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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
maan wz angry that geet didn't resist n in his anger he crossed al limits...i guess he'll regret now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
me w8ing 4 next..4m now itself
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Posted: 12 years ago

heart youching update ..gett lost herself to save her father

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii ...

here is the part 7..

thank you for your support ...





LIMITS OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE




PART 7


They were just in the same position … he was angry on himself ..and she was all lost… it was almost an hour .. didn't moved further but remained in the same position deep buried with her.. unfortunately the wrong is done… he filled his seeds in her… both had lost physically themselves in the era of deep pain ….

The guilt was killing him..and the numbness that was caused due to the sudden flow of moments had left her frozen and dead even to think of something …. She did this offence just for her father's life and he lost himself in her just to teach her a lesson… it was actually natural for maan to loose himself since no man can bear if the person he loves is impure or does something that is not ethical….

The physical pain.. the ache.. the salty flow of water was from both sides.. just like the hurt is experienced by both of them…

Maan : I can't face it… he was in a great dilemma.. that what he did cannot be changed.. even if they want the things wont even get to normal… geet's one word , a mere shivery touch that asked him to cross that frail distance was something that cannot be changed now…

Her eyes were totally shut… lips still quivering with pain. Anticipation , fear and grief that for a split of second had surrounded her mind.. her heart was beating fast like those those erratic beats that were ready to burst out of its chamber… for a time being some unwanted physical desires did cover her thoughts and it was totally natural to feel but that fraction of second of ectasy had made them to connect deep through their souls…

The self conscience pricked him …. He parted himself.. a painful sign erupted deep from her throat …. The deep pain that a girl sense by losing her maidenhood is something that she actually wanted to cherish but here geet just turned herself and cocooned her petite structure in her the ball type structure.. no matter how much she tries to cover herself .. how much she tries to hide those tears but they fall from those hazels….

Maan locked himself in the washroom… it was in the fit of anger that they both were now going to pay , he will knew that someday his anger will make him to lose the most precious treasure of his life and now his love will be beaten to an extent that it couldn't be counted back… this day that moment will always be there in their life……

Maan : what was in me… what did I thought before doing this to her… geet cannot be like this.. never.. his heart was broken into small tiny fragments that were crying only that " you did the biggest sin of your life maan… she is was and will ever remain the purest of all…. She was not at fault… the way you were…..

His devilious mind was still going to argue…." Did she even told you why she needed the money … what was the hurry that she immediately made you to transfer the money to her account…."

His innocent heart still defended his love .. which was on the verge of losing…..

Maan 's heart : it was you… you made him to transfer the money at the earliest…. She didn't even asked for anything….

Maan's mind: neither she denied… what can you conclude from all this…and above all she herself told him or say invited him ….

That was enough.. no matter what al his heart and mind say or fight but at last the sense of lost maturity won….

Maan immediately changed and came.. he knew she must be in deep pain.. it was both physical and emotional he caused to her… and his guilt increased ten folds on not seeing her in the room… maan looked around.. his moves were frantic in his moves…. He didn't left any single corner left… but she was no where… he knew how badly he needed to find her know….

He was her culprit…. In the frantic attempt he had first failed to see the marks of her sudden consent but when he did noticed his remorse was like just ready to kill him for shattering her to pieces…..

ON THE OTHER SIDE….

Geet when found maan not by her side.. he had left her she didn't want to leave .. she knew that the amount he did pay for her was far more what he will take or expect from her .. but today at that time she needed to be at some other place .. she couldn't leave her father.. she was all broken , numb,, and aimlessly walking on the road .. wrapped herself covering herself like she never wants anyone even to suspect what she has done… it was like she was dead scared that her condition will make someone or the other to suspect that he had literally SOLD herself.. just like a W**** just the difference is that she wont even live in peace after this dreadful act of her life …. That moment… her killing words which made him to provoke will haunt her all her life cursing her…

Surprisingly she didn't was bothered about her father… will he be ever accept the deed done by his daughter in order to save him.. wasn't a life without self esteem of his own daughter whom he had raised was more dreadful and aching for a father rather than that simple death…

It will be never … he will certainly not want if geet will do something like this … but for geet she meant nothing if she couldn't even let herself to save her baba for whom she is been like a mother since the years he 's been paralysed ……

She had fed him… done every single task of his just like he did for her when she was a child….

Geet st: baba maine kuch galat nahi kiya …nahi samajna galat mujhe … agar aaj khud ko tabah karke aapki beti ne aapki zindagi bachai hai.. aapke liye khud ki aabru ka sauda kiya hai toh bhi wo jeeti hai…. Zindagi me sab kuch sun sakti hun .seh sakti hun… bas apne aakri umeed ko khone se darti hun…..

Ye zindagi bhoj ho jayegi baba kabhi bhi mujhe chodna mat…. Mar jayegi aapki geet baba….

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PS: readers of SECOND LIFE , DLP and others please don't ask updates now me having busy schedule and exams coming so next updates this month will be A COMMITMENT , ADDICTION , WILL YOU MARRY ME LAST PART…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan was feeling guilty for his act and other side geet ws thinking about her more than her
both were in emotional turmoil
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet

nice prolouge..nd charecter sketch.


thankss but i have already posted part 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
sad part.ab kya hoga?geet ka kya hoga?cntinue soon.pm me also,dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
no its nt
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Originally posted by: mahi_gurmeet

sad part.ab kya hoga?geet ka kya hoga?cntinue soon.pm me also,dear.

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt...so touching...geet left without tellling or meeting maan...poor thing thinking only of hr father...guilty maan...continue soon...

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