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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

TEASER

She pulled him to her.. his eyes were spitting fire.. she was actually confirming what he thought about her'he was about to leave.. when a soft shivering hand hold him'..

Geet: just do what you want' I need money'.

The NEED .. the VULNERABILITY was there but not the repentance of any of the word uttered'.

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He roughly hold her hands.. and slapped her hard' .maan roughly pushed her on the bed'.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii ...

here is the part 5..

thank you for your support ...





LIMITS OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE




PART 6

just 2-3 parts r remaining
thank you to all those readers who liked and commented


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some 18+ content is there..read if you are comfortable


Here geet didn't even reacted …when maan's lips touched her skin..it was like creating sensations ….. but inside a deep volanco was there that has started to boil …..

Although she didn't want to feel anything but maan here was playing with her senses….and why not…she is just a twenty one year old girl…all this intimacy and the need of money was making her to let him do what he wants……..

Somewhere deep inside there was a meek voice that was kind of screaming just to push him … not let him do what he is supposed to.. but the strong feeling to save her father overpowered the girl that somewhere was not able to do what she wants…

Maan just to make her aware. Let his hand raom on her back.. he very slowly pulled the string of her kurti in a hope that what ever he is doing is wrong… but geet she had somewhere comply to his demand…. Her senses betrayed her… he was making her drowsy and numb…. Just one thought was there in her mind and mind…

"It won't be a bad deal….. it will be never you will gain your father's life who gave you life.. its your turn to do something for him . you will able to save baba… just bear the small pain of loosing yourself because you know .. you wont be able to live if something happens to him…

Maan couldn't hold himself anymore… he just get up abruptly… geet who was having her eyes closed .. slowly opened her eyes.. his lack of warmth and sudden feeling of light weight came as a realization….

Maan threw her dupatta on her and drinking his anger at once told her to leave….

Maan: geet .. just leave from here…

Geet didn't even touch that dupatta… she was not in her right mind… she was just thinking of her father.. his operation.. she doesn't know why he is denying.. when she herself is ready to commit a sin that will make her to loose what all she has… she will never be able meet her own eyes….

When he didn't saw her leaving.. he was actually turning his back towards her… suppressing his anger.. his guilt of loving a girl like her… he just wanted to leave… he can't even bear her presence now… she is pricking him like a deadly sharp pointed needle…

Maan roughly pulled her and threw her dupatta on her.. he showed her the door…

Maan: didn't you hear me miss geet handa.. just leave from here before I do something that we both will regret for the lifetime…

When she still didn't moved he himself started to leave when something caught him….

She pulled him to her.. his eyes were spitting fire.. she was actually confirming what he thought about her…he was about to leave.. when a soft shivering hand hold him…..

Geet: just do what you want… I need money….

The NEED .. the VULNERABILITY was there but not the repentance of any of the word uttered….

Maan's anger and his rage was attacking his intellect….

He roughly hold her hands.. and slapped her hard… .maan roughly pushed her on the bed….

However he didn't want anything now… but she was unleashing his demon side which now just want to give her the pain of the lifetime … his heart was crying… he didn't even want to think what she made him hear..

Strangely she didn't even feel the ache when he slapped her … no one has ever raise a hand on her.. but today when she openly told maan what she want he couldn't even hold himself…

The force with which maan threw her on bed.. hurted her.. her forehead hit the hard rim of the bed.. but not a single painful shreak came out of her mouth… the amount of pain .. and the enduring power was there in her that you can be amazed….

Maan: you want me geet… so let me give what you want.. after all you are no different from the girls who lusted on me…

Geet didn't said any single word she just want this to happen… everything to happen… maan pulled her to him.. she collided with him the trembling breath was fanning on his neck… he so much wanted to love her… but first the emotional bonding he always desired.. your love is not just fulfilling the physical desires.. but now the love he has somewhere is hurted to the limit of saturation that the ache of those hurted feelings is prominent in his life…. He cannot even help to take care of her … to be gentle with her even if he wants… this is true that A MAN s always over possessive about his love.. and here his love is in her depressed state is making him do what he never even dreamt off…..

She was all cold… it was like she knew what is going to happen next.. and now the fear was overpowering her senses…


Maan tore her zip.. and pulled off her kurti… geet herself wanted this to end so fast that she just surrendered herself to him… she was like a doll to him.. he can do anything with her play with her .. violate her.. just do what he wants… he pulled off his shirt.. his hands were warm which felt her cold skin on him… he was actually caressing her hairs and pulled her in a deep kiss… it was not gentle… he was nibbling and sucking her rose petal lips.. geet didn't know what to do… everything was on him… he tried to explore her mouth.. but she didn't open.. but maan's anger was towering his senses… he bit her lower lip making it bleed .. and entered her mouth…. She was buried under his weight…. His rock hard chest was pressing her firm breast… geet was feeling everything different… maan was devouring her.. he freed her lips and sucked her collarbone.. kissing her… both were not in their right sanity… he was although feeling terrible but his mind was telling her to make her learn a lesson…

Maan slowly completely undressed both… geet was already wet.. her cold body was getting warm.. even if she didn't want this but her body completely betrayed her… there was a strong lust that was growing in her… she didn't however respond to her touch mentally but him was getting her loose physically….

He sucked her and pained her bit her N****… her B*** were red with his anger… the love he wanted to make her feel was getting wild with his ministration… down below he was grinding her…

When maan looked at her feeling the sensations … it was like she was enjoying .. no regret on her face… he wanted to punish her .. not letting her feel… he suddenly penetrated in her… she was tight… and didn't first let enter him.. but the second powerful stroke made her to shuddered with the pain… tears were continuously falling… still maan didn't realize that he was the first and last guy with whom she was related intimately …

Seeing the tears… he conscience cursed him….

Maan : maan what have you done… your anger today had proved that you are the weakest person … to prove her right .. you lost yourself….

They were just in the same position … he was angry on himself ..and she was all lost… it was almost an hour .. didn't moved further but remained in the same position deep buried with her.. unfortunately the wrong is done… he filled his seeds in her… both had lost physically themselves in the era of deep pain ….

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice udpate
why can't geet just tell him her situation
maan is thinking he love wrong person
nd his in guilt by his act
nd geet she just sitting numb

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

nice udpate

why can't geet just tell him her situation
maan is thinking he love wrong person
nd his in guilt by his act
nd geet she just sitting numb



thankss
sometimes it is actually difficult to convey what we feel
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
geet surrendered herself to save her baba and maan in rage and guilt crossed all the barriers between them

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

Awesome part
geet surrendered herself to save her baba and maan in rage and guilt crossed all the barriers between them



thanksss yup
thats what happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just hate this i hope maan knows soon y geet did this, just to save her baba.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Don't know wht to say

Geet was totally depressed n was worried for her father life n want to save him at any cost

Maan in anger had crossed the limit

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
both lost them selves..
will maan knew he is the first n lost 4 her..
she did it 4 her father
will she become pregnant..i think so..
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet what did you do sweetie
wow she really loves her father doesnt she
she didnt even tell him the truth
she should have done
but whats the point if he alread thinks bad of her
he didnt trust her enough and for her looks like her father comes before anything else
oh maan you shall regret it
but hope its not too late by then
so sad seeing this right
well cant wait for more now

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