her???????

Bechaare maan ko kya-kya sikhaana padega?????
Uff!!


Geet still lovs her family so much.


Best thing ws maan ne jab rajji n daarji ki "meethi" beizitti( insult) ki by saying hope she givs more height to ur reputation.
Wow! Isse kehta hain karaara thapad...


Delhi chale...
Sabka kya haal hoga ab????

Twist kya hoga?? Maaneet alag til proper wedding????
Kya faayda geet ne kaun sa training le leni hai?
Aakhir maan ko hi sikhaana padega na usse.

Conti sooon pkz
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was really beautiful update n ofcourse a long one too.Geet is really an innocent girl,i m thinking how Maan will handie it because he himself gets irritated with her innocence
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing to read i love read this story of your
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
PERFECT
PERFECT
PERFECT
i absolutely LOOOVED it !

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